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6509, SLAM TOURNEY: ROUND ONE Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:31 PM
aight, whats up poets and emcees, the day has finally arrived. thank you everyone for participating and being patient.
RULES:
There are no restrictions. I want everyone to come hard with their style so write as you normally would. (This will change for ROUND TWO)
You and your partner will combine styles to create ONE PIECE of work. You may to this in many ways:
PARTNER A: 1 longer verse. PARTNER B: 1 longer verse.
or
PARTNER A: 1 short verse PARTNER B: 1 short verse PARTNER A: 1 short verse PARTNER B: 1 short verse
or
PARTNER A: 1 line PARTNER B: 1 line and so on...
This is entirely up to you. Let your style shine. We want fire, not sparks. There is no line limit but take in mind there is a lot to read so pick QUALITY over QUANTITY.
ROUND ONE: ONE piece from TEAM A (Partner A/Partner B) ~VERSUS~ ONE piece from TEAM B (Partner A/Partner B)
THIS IS A COLLAB TOURNEY and the team that embraces teamwork to the fullest will win. LISTEN to your partner, take suggestions, leave your ego outta this. Rookies, listen to your VETS because most of them have participated in tourney's and know what they are talking about. We are all equal, but experience is knowledge. Do not forget this, another key to success.
IMPORTANT: YOU MUST indicate which verse or words belong to you, and your partner must do the same. Try to have a roughly equal amount, this is very important.
Write with passion. You may begin NOW! get those pens and make fire. Find your battle below and respond to THAT thread. DO NOT HIT REPLY TO THIS MESSAGE. I have provided the topic and a qoute for inspiration and knowledge. Please only post your work when it is complete. Between you and your partner, have one of you post the final piece. Use your inbox, use email, make sure this is fire and take the full time period to do this.
ROUND ONE IS ONE WEEK LONG AND WILL CONCLUDE NEXT WEEK FRIDAY: January 17th, 2003.
peace.
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6510, 1) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:32 PM
9) KnowOne jacostyle
vs
14) PG I_Am_Brewedsosweetly
TOPIC:
GOD - "Kill them all. God will easily recognize his own." Amalric: To simon de Montfort, at the massacre at Beziers, 1209.
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6511, Religious Peroxide Posted by KnowOne, Sat Jan-18-03 04:41 AM
When I was a kid, I thought it was cool the way the peroxide bubbled and foamed when it was poured on a cut to clean it. Later in random science classes I learned that it doesn't just kill the germs and pathogens. It Kills Everything. The whole basis of its cleaning power is the simple assumption that: There are more of your own cells, than there are of the pathogen. So simply, kill all of it until the bad stuff is dead, and there's still some of you left. How much, though, is left to be seen.
KnowOne:
Religious Peroxide
sirens sang of sebacles to this cultic congregation. alluring songs of lust and luster; water splashing into blind eyes. never seeing past the guise while on their knees begging "o' gawd pleez may the ghosts come down and purge this dirty host." ever so full of the parasites the truth ebbing away at their insanity, weakening slow. little mites that bite and gnaw the deep sinew of the lifebeat so raw as the ghosts come down and purify the body of all its ills as a wound thats filled with peroxide. and the men then knew. the ghosts had lied, watching as their children died. the once righteous denomination has now ensured certain condemnation, as the water drains from their eyes and they find their way through their own torturous demise.
jacostyle:
What's the meaning of being religious? Is it a ritual, a need to get up, make a fuss is it defeating dishonesty, pride, greed and lust? Is it up to us? What does it mean when we say "In God We Trust?" When I think on the topic I sometimes feel hushed- it's humility that quiets me, to speak honestly I felt weak to see that the topic was He. how could I not be when I think on his Glory? Without him I'd be incomplete like a sheep without fleece or an aunt without a niece or a child without father, in the desert without water, He's the one who inspires martyrs, hires friars, forgives liars, my lord and Sire, and when times get dire it's to him I turn and from him I learn a lot and I conclude with this thought: It's from him that I get any skill be it big be it lil be it weak be it ill If I win it's through him if I lose it's his will.
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6512, 2) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:32 PM
5) 3rd i Semplisstech
vs
7) TheAnthology! Sampaquita
TOPIC:
FREEDOM - "Freedom" is a grand word, but under the banner of Free Trade the most predatory wars were conducted; under the banner of "free labor" the toliers were robbed." - V.I. Lenin: What is to be done?
