45592, RE: "Jupiter" Pharrell style Beat Posted by keynote, Fri Jun-11-10 02:17 AM
Once you get to the jelly, I like it. I think you take a little too long to get there, but that's me.
I'd also fatten up the patch for the chord that leads right into the "chorus" - right now, that patch sounds fine as an ominous single lead, but it comes off a little thin for a full chord.
My $.02; I could be wrong. ------------------ Tony "Keynote" Sebro http://beats.jahrockn.com
|