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90272, RE: I am the other director.
Posted by Colin, Fri Jul-07-06 02:32 AM
this sounds very much like a good suggestion...
You should definitely use the close up of the eyeball on the table first. It's insignificant introducing that in the wide shot.
It cuts too quickly to the eyeball on the table. We need a few more beats of Silkline reading or ideally reacting to the monster's arrival- if we even shot that.
that part didn't work well as it is now.
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