6693, RE: god's son Posted by LAconic, Mon Jan-13-03 12:16 PM
This is a really beautiful and touching piece- really, you had me sniffling there for a second. I liked this part and the ending line the best:
his middle name wasn't "h." but it might as well have been for all the hell through which i put him and all the hell from which he thought he was saving me.
my god was true and livin' he was blue from livin' that by-your-collar, stretch-your-dollar, clock-punchin', shift-rotatin', 7 days on-2 days off existence.
Thanks for posting that for us all to enjoy!!!!
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