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6513, The Accent on Free... Posted by ThaAnthology, Tue Jan-21-03 10:46 AM
We are part of this continuum Interpreting through sound-writing And the copulation of consonants & vowels Griot passions erupt Extracting formulas & equations Exposing ideologies & intuition Reaching out & forward To open souls
For some may call us fools or even naďve Expressing this Love Even when reciprocity isn’t guaranteed So we ignore despair Forfeit certitudes And allow ourselves To sometimes suffer To go through sorrow Aspiring to create something Coz nothing does nothing, is nothing Becomes nothing, when you risk nothing
We are God's highest choir pronouncing love through baby's breath We are the solstice which illuminates productivity conclusively we be
irr-a-ga-ting thought through sound with profound connectivity Right Minds in Left Ashes riding coattails of M-Dashes Universal translators with our past procreating your future so ascend with us dear people glide into ideas and find them fitting a comfortable consort to awkward agendas
Be we with words as we be air with sound be us as ours be with freestyles be poets, emcees philosophers without fear be whoever you be- with the accent on free
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6514, RE: The Accent on Free... Posted by Semplisstech, Thu Jan-23-03 11:57 AM
Freedom lost...In the form of an aborted fetus (this is a 1 on 2...because 3rd i said she'd be able to compete, she just said at the last minute for me to finish the whole thing....so this is all Semplisstech)
The environment around me seems sheltered and tranquil Heard talk of how she wished she had taken the pill Peaceful, balled up waiting for my next meal When all of a sudden panic is the only thing I feel My host's heart begins to race Never experiecnced this short life of mine at this furious pace Thumbs and fingers press my living space Seemed that an unfavorable future is what I'd surely face Just wish that my point of view could be clearly seen Shortly my life would be gone, but so would her self esteem
Clinical nurses seemed as ominous as executioners Figured she want to end my life, so she wouldn't waste hers I could sense that with tears, her eyes began to swell up When the doc said "Point them knees high and get those legs up" The opening in my life cell was now overcome by illumination For this moment in her life that would never see erasing Bit my tounge, swallowed pride...as she prepared for the strife I'm barely 16 weeks concieved, why am I seeing the end of life?
Instruments grabbed my near formed foot, felt sharp and cold Clamped around the heel cause I had yet to grow toes Then in one fierce jerk and pull to the south The air stung my body as I opened my mouth Gasping for a breath which was rightfully mine But my brain waves and heart rate were quickly falling behind Fear turned to anger as I saw my mothers eyes She seemed shocked for certain, how could this be a surprise YOU MADE ME, now, I'm being taken from this earth I hope you live every day questioning your self worth Right before my eyes closed I heard her say she felt sore She'd wont ever know the feeling of death on a hospital floor It killed me to know, that with this last thought of my own With one office visit she turned my beating heart to stone.....
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6515, RE: 2) P.S. Posted by Sampaguita, Tue Jan-21-03 12:26 PM
Sampaguita - (1-8) & (9-19) ThaAnthology - (20-26) & (27-40) & (41-48)
Enjoy Everybody!
Peace & One
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6516, 3) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:33 PM
11) wolfie MiracleRic
vs
6) limbic_system Untitled
TOPIC:
MAN - "Men are especially intolerant of servings and being ruled by, their equals." - Beneditc Spinoza
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6517, 4) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:33 PM
10) Warlock eternalist
vs
12) Asiem Sailbomber
TOPIC:
REVOLUTION - "Revolutions, as a long and bitter experience reveals, are apt to take their color from the regime they overthrow." - Richard H. Tawney: The Acquisitive Society
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6518, 5) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:34 PM
4) rubbersoulonice gsquared
vs
1) Instant Axis LaXyDaZiCaL
TOPIC:
MIRACLE - "To aim to convert a man by miracles is a profanation of the soul." - Ralph Waldo Emerson: Nature
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6519, miracles.... Posted by LaXyDaZiCaL, Wed Jan-15-03 09:33 AM
-Miracles- Talkin to God
Instant Axis-
word ayo 34th street dialect jumpin hurdles watchin my frame sweat..............im lookin for somethin, ayo somethin deliver me heaven without chains holdin my body, huggin my frame, promises go unnoticed, i need, i need,......................graspin my head swollen dedicated hard workin but constantly foldin/let me switch on the motion____________________________________
i need a rare feed, rare find untouched jewel the struggle hits me like instant impact im talkin impact of a screamin fly touchin up a winshield god needs to drop some supernatural shit my way spontaneous, make it happen for me bad credit never existed.........did it?
word ayo, take me out the trenches heavy breath fist clecnhin, teeth grinding feels like the twin towers im benchin.........collpased, relasped, reformed, everything surrounds my head like irritating families on new borns/
somethins gotta give i need that unexplained phenomenon you aint gotta explain that shit just bless me bless me im standin on the frontline numerous times neck stickin out, head use to stand upright you got me hunched over lookin for this that just might be my problem tho wrong direction gotta stand erect feel free to slap me at ya own will
LaXyDaZiCal- son, its your pops and i hear ya plea/ but it seems ya forget theres more then the scene your eye can see/ im sorry for the days when the path feels longer, but the ends and outs you endure were designed to make ya stonger, and i never forget my kids.....
