719681, It shouldn't have started with the future visions|
Posted by imcvspl, Mon Feb-13-17 08:07 AM
That really fucked the story up for me. Otherwise it was pretty awesome. If they had saved the future visions for when she actually started understanding the language it would have been completely solid.
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