...what was your intention with this film? What were you trying to do/say with this? Also, since you appear to be so unhappy with the film, what do you intend on changing in future drafts of the final cut?

I'll say without any further in-depth analysis (which I can type out in the next couple of days, when I'm not nearly so sleepy) that there is plenty of good groundwork here for an extremely interesting if nothing else short film. I'm curious as to the answers of my questions.

That being said, after seeing your film and Ryan's, I'm REALLY starting to think that I should go into acting.