o.k. i'm thinking a few things on this. it's title couldn't do anything else but capture my attention, that's a good thing. then i started reading and started to wonder exactly what was going on (its purpose) and for the life of me i couldn't get it. so perhaps you'd want to give me some insight. but i kept on reading and it captured me even more... it became a story and i wanted to reach its climax and read its ending. i was pleased and impressed. overall it turned out a lot different than i expected (i thought it would be some self-praise on everything that you know that the rest of us don't). i liked its texture and its individual life. good piece.