9948, RE: declarations and decisions Posted by Sunday, Wed Jan-31-01 12:43 PM
you've chiseled these words out and shaped them expertly... literally, you're bringin the pain in this to life... me as my own tormentor... very strong, very true idea... poetically, it holds together perfectly... making the transition from one line to the next, from one stanza to the next, very smoothly. excellent work, really.
sunny
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