is the elusive perfect example of fiction through poetry that i've been looking for

it has the feel of fiction- a great story line and everything

but it uses the poetry medium and all its tools perfectly

i feel like i just read a good short story, but actually i just read a great poem

i love the honest tone of this, too. the innocense of it. the degree of reflection. the character development. the god analogy. the way you varied line length.

i could read books of this stuff, for real. ever thought about writing a book of poetic fiction? a book of short "stories"?