Perhaps you need guidance or a breeze to blaze your embers rendering kings helpless beside myself, your's self, centered what you looking for? a check to fall from the sky and leave ya paid? askin for the massive, but you ignore the little aids ive made
and when the goin gets tough, the tough get smart~ eyes on the prize, but you dont realize where to start... instincts, you in deep, and NOW you get spiritual/ but if i gave em to everyone you wouldnt call it a m________...
From guadalupe to fatima to my very kid's heads to sunrises, sunsets, to sons born in hospital beds ive supplied more if you could just uncover the masks ive been given you em before you even started to ask so while you slam stacks to kills anxiety attacks i aint gonna slap ya wit it, more so pat ya on the back Black, so no more grief, dreams come true if you believe. but more importantly: ask and you shall recieve
-Miracles-
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6520, RE: 5) Posted by gsquared, Fri Jan-17-03 02:06 PM
Uncle Climax: MIRACLE - "To aim to convert a man by miracles is a profanation of the soul." - Ralph Waldo Emerson: Nature
the thing came up out of the ground uproarious audacious prideful a head dressed in angelwing feathers a body that sits on the tongue and dissolves in the presence of saliva
the wings were pruned preened prickly and obscene to the commonman
shone little glints tiny millions offshooting from a bigbang of light out of dark deep mantle earth sliding slithering corpus its wings for show its body a buffer its tail wrapped the sky around the azure bubble the long white ethereal tentacle explicated its own grace smirking, using the mere sky as a backdrop to the spectacle
it granted clemency gained strength with every set of eyes that witnessed and believed in the same instantaneity of glance and enveloped usurped and threw away titles and epithets swarming the earth as if a trillion tiny gnats gadflies jerking into and out of noses ears eyes mouths until all men recognized its mass its sheer elegance its unfuckwitablitity because its propensity for provoking souls to see power within transformed profundity to profanity in a reflex
i enjoy long night walks on pacific oceans wearing moonbeam slippers tussling with tidal waves replacing current events with currents purging spirits sincerity gauging placing pedestals on pedastals just so they can measure up to me racing with the sun to see who can praise who, extol the other's virtue to the greater degree hereaftergrapplers who've won wave to me thankfully as i pass them, having touched them, taking shits on their contemporaries' customs and paying them with my graces in one lump sum
I'm the one of a kind too sublime to be mentioned without mentioning Him cuz I'm Him drunk in cheap bottles of gin I'm in grins that ascend and become whirlwinds that turn tides and burn pride when i've come and then i've gone you live just to learn why g2: I never die
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6521, 6) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:34 PM
13) the light dolce
vs
3) DanjaRuss BarTek
TOPIC: SALVATION - "Three things are necessay for the salvation of man: to know what he ought to believe; to know what he ought to desire; and to know what he ought to do." - St. Thomas Aquinas: Two Precepts of Charity.
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6522, SALVATION - BARTEK/DANJARUSS Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-17-03 04:39 PM
Bartek: the city block, riddled with concrete and mechanical trees, women and men with no place to go fill the side streets and contemplate hope, salvation heated in spoons hands out eviction notices where purity once lived, glass tubes, clean like washed windows reflect images of burnin traditions, salvation is not without rituals, what is salvation? a new born babe openin her eyes to the world escapin her cacophony of tissue, a dying man countin every beat his heart is etching into his chest cage, holdin his walking stick in amazement thankful for these last days in the park, observin young families pushin strollers, a new generation of philosophers discussin such concepts as to send this old man to his death bed,
where does salvation begin? on the surface of our skin where mosquito's drink? or the sky, touched by the breeze flowin in smoke like patterns as mother earth prepares for her bath, rivatlizing her children with showers, buddin flowers turning their shy faces to be kissed by the sunlight, opening their arms welcoming the dialest spoken by singing birds and rustling leaves, perhaps salvation lurks in natural places, like this.
journeying my cerebral path eating from the vines of positivity and love, perhaps salvation here, is no more, perhaps it just becomes life, i cannot be sure for i have not stayed this road long enough to truly understand, or maybe salvation is just tryin my best, hmmmm, i am thinking... creating rivers and beautiful sands muddying my perception with rising hands, swaying to the rythm of beat rumbling in the stomach of storm clouds marchin across the sky transporting life in their arms, i, under the watchful eye of the moon find salvation in my burnin beedie playing with smoke patterns and stars, picking the sky apart, creating geometrical shapes in awe of the precise placement, i aspire to be an architect, i dream of buildin temples in the sky connectin life from one seed to the next, here is where i shall store my salvation, away from the reach of unworthy hands, away from. bloodbaths. lust. sigh. i dare dream this dream tonight, and someday when i have left my breath behind in my final exhale, i shall release my soul in this gasp, embracin the likness of a storm cloud, i shall send wet kisses to mother earth's flower bed where my body rests, yes, this shall be my salvation.
