I thought you did great, not sure how much time they let people have but I wished you went on a little more (maybe that's all the material you had for your first time, I guess you didn't want to wear out your welcome on your first go around if it wasn't going as planned).

Anyway I liked it, loved the Chappelle joke, even if the audience didn't, lol; keep writing, you got the skills.

On a side note, what is the deal with this spot "Bomb Shelter", is it always outside, the outside noise was kind of annoying.