This is cool. The bass is poppin nicely. I'm just not crazy about the hook. Like it could be stronger, both in the lyrics and delivery. Maybe it's just me. I'm also judging you on a national standard. This is very professional sounding, and I know you got the potential to blow. But if I were a label I'd say the single needs to be stronger, more fun to sing along to.

I love the verses tho, and that beat is thick.

Take it for what it's worth.

Peace.