DanjaRuss: In the lane well trodden by memories’ feet I stand beside my failed potential, staring at The mirror image of the man I claimed to be.. For Destiny’s broken promises was never pain to me , Too cold to appreciate the warmth of the ‘morrow’s sun My salvation swiftly ended the second it had begun
And where does salvation end? At the tip of the last whisper of a dying promise? In a world where holy wars pay homage to ungodly losses? Or at the core of an Axis of Evil that an unsteady globe revolves on? It’s winter..and I’ve got my gloves on, Screaming “Fuck the World!”..before second thoughts could fornicate with nostalgic pussies giving birth to past sins..
Can a lost soul be saved before it is found? Submerged in the lord’s baptism at the spot where faith drowned…I saw salvation in the eyes of my yet to be born son.. even with mistakes clinging to his toddler curious grasp, my future laying within the lanes crisscrossed along his palms.. where memories slowly crawled.. chasing salvation
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6523, RE: 6) Posted by the Light, Mon Jan-20-03 11:52 AM
Fuck it, I'll post on my own. :-)
"There must be some kind of way out of here" said the joker to the thief with steadfast belief that he could climb through fear's loopholes as he does inebriated through windows desperate not to disturb floorboards or nightmares Everyday cares dare not arise whilst his craving for deliverance wears its nicotine patch he argues, "I would not need saving if I knew what I ought to do" Theories spew in determined defence of his case but propensity for pessimism permeates previously protected passages, where action potentials pace impatiently searching for their cerebral hotel rooms
He, searching fetal positioned behind bathroom door hide and seeking salvation from something still unsure Back of his mind the playground and his hiding place- The sun has always found frost hiding in the tree's shadow
You cannot hide from what does not disappear
Death is escape from life's perpetual fear yet too self-aware of selfishness surrounding suicide he regresses to a time when closed eyes equalled invisibility world blind to emotional tides Fingers pushed over eyelids kept him occupied creating colours temporarily serving to numb the mind He always knew they lied-
Distraction is not salvation
And he cannot be delivered from his own manifestation.
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6524, 7) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:35 PM
2) Foneticcus Wonluv41life
vs
8) guerilla_love backbone_flute
TOPIC:
LUST - "IT (lust) subverts kingdoms, overthrows cities, towns, families; mars, corrupts and makes a massacre of men; thunder and lightning, wars, fires, plagues, have not done that mischief as this burning lust, this brutish passion." - Robert Burton: The Anatomy of Melancholy
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6525, . . .::A Boy with Fingers:.. . . Posted by backbone_flute, Fri Jan-17-03 07:14 PM
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/1173339 we posted our poem here to preserve the spacing and indentations.
*lines flute (1-11, 26-33) g_love (12-25)
peace, ~p~
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6526, 8) Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:35 PM
15) LaDeeDeF_99 Pairawyze
vs
16) jayare214 Ezzsential
TOPIC:
GHOST - "I almost believe we are all of us ghosts! It is not only what we have inherited from our father and mother that haunts us. It is all sorts of old, dead ideas, all kinds of old, dead beliefs, and so forth. Thay have no life, yet they cleave to us, and we cannot shake ourselves free from them." - Henrik Ibsen: Ghosts
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6527, _______GHOSTS CHAPTER ONE!__________________________ Posted by Pairawyze, Thu Jan-16-03 10:48 PM
GHOSTS (PART I) - by Pairawyze
Revived/ the past comes alive/ with every breath we take/ why?/ do the ghosts haunt our minds with everlasting hate/ or do they teach us, wait!/ investigate I must/ as I recall the past/ I blow off the pages to free the dust...
at last
I'm taken into a world that's hidden/ one outside the living/ the ghosts have ruled this place/ with ever morbid grace/ I'm smitten by an amazing presence/ it's Napoleon and Hitler/ playing a deck of cards against Lenin the hero of the peasants/ inviting me to the forth chair while I haven't even realized the essence/ of this chapter, it says here, "these gamblers always bring disaster"/ "every time I'm summoned after", joking leader said in laughter/ "I bring new hate in men but from a different standpoint/ and as they played on/ there something that my argument was based on/ "why did you guys waste so many faces, gone?"/ "it's in the cards," said Lenin, "I'm but a messanger, a pawn"/ "just play along son and it will dawn"/ and with that phrase the game was won/ by somone else/ I flipped page one/ what was the reason wars were spawned/ was it the same ghosts on and on?/ repeating what they knew was wrong/ it couldn't be true so I lifted my head and took another view/
as I looked all around me I knew it was true/ history would repeat and there was nothing I could do/ a neverending brew/ that's why I flow with thoughts anew/ I'll battle ghosts untill I'm blue/ untill the last cell in my mind has withered dead my wit expired/ I'll keep a watchfull eye for thee/ until my heart stops beating tired/ I'm back to make things right again/ but I choose to save the book from fire/
and flip the hourglass of timeless sand...
