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>no, i lost paradise the day i exceeded god.
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this was fine work. for some reason, it felt strangely familiar, particularly the tone of this line and the way you end the piece . . . as Fone would say, perhaps I might have "encountered" it some other time. at any rate, very nice.

i'm curious what became of the father/son relationship beyond that.

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If you would like to know what men are, then you should be a woman. If you would like to know what women are, then you should ask God. - Jacob Lorenz