i liked a lot of songs on /the sun's tirade/ but his rapping felt too loose and freestyle-ish. the lyricism was there but a bit unrefined and his delivery and structure were sloppy. a lot of half-singing too as i recall. however on /cilvia demo/ he said, "as the verbal appears it's reflecting my perspective," so maybe more writing isn't the way to go. perhaps there is a healthy balance he can achieve