We worked on a Free write poem together on Tuesday, hope y'all dig it. "Hey Anita, thanks for helping me break my drought"

(Boon)

Life is full of collaborations.
Toes and fingers work together
for the common good, and aid the
mover, the shaker.
A butterfly has two wings, two antennae
and two forms ( before and after metamorphosis).

I am not who I used to be
Not who I strive to be
but on my journey, I've had
help along the way.

I was born of a collaboration,
between two forms filled with Love,
and Hope, and purpose, and
identities that existed long
before I dubbed them Mommy and Daddy.

(Anita)

Possibilities descend upon our skies
like tempest clouds before rainstorms
appear to wash away yesterday's woes.

We stretch our hands to the downpour
and are strenghtened by Maya's tears.

I sing a song of oneness in my dreams
beyond this world's barriers and multitude
of limitations. In my dreams, we all can
smile and be happy, loving one another.

(Boon)

In these dreams, nature provides
the soundtrack as I splash through
future's promise filled puddles.
I cup my hands and dip them deep
into Maya's left-over tears.
I drink deep- never wanting to wake
from this dream of washed away yesterdays

Please don't shake my shoulder
and disturb me. Cause tonight's dream
is so much more
pleasing than the reality
I awake to.

(Anita J)

though my wishes remain the same,
still i arise every morning to the same
adversities. So I 've learned to change
my perception of the reality I exist

within presently to see that life is
what you make of it, now you choose
to percieve and recieve it up to a
degree, up to an extent, there isn't

anyone who could make you unfree
because no one could steal your
spiritual soul away from yourself,
your physical body.

(Boon)

And when I depart from
this shell, this body...
Someone sing a song for my soul.

Make it loud and long
so it lasts till eternity,
that's how long I'll be gone.



Simplicity of character is the natural result of profound thought.

Well done yous 2! ...great to see a collab up on here again ;-)
you really vibe well with each other.
I've picked out a favourite stanza or two from you both;

>(Anita)
>
>Possibilities descend upon our skies
>like tempest clouds before rainstorms
>appear to wash away yesterday's woes.
>
>
>I sing a song of oneness in my dreams
>beyond this world's barriers and multitude
>of limitations. In my dreams, we all can
>smile and be happy, loving one another.
>
>(Boon)
>
>In these dreams, nature provides
>the soundtrack as I splash through
>future's promise filled puddles.
>I cup my hands and dip them deep
>into Maya's left-over tears.
>I drink deep- never wanting to wake
>from this dream of washed away yesterdays
>
>Please don't shake my shoulder
>and disturb me. Cause tonight's dream
>is so much more
>pleasing than the reality
>I awake to.
>

'Please let me wake up one day
and find myself found.' - Kathryn Williams

'the mighty multi-nationals
have monopolized the oxygen,
making it as easy as breathing
for us all to participate.' - Ani DiFranco

'my purpose is to make my soul rhyme with my mind' - Saul Williams

Awwww...you put our freewrite on the board...i'm touched **:)**

'specially since this was a freewrite collabo that i really ended up liking...it's nice to have inspiration from other sources so I thank you for bringing it out of me and if i aided you in any way, you are mos' def welcome...;)
we'll prolly be back with another one...stay tuned. :)

i'm really really likin' this.. yall both are beautiful people..

"And when I depart from
this shell, this body...
Someone sing a song for my soul.

Make it loud and long
so it lasts till eternity,
that's how long I'll be gone."

loved the whole piece.. the rhythm of it.. but the above lines quoted made me smile..

what more can i say...
cept maybe
thank you
-me ps. u juss got saved onto my harddrive, pleezbaleevit
keep being creators, and u shall be given the opportunity2create
god bless.

When It Rains it Pours! I concur with Wildout!

Keep it thorough,

PG

WOW!

Here are my favorite stanzas from the two of you.

>(Boon)
>
>In these dreams, nature provides
>the soundtrack as I splash through
>future's promise filled puddles.
>I cup my hands and dip them deep
>into Maya's left-over tears.
>I drink deep- never wanting to wake
>from this dream of washed away yesterdays
>
>Please don't shake my shoulder
>and disturb me. Cause tonight's dream
>is so much more
>pleasing than the reality
>I awake to.

>
>(Anita J)
>
>though my wishes remain the same,
>still i arise every morning to the same
>adversities. So I 've learned to change
>my perception of the reality I exist
>
>within presently to see that life is
>what you make of it, now you choose
>to percieve and recieve it up to a
>degree, up to an extent, there isn't
>
>anyone who could make you unfree
>because no one could steal your
>spiritual soul away from yourself,
>your physical body.

from there isn't onward is a very powerful line/thought. reminds me some things that have flown through my head. i can't wait to see what ya'll do next! go head! :D

The two of you flowed very well together...looking forward to more! Loved these lines right here...


Possibilities descend upon our skies
like tempest clouds before rainstorms
appear to wash away yesterday's woes.

...beautiful!!!