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3303, October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by KnowOne, Wed Oct-01-03 01:16 AM
Congratz yo.....you deserve it! You know what to do.....looking forward to it.....
"I sing in strokes of indigo blues From fountain pens lit with a poetic fuse" ~ PhotoSynthesis
"I'm nothing like me....." - KnowOne
"Take me out ur Sigs!!!"-madwriter
"I sit on language and eat it raw and smell it's sweet aroma and I hear it in places that have sound but no words "-gsquared
"I have a shadow that needs your color. " - presyzion
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3304, congrats mayne... Posted by TheProdigiousPoet, Wed Oct-01-03 02:42 AM
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3305, Hm Posted by mara, Wed Oct-01-03 03:07 AM
Congratulations sweetie. You know I wasn't even paying attention to that damn thread and next thing I know you're AOTM. You're a sneaky little something aren't you? LOL
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3306, wow Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-01-03 03:59 AM
ummm, im honored to be held in this high a regard by people i hold in such a high regard...this means a lot to me that folks are enjoying my verses/pieces, i deeply appreciate the respect,inspiration, and feedback i get from everyone, thanx and i hope i dont disappoint. ;)
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3307, RE: wow Posted by BarTek, Wed Oct-01-03 04:10 AM
you never dissapoint. peace fam. congrtulations.
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3308, RE: wow Posted by InspiredFree, Fri Oct-31-03 09:14 AM
congrats :)
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3309, thatta boy! Posted by LaXyDaZiCaL, Wed Oct-01-03 04:12 AM
awwww... i remember when ric first stepped on to these boards and we almost immediatley formed a crew... it seemed a little weak at the time but over the course of a few months we have proved to be some of the most talented cats on these boards in all medias, poetry and rap. ricdogg, ya written word has gone from being highly mediocre to an entirely new level. youve elevated ya style so much i can smell the funk in ya words. i mean all this from the heart dogg, im proud to be in a crew with you and ya words have truly spoken to me over the last few months. hit me up for a collab and well kill these cats. holla back...
shylocke! lax the desert dragon
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3310, The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around) Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-01-03 04:36 AM
(this freestyle was recently inspired by Hunuh and Decstar and the new Outkast)
hell yes, but i gotta stop fartin...and start actin with the strength of a spartan,oskie woskie, poski woskie, chonkyfire, i never perspire enough, full of that brown stuff, i tire, through pores, try to keep the skin tough, but im soft as velour, and a baby bottom, the crowd said "all the maybes got him" the lovely lady shot him, devil in a in blue dress, at a higher level im still clueless, but it doesnt matter until i run on all cylinders, the ceiling whirs, the ceiling fan, blowin the breeze of a secret, victoria, the story o, the feelin man, grab the lotion, rubber (ducky), and my flow's motion, and ya got a lyrical love potion, "what is miracle smokin" i leave the spiritual chokin, on failed faith, my spirit black mailed wraiths, and posed for a ‘black tale’ place, its true yo, fuck this ish, let me run with the tounge, like a native nickname, ahhh a sick brain, RUNNING TONSIL, rappin rumperstiltskin, i peeled men, distressed like a damned damsel, witnessed the abduction, at home with disfunction, draw the shortest straw, and still asked to master suction, masters of the universe, uni-verse, quote the pastor first, "can i get an amen?" is that a question? or a request? he-man needs to suceed at his she-quest, master of procrastination, like the lonely master masterbation, like petty felons master probation, like a smooth haitian, pardon my french, lick the bark offa park bench, what i spit results in a farts stench
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3311, RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around) Posted by gsquared, Wed Oct-01-03 07:34 AM
...nice drop homez, mad congratulations, you deserve it, keep improving, say what you feel....
"The Hiphop community exists as an international culture of consciousness that provides all races, tribes, religions, and styles of people, a foundation for the communication of their best ideas and works. Hiphop Kulture is united as one multi-skilled, multi-cultural, multi-faith, multi-racial people, committed to the establishment and the development of peace."
--Hiphop declaration of peace, Temple of Hiphop
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3312, HI HATER Posted by Decstar, Wed Oct-01-03 09:06 AM
lol no doubt, man. that's y i didnt even vote, knew u wrapped it up, fam. mos def well awaited, kid. u deserve this. now get ya head outta ya ass and spit that fire i'm used to.
much props to ya
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3313, RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around) Posted by BarTek, Wed Oct-01-03 06:54 PM
amen?" is that a question? or a request? he-man
DAMN! do they get it? do they get this wizzad??? this was hot ric, fa'fuckin real.
peace.
