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12853025, Critique this photo please. Posted by lightworks, Tue Jul-14-15 11:55 AM
https://instagram.com/p/5H66xLkwuG/
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12853033, RE: Critique this photo please. Posted by WarriorPoet415, Tue Jul-14-15 11:58 AM
Clean lines from the railing and terrace roof create visual tension drawing your eye to the center of the frame and the couple. Good job there.
Could have been cropped as there is not a lot going on in the NE quadrant of the photo. The plane is unnecessary.
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12853069, RE: Critique this photo please. Posted by MEAT, Tue Jul-14-15 12:13 PM
What's the story? Why are her arms behind her back What's he talking about Are they leaving a show or going to dinner How frequently are the airplanes flying over
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12853086, few things Posted by double negative, Tue Jul-14-15 12:20 PM
-muddy blacks/dark areas. her shirt reads as a solid block of black and there is no distinction between his red shirt and pants.
-compositionally the white/light guard rail jams right into the male figure breaking up the whole image into a giant "C" shape
-if you were to crop the image down to a an equal amount of space from the subjects feet to the bottom of the image to the top of their heads to the top of the image then the image would be stronger and the pattern on the floor tends to pop way harder than before doing so then also brings up the play thats happening between the light hand rail on the right side and light roofline on the left cropping would also forgive the issue I mentioned above about the rail jamming into the male figure
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