>Once you get to the jelly, I like it. I think you take a
>little too long to get there, but that's me.
>
>I'd also fatten up the patch for the chord that leads right
>into the "chorus" - right now, that patch sounds fine as an
>ominous single lead, but it comes off a little thin for a full
>chord.
>
>My $.02; I could be wrong.
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>Tony "Keynote" Sebro
>http://beats.jahrockn.com

Very solid feed back. Thanks Keynote