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Topic subjectRE: Eternity's Half-Life A CollaboPoem by Boon and Anit
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8477, RE: Eternity's Half-Life A CollaboPoem by Boon and Anit
Posted by delrica, Thu Jun-20-02 07:50 PM
WOW!

Here are my favorite stanzas from the two of you.

>(Boon)
>
>In these dreams, nature provides
>the soundtrack as I splash through
>future's promise filled puddles.
>I cup my hands and dip them deep
>into Maya's left-over tears.
>I drink deep- never wanting to wake
>from this dream of washed away yesterdays
>
>Please don't shake my shoulder
>and disturb me. Cause tonight's dream
>is so much more
>pleasing than the reality
>I awake to.

>
>(Anita J)
>
>though my wishes remain the same,
>still i arise every morning to the same
>adversities. So I 've learned to change
>my perception of the reality I exist
>
>within presently to see that life is
>what you make of it, now you choose
>to percieve and recieve it up to a
>degree, up to an extent, there isn't
>
>anyone who could make you unfree
>because no one could steal your
>spiritual soul away from yourself,
>your physical body.

from there isn't onward is a very powerful line/thought. reminds me some things that have flown through my head. i can't wait to see what ya'll do next! go head! :D