I'm a big Edmondson (Jake Ellis, Activity) fan, but this felt a lot... I dunno, sloppier than I expect from him. And not just the typos; the story itself and especially Anne's involvement seemed a little rushed or something. I was excited for this one, an author I really like taking on a different genre, but felt let down. I'd give it a B- to start but out of faith in the author will give #2 a shot before I jump ship.