60388, Rhyme Check Posted by phelonious, Mon Sep-18-06 10:59 AM
Handing actually done this in a while.....just wanting to get some repsonses and possibly a few pointers...
I creatively crucify cowards Hand stitch their faces To their fingers Leave pain lingering From head to toe A full body blow Just as if they Ran in front of a Tractor trailer I'm a smooth sailor The metaphorical mariner Throwing 'em out at sea Giving no mercy The thirsty get 1000 leagues to swallow.. And 8 additional inches Wallow in your self pity I get grittier Than a John Grisham novel Too many rap cats are hollow But my poetic presence Make me a tough act to follow All these emcees are chimpanzees Flinging excrement Unable to properly Kill the beat like me Knifing it until It's leaking profusely You can't defuse me I'm a bag filled with C4 Waiting at your door.......
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