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13259615, Could not stay awake
Posted by bentagain, Mon May-21-18 12:37 PM
A couple of language changes would have been more compelling

Eels = immigrants
Graffiti = anything other than graffiti

I wasn't buying MBJ's conflict with his character's life path

Felt very rushed

...I'm a 3rd generation firefighter...but this book I kept has me reconsidering my entire existence...

The movie needed to build up to that.