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697372, not write unconvincing, cliched, juvenile dialogue
Posted by ternary_star, Thu May-07-15 12:42 PM
not present a main character doing an emotional 180 without any buildup or explanation.
not stuff two domestic subplots into an already over-long movie that do nothing to propel the narrative forward.
why did we need the Hulk-Widow romance? what did it do for the plot of this movie, besides being a naked attempt at throwing a bone to female audience members? same for the Hawkeye farmhouse scenes. how cliched and trite. we're supposed to suddenly feel more for him now that we see he has a generic sitcom family? it's just insultingly bad writing.
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