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6528, Ghosts.Chapter2.it doesn't end here. Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Fri Jan-17-03 10:30 AM
time is a force that pushes and pulls that pushes and shoves time will wear the strongest man down to grains of sand
the agents of time's warchest...are ghosts
being molded and shaped by history carving into my personality forming that chip on my shoulder has taught me that we are indeed all ghosts ghosts of the past living in the present anticipating the future
we live in these moments clinging to life rushing from nowhere hoping to get somewhere we really are wanderers with leftover spirits and no destination
ghosts come out at night ghosts come out to haunt ghosts come out to remind that your errors of the past will surface and like the sun burning off the morning fog a revelation will come and pierce through your blissful arrogance if you do not learn from ghosts
over-confidence will not scare away these ghosts ghosts feed off of insecurities looking into mirrors and admiring your reflection will only multiply your ghosts and morph them into demons
learn humility learn to bow learn to give real advice resist the temptation to elevate yourself so high that you have no choice but to shout to those below shouting will only arouse your ghosts from their slumber
and sleepless nights with ghosts circling in your thoughts will make sanity insane
(writer's note: id like to say peace to my partner,Pairawyze. thanks for your hard work. best of luck in the future)
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6529, conscious ghost Posted by Ezzsential, Fri Jan-17-03 10:50 AM
EZzSenTiaL:
Non-existent subliminal imperial Surreal hardens and shells vague material Somewhat a conscious weakening Speaking to me throughout the layers of midnight Popping through transparent skin Needling slithering illuminated fingertips Dripping penmanship fear to guilt's choir Callused in haunting art These shivering fiends Seethe and mate to the asphalts steaming pallets of memory Slamming from the spatulas Slabs are angry and glowing… ambidextrous with their meddling Reaching from many angles .. they bangle the plot to taint me Readily simmering pots of sewage within thoughts nucleus Placed in the center plates of pumping hearts mural Rotating condensely in wombs bruising with time Spirits dart their flames out from the crevices of Hands formed to steeples and cathedrals Hovering still… they wait… with packets of laughter and flavor crystals of shrills Chuckling hollow betrayal as black as funerals lifeless and distraught …ashy mouths filled with a film Sticky and bellowing Squeaky organ barnotes Routing as riot signs.. . multiplying to stadium filled intimidation Rising their vice in matted white transparency Bubbling wild eyes arrow Piercing and sinister Beating bones of skeletons Pocketing pain as blisters
jayare214:
ghosts of the past haunting my path daunting with wrath of god type fury fear flesh burnt to the ash and all that remains on these urban landscapes of pain are the seperated spirits of slain these streets aim to take us under swallow us whole ghosts hover over faded chalk outlines at times you can see the souls holding court on corners where they met their last days over debts or dugs mistakes or just they fast ways living for cash dying for nothin never looked back cuz most too busy frontin.
-Stephani
I'm a H.E.R.B. Holotyped Existance Rhetoric Bound
"Claimin' omnipotent positions, makes me question individual meridians.. what lingers inside simplified minds? Why does confidence lose sight and take flight to designate towards heavenly heights, my fingertips liquify the surface... ripplin' through my personal deviated splurges, ways of certian wordin'.. befriending amongst the cushion that supports the curves, bending.. I am ashamed on the ways i glance towards the skies to shape my imaginary only to escape, in search for sheer enamels that coat me, invisible.. yet protectin' the openings.. envisionin' fate.. i faint... in a twisted...spiraled... casted slow motion dreams of pastures green penetrate my flesh sensating burning coals, within the folds,,, unexpressed.. im froze in corrosion... flowing amoungst the rest.. lightlessness resting in the mesh.. breaths are gasps from past carry along.. remained was the same position.. i am posing for catalogs" -Stephani Linguistical, physical individual.. ahha j/p.. peace to linguistics BASH WIF MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
fortified with the essential vitamins and minerals
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6530, COMMENTS/SUGGESTIONS Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 05:37 PM
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6531, ear Posted by Pairawyze, Sat Jan-11-03 10:56 AM
how about to avoid confusion, let the team listed first post first I'm gonna drop something with La_dee_def99 but I guess the first piece will be from ezzs and jr214 good luck, you're gonna need it
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6532, RE: ear Posted by BarTek, Sat Jan-11-03 11:02 AM
nah, no worries. you guys got a week. make it happen.
peace.