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3314, RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around) Posted by MiracleRic, Sat Oct-04-03 04:04 AM
to tell ya the truth, im not sure i more then halfway get that line, inspiration doesnt stop to explain herself very often, good lookin
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3315, RE: The Heart of a Spartan...(fartin around) Posted by Otto, Fri Oct-03-03 06:49 AM
breeze of a secret, victoria, the story o, the feelin man, grab the lotion, rubber (ducky), and my flow's motion, and ya got a lyrical love potion, "what is miracle smokin" i leave the spiritual chokin, on failed faith, my spirit black mailed wraiths, and posed for a ‘black tale’ place
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that is some crazy inversion there....nice visual word play, and i voted for YOU my friend.......
-Otto
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3316, congrats ric :) Posted by MayoKing, Wed Oct-01-03 05:32 AM
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3317, Urban Middle Class Street Blues Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-01-03 05:34 AM
With a pen and a pad, i ride the train since ten i was sad, so i hide the pain and then my pen slipped but left a stain
on my lucky Gap sweater wait, i probably rap better with my black hoody... and black timbs with a black woody, yeah, my 'fifth limb' time to hit the gym
cause i got no girl, a crap car, and no money... plus, i tend to write funny when will cold nights turn sunny???
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3318, YEAYYYY BOYYYA!!! Posted by HEBREW_HONEY, Wed Oct-01-03 05:41 AM
Yeah this is well deserved of you, do it up!!! I got to dip for a minute but i'll be back to cee what you spillin. ConGrats!!!
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3319, RE: Urban Middle Class Street Blues Posted by BarTek, Wed Oct-01-03 06:55 PM
the REALNESS!!!!!!
YO! where the fuck this all of this ish come from?????
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3320, RE: Urban Middle Class Street Blues Posted by Otto, Fri Oct-03-03 06:51 AM
with a black woody, yeah, my 'fifth limb' time to hit the gym
cause i got no girl, a crap car, and no money... plus, i tend to write funny when will cold nights turn sunny???
~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yeah, i got grease on my jeans today....this cracked me up man....awesome piece !*)
-Otto
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3321, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Posted by Ezzsential, Wed Oct-01-03 05:42 AM
when cats hated on you who said you were one of the best!!!!! I always believed in you man! and now youre finally gettin the love u deserve. thanx to all you writtens and replies.. that deserves mad rec forreal! peace and love
-Stephani peep www.3kingsmusic.com and post ur poems on the forums! Support independent, positive hiphop!
I'm a H.E.R.B. Holotyped Existance Rhetoric Bound
The new me is like: A woman killed in ruffles; falling to the ground with her hair spread out; her wrist secreting ambiant neon blood Juggling the moon and stars in palms; with the flecks in the eyes turning globes confetti like yearns of non-existant love... Running in barefoot brooks; with the moon arching its reflection up the aching backs where he holds onto my hips and sways me my dreams are: Renewing again amoungst the mating mossrocks stay satiated coining a pith in a breathy palms; so so sappy drenching dreary destiny to bloody toned walls my heart calls: callused and waving kites colors hues meshing, please feel me- I'm so-so soft- scratching like cat napes, round and female with sun-dresses blowing passion.. kiss the wind swiveling tears on cheeks, the light beams behind my curls, I pose and bleeeeeeed with pain on my sleeve... engulf: anger,sadness, happiness changing to squared rolling wheels, penetrate the projections of emotional mattresses... I feel open.. constantly.. dream of my transparent body unzipping my skin and stepping out of me.. and I run to cotton-candy padded fields and glow with bliss, and he will wait with his arms open- like that of jesus and view me- patiently...cuz he knows I tripped on my way there and I'm all bruised... ~ me
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3322, RE: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-01-03 05:57 AM
i could never thank u enough, u have always encouraged and inspired me, i loves me some EZ, lol, ;)~
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3323, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Wed Oct-01-03 06:37 AM
Congrats, Ric. Well-deserved, too!
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3324, congratulations!!! Posted by delrica, Wed Oct-01-03 06:48 AM
can't wait to read ya...again and again and again...YAAAYYYY!!!!!
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3325, madd congratz to you.... Posted by KnowOne, Wed Oct-01-03 06:