people's problem was that it was two movies awardly crammed into one. What you just wrote there is the first act setting up a movie about a guy whose life falls apart but he then decides to make money impregnating women. We have the inciting action, and he gets into the main action of the movie (knicking up lesbians) from which the hijinks/complications ensue.

But in She Hate Me, that was like half of the film. And then the second half went in a completely different direction. The movie didn't work for me and was poorly conceived (no pun intended). I didn't find it compelling at all which made the mish-mashed plot lines all the more tedious.