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6533, ear Posted by Pairawyze, Sun Jan-12-03 08:55 PM
hold your horses, stop the presses, Just to let you know, I've already cooked up a fat idea on the topic just getting a confirmation from my partna La_ so just sit back I'm gonna be droppin something fat, this tourney is about to begin....MUHAHAHAH... we're right here, ready for this
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6534, how can i get in on it? Posted by bakari7, Mon Jan-13-03 09:04 AM
7^0.
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6535, can someone inbox me or sumtin???? Posted by bakari7, Tue Jan-14-03 09:52 AM
i want in, too.
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6536, .... Posted by LaXyDaZiCaL, Wed Jan-15-03 09:37 AM
isnt your name listed first? im confused... i say just drop when your done.. this aint a battle so it dont matter...
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6537, RE: .... Posted by gsquared, Wed Jan-15-03 11:52 AM
..the thing is if I know that my partner is gonna be out of town until the 21st, and he says he is, I have no hope that he will post his by the deadline on friday...I wrote mine the first day Bar posted the topics and sent it to my partner then...it's not fair to you and everyone else to wait for him to get back on the 21st to post his verse...
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6538, RE: .... Posted by Instant Axis, Wed Jan-15-03 01:37 PM
well, if they can extend it, get you a new partner, i got no problem with it and im sure Lax wont care either, definitly not the way cats wanna win by default and shit, peace.
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6539, my partner? new partner? Posted by gsquared, Wed Jan-15-03 11:30 AM
My partner said he would get me his verse before he left town...he said he will be away from today, the 15th, til the 21st, and posting is the 17th, and he hasn't sent anything, so, I am lookin' left out to dry...could you give me another partner, a rook is fine....?
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6540, RE: my partner? new partner? Posted by guest, Fri Jan-24-03 11:31 AM
need a partner i am ya nigga just holla t me and i aint no rook
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6541, ONE MORE THING: Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-10-03 07:10 PM
IF your partner is not responding to you and 3 days have passed. You will receive a new partner and a 3 day extension.
oh, and Anth, is it possible to get an anchor on this? Thank you.
peace.
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6542, up^ Posted by BarTek, Sun Jan-12-03 11:57 AM
^
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6543, cracks knuckles... nm Posted by backbone_flute, Sun Jan-12-03 05:20 PM
peace, ~p~
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6544, UP...yo this needs to be a little bit more sophisticate Posted by TheProdigiousPoet, Sun Jan-12-03 12:35 PM
I mean #1,2,3,4,etc. could be replaced by the usere's names for one...but my main thing is the length of line they are supposed to spit..."1 long verse, 1 short verse', maybe you should be a little bit more specific like....20 bars 10 bars shit like that... hopefully you can get an anchor or something...
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6545, RE: UP...yo this needs to be a little bit more sophisti Posted by BarTek, Sun Jan-12-03 01:07 PM
I didn't want to restrict anyone from their styles. So each participant may write as much as they like, in any form as they like. Round ONE is a free write if you will, I just want people to bring their styles, Round TWO will be more "sophisticated".
peace.
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6546, RE: UP...yo this needs to be a little bit more sophisti Posted by Instant Axis, Sun Jan-12-03 02:32 PM
its really not that hard, get together with ya potna, smash on the topic and post, real easy shit, nothin to fuss over, its basic yo, cats will smash on it a then votes come in, peace.
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6547, Aight... Posted by TheProdigiousPoet, Sun Jan-12-03 03:02 PM
I feel what yall are saying but u see the lack of response so far...hopefully these mufukas will smash and do it quick...but I'll keep a loockout so this shit doesnt sink...
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6548, RE: Aight... Posted by Instant Axis, Sun Jan-12-03 03:09 PM
sho you right Pro, aint no poppin off but thats where ya potna needs to come in, we should send our verse to our teammate and then they can smash there verse and post it and speakin of teammates, ayo, Lax is ya mans, wheres he at!!!!haha
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6549, RE: SLAM TOURNEY: ROUND ONE Posted by PG, Tue Jan-14-03 08:32 AM
Never heard back from my partner....... DAMN he said he was down in your last thread but he never got back at me in hotmail or my PM so unless he speaks now hit me up with another partner I WANN RIP THIS SHIT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pappa
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6550, I think your partner...... Posted by KnowOne, Tue Jan-14-03 10:51 AM
was scared of by the level of comp! *LOL* just joking!
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6551, what happened to you being the artists of the month... Posted by TheProdigiousPoet, Tue Jan-14-03 11:30 AM
That yit was up for like 2 days then all of a sudden got taken off...
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6552, RE: what happened to you being the artists of the month Posted by BarTek, Tue Jan-14-03 11:51 AM
We are devoting the Artist of the Month to the 2 winners of the Tournament. We discussed this with the mods and everyone has agreed it was a good idea.
peace.
