I have two comments. Honest comments.

1) The situations in the book are hilarious. REALLY funny. I was cracking up on the LIRR train back from Manhattan, and getting stared at. It's a solid B+ book. Funny. Escapism (not for me, though).

2) The writing style in the book seems to be better suited for the net. The speaking voice jumps from first person to second person to omniscient, and the tense jumps back and forth between present ("this is what's happening right now!") to and past tense("you won't believe what happened today!").

But that's it. Otherwise, it's a pretty good read.


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