>I thought you did great, not sure how much time they let
>people have but I wished you went on a little more (maybe
>that's all the material you had for your first time, I guess
>you didn't want to wear out your welcome on your first go
>around if it wasn't going as planned).

that's all i had LOL but i'm writing a little more about dating married men...i wanna go deeper into that...and more into the experience of being 50, while avoiding cliches about aging as much as I can
>
>Anyway I liked it, loved the Chappelle joke, even if the
>audience didn't, lol; keep writing, you got the skills.

thanks and I agree its a good joke, but i gotta work the punchline better. the host of the show let out a late gaffaw, which I REALLY loved cuz he's a comic himself

>On a side note, what is the deal with this spot "Bomb
>Shelter", is it always outside, the outside noise was kind of
>annoying.
>
yeah its always in his backyard. if it were indoors, i don't think i would go, quite honestly LOL

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