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6553, I think he means.... Posted by KnowOne, Tue Jan-14-03 12:01 PM
for this month. The tourney won't be over till at best next month. I think he was refering to this month. (As you notice there is not Jan. AOTM) I had problems logging in & was unable to start the artist of the month thread. Then when I finally got in, I forgot to start it. (I know...I suck *lol*) So we were all debating what should be done about it. I did'nt want to start it late because that would be unfair to the winner to have only 2 weeks to shine. So I was asking for ideas, but nothing came of it. BTW when do you for-see this tourney ending?
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6554, RE: I think he means.... Posted by BarTek, Tue Jan-14-03 12:08 PM
yah, end of the next month sounds about right...
peace.
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6555, so that would make..... Posted by KnowOne, Tue Jan-14-03 12:17 PM
the winning team the March Artists Of The Month......
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6556, huh???? Posted by KnowOne, Tue Jan-14-03 11:52 AM
come again? I've been MIA for the past 6 days or so, so you'll have to bring me up to speed........
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6557, in yr absence... Posted by Foneticcus, Wed Jan-15-03 10:18 AM
Lunchboxxx made an AOTM thread. the AOTM? KnowOne.
that was created w/in the last week...it stayed up 4 maybe 3-4 days & then suddenly it's disappeared. i think they regrouped & decided on another plan...
but yeah, u were the january AOTM for a few days, KnowOne.
yr 15 minutes of fame right there...
lol!
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6558, and of course I was not here to see it....... Posted by KnowOne, Wed Jan-15-03 10:26 AM
just my luck.....day late & a dollar short....the story of my life. I did'nt even get to post any pieces. I really would'nt mind, except for the fact that I doubt I'll ever actually get "voted" as AOTM, so that was probably my only chance. *lol* Oh well......
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6559, now that's Posted by PG, Wed Jan-15-03 10:41 AM
funny! and who says Irony is dead?!
Pappa
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6560, they did you durty dawg... Posted by TheProdigiousPoet, Wed Jan-15-03 05:47 PM
I would have voted for you though...
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6561, done... Posted by LaXyDaZiCaL, Wed Jan-15-03 09:41 AM
yo we first to post, and its WEDNESDAY!!! stop sleepin yall. im hurting for this shit to get started. wake up~!
and pg, hit me up and tell me about the tourney info please. thanks dog...
WAKE UP YALL!!
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6562, RE: done... Posted by PG, Wed Jan-15-03 10:44 AM
First up eh?! Well your team is stacked and I've seen you operate on a few of these animals so I question your rook status?
;P
no worries just riding ya
The Battle Tourny Stage twoo will be posted this afternoon so wait for it!
Pappa
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6563, RE: done... Posted by LaXyDaZiCaL, Wed Jan-15-03 06:20 PM
ill take that as a compliment, even tho i still do consider myself the rookiest of the rooks. well maybe not the rookiest, but still pretty rookish... nevermind.... i gottalot to learn. but yeah, axis is a good partner for me... hopefully cats wake up so we can see out competition cuz it should be good... thanks money..
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6564, yo tek Posted by eternalist, Wed Jan-15-03 12:01 PM
i havent herd from war lock, lock where u at
........... "only believers of death will die"saul willams
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6565, where is everybody???? Posted by KnowOne, Fri Jan-17-03 11:34 AM
soon as I her back from my partner, our piece should be up.....but where is everyone else? Seems like only a few of us are actually posting.......then again maybe everyone is waiting till the last minute. (like I did *lol*) I hope peeps support this........
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6566, RE: where is everybody???? Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-17-03 11:45 AM
yah, i figure everyone is last minute, we about to post also. im not worried yet! haha. come on everyone! drop your pieces.
peace.
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6567, RE: where is everybody???? Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Fri Jan-17-03 01:33 PM
i told ya so....
come on people. DONT SIGN UP IF YOURE NOT 100% COMMITTED!!!
peace ladee!
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6568, RE: We're still down... Posted by Sampaguita, Fri Jan-17-03 05:44 PM
Peace & One
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6569, RE: SLAM TOURNEY: ROUND ONE Posted by BarTek, Fri Jan-17-03 10:58 PM
Congratulations to everyone who dropped their topics. Thanks for stayin dedicated and most of all, i'm diggin the respect, I did this for y'all. We can't move on without everyone else so we gonna wait for a min and see what happens. Everyone came real nice, I saw many artists break through their artform and drop some beauty.
peace.
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6570, RE: SLAM TOURNEY: ROUND ONE Posted by the Light, Sat Jan-18-03 03:05 AM
I aint heard from my partner since tuesday, my half is written and I sent it to him, but I dunno where he at????
