47379, RE: Got a new beat or song? Want people to listen? Put it right here.
Posted by DJ Schwann, Fri Jul-08-11 09:41 AM
I'm not feelin this. Your lyrics don't really do anything to stand out to me. They were very typical, and I felt as though you sounded like you were trying way too hard to sound tough on the track.
I did like the instrumentals you posted, nice work on those. Your beats have some potential, your rapping needs some work still.
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-DJ Schwann
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