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13461451, Excellent work
Posted by Lil Rabies, Fri May-27-22 11:00 AM
You are a good writer. You have a good balance of observation and personal and cultural references. You referenced Sheed appropriately. You shouldn’t stop writing even if you have finished criticism.
My take on white people not getting this album arose from a fumbled smart but dumb take in the symbolism of the cover. The radiators doesn’t mean anything. To me I understand that picture instantly, because I remember that point I my life and the reflections that I had to make to become a good father. I didn’t think Kendrick’s message would be so plain for what I perceived as a struggle that involved more than socioeconomic factors.