8477, RE: Eternity's Half-Life A CollaboPoem by Boon and Anit Posted by delrica, Thu Jun-20-02 07:50 PM
WOW!
Here are my favorite stanzas from the two of you.
>(Boon) > >In these dreams, nature provides >the soundtrack as I splash through >future's promise filled puddles. >I cup my hands and dip them deep >into Maya's left-over tears. >I drink deep- never wanting to wake >from this dream of washed away yesterdays > >Please don't shake my shoulder >and disturb me. Cause tonight's dream >is so much more >pleasing than the reality >I awake to.
> >(Anita J) > >though my wishes remain the same, >still i arise every morning to the same >adversities. So I 've learned to change >my perception of the reality I exist > >within presently to see that life is >what you make of it, now you choose >to percieve and recieve it up to a >degree, up to an extent, there isn't > >anyone who could make you unfree >because no one could steal your >spiritual soul away from yourself, >your physical body.
from there isn't onward is a very powerful line/thought. reminds me some things that have flown through my head. i can't wait to see what ya'll do next! go head! :D
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