::d~land is on the go::
"seems in vogue to be a closet misogynist homophobe" - Tori Amos
"my purpose is to make my soul rhyme with my mind" - Saul Williams
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6571, props to Tek, respect to all y'all Posted by gsquared, Sat Jan-18-03 09:11 PM
...just want to say thanks to Bartek for putting in the time and effort and love to try to put this together...you should feel nothing but good about your straight-up positive effort bro....and to everyone who posted a piece I thank you sincerely for showing one another the respect that you'd expect from an extended family of poets who need to support one another...I won't be checking this thread again cuz the sooner I forget it, the better, it's disappointing that the peeps who agreed to be involved left us all out here to dry...not because the slam meant sooo much, just the lack of respect--that being said back to work making music...peace all, g2
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6572, werdum up Posted by Ezzsential, Sun Jan-19-03 03:54 PM
yeah bartek.. thanx man for the time u put in most def! i was feelin those quotes.. they really helped me with the topic..
-Stephani
I'm a H.E.R.B. Holotyped Existance Rhetoric Bound
"Claimin' omnipotent positions, makes me question individual meridians.. what lingers inside simplified minds? Why does confidence lose sight and take flight to designate towards heavenly heights, my fingertips liquify the surface... ripplin' through my personal deviated splurges, ways of certian wordin'.. befriending amongst the cushion that supports the curves, bending.. I am ashamed on the ways i glance towards the skies to shape my imaginary only to escape, in search for sheer enamels that coat me, invisible.. yet protectin' the openings.. envisionin' fate.. i faint... in a twisted...spiraled... casted slow motion dreams of pastures green penetrate my flesh sensating burning coals, within the folds,,, unexpressed.. im froze in corrosion... flowing amoungst the rest.. lightlessness resting in the mesh.. breaths are gasps from past carry along.. remained was the same position.. i am posing for catalogs" -Stephani Linguistical, physical individual.. ahha j/p.. peace to linguistics BASH WIF MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
fortified with the essential vitamins and minerals
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6573, hey tek.... Posted by freakwhensee, Tue Jan-21-03 06:52 AM
now that mom's sitution has settled down and all.....if you need a rookie replacement, consider me in!
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6574, RE: hey tek.... Posted by the Light, Wed Jan-22-03 09:11 AM
Your situation was a shame, cuz my replacement partner deserted me! If only you could have stayed in this...if the next round ever happens, and I'm still a part of it, then you're welcome to join me again if you want :-)
"seems in vogue to be a closet misogynist homophobe" - Tori Amos
"my purpose is to make my soul rhyme with my mind" - Saul Williams
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6575, RE: hey tek.... Posted by harmoni_representative_002, Tue Feb-11-03 03:46 PM
yo im pretty new on the boards but i can repersent so if you want another partna holla at cha boy
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6576, PLEASE drop your pieces. Posted by BarTek, Tue Jan-21-03 01:01 PM
Come on everyone, we can do this, get after your partner!!
peace.
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6577, RE: PLEASE drop your pieces. Posted by Semplisstech, Thu Jan-23-03 02:05 PM
in case no one noticed, i responded on my part to The Anthology and his partner about freedom....except its on the solo tip...3rd i just wasn't feeling the tourney anymore, but i had to rep....so just know, I did respond....
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6578, UPDATE Posted by BarTek, Thu Jan-23-03 02:39 PM
Hi everyone, we will wait till everyone completes before moving on to round 2. please get at ya partner and keep competing.
bakari7 replaces 3rd i because she just dropped out.
peace.
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6579, RE: UPDATE Posted by eternalist, Fri Jan-24-03 08:34 AM
yo tek my partner war lock backout i guess but i am still in if u got a partner???? jus get at me i guess
peace ........... "only believers of death will die"saul willams
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6580, no one.....? Posted by eternalist, Thu Jan-30-03 11:33 AM
somoe one pm me we can hook up for this....
........... "only believers of death will die"saul willams
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6581, so um... Posted by Ezzsential, Wed Feb-05-03 07:28 AM
when is the votin thread going to be posted?
-Stephani
I'm a H.E.R.B. Holotyped Existance Rhetoric Bound
"Claimin' omnipotent positions, makes me question individual meridians.. what lingers inside simplified minds? Why does confidence lose sight and take flight to designate towards heavenly heights, my fingertips liquify the surface... ripplin' through my personal deviated splurges, ways of certian wordin'.. befriending amongst the cushion that supports the curves, bending.. I am ashamed on the ways i glance towards the skies to shape my imaginary only to escape, in search for sheer enamels that coat me, invisible.. yet protectin' the openings.. envisionin' fate.. i faint... in a twisted...spiraled... casted slow motion dreams of pastures green penetrate my flesh sensating burning coals, within the folds,,, unexpressed.. im froze in corrosion... flowing amoungst the rest.. lightlessness resting in the mesh.. breaths are gasps from past carry along.. remained was the same position.. i am posing for catalogs" -Stephani Linguistical, physical individual.. ahha j/p.. peace to linguistics BASH WIF MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
fortified with the essential vitamins and minerals
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