2971625, Pretty sure you just copy/pasted but... Posted by Brew, Tue Aug-23-16 07:43 PM
A couple small corrections that help it read/flow better:
He spoke with his eyes, tear-filled A lump in his throat, his fear built My whole life it was instilled This ain't the way that men feel A feeling, he said he wish he could kill A feeling, not even time could heal This is how real life's supposed to be? For it to happen to someone close to me? So far we'd come, for him to tell me As he did, insecurity held me I felt like he failed me 'Til his spirit yelled "help me" I'd known him for like what seemed forever About going pro we dreamed together Never knew it would turn out like this For so long he tried to fight this Now there was no way for him to ignore it His parents found out and hated him for it How could I judge him? Had to accept him if I truly loved him No longer he said had he hated himself Through sexuality he liberated himself between me and you
>He spoke with his eyes, tear-filled >A lump in his throat, his fear built >My whole life it was in steel >This ain't the way that men feel >A feeling, he said he wish he could kill >A feeling, not even time could heal >This is how real life's supposed to be? >For it to happen to someone close to me? >So far we'd come, for him to tell me >As he did, insecurity held me >I felt like he failed me >To the spirit, yelled help me >I'd known him for like what seemed forever >About going pro we dreamed together >Never knew it would turn out like this >For so long he tried to fight this >Now there was no way for him to ignore it >His parents found out and hated him for it >How could I judge him? Had to accept him if I truly loved him >No longer he said had he hated himself >Through sexuality he liberated himself between me and you
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