I guess I didn't tie up all the loose ends.

I honestly don't know what to do with the Mau Mau.

During the laughing, show a small clip of Manray's partner working on the street again... but he's alright, you know, he's okay.

Somehow, I'd have a clip of Pierre trashing all the mannequins and statues in his office, and then sinking into his chair... his tv comes on, to play clips from the montage, and he's just sort of sinks into a puddle of tears.

Finally, Jada's character. For some reason I want to make her leave the city, go far away. Just up and leave. I can't really justify this much, I don't know that it's part of her character, but it just seems really appropriate, because she was essentially the more solid character throughout - she just couldn't take it anymore, and she realizes her own hypocrisy in working on the show at all.

These tie-ups are kind of crappy... I'd have to work on it more.

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