the 1st part of your beat... i like the uptempo energy, but it sounds like a pre-programmed drum loop/drum break that comes w/ a software program. some of the the chops on the 1st part of your beat were cool, but that one extra little piano sample was a little out of tune w/ the rest.. so the first part was alright, but not my favorite.

now the 2nd part? that shit is dope. 1:57 thru the end... this is some cool shit. all it needs is some rhymes, and they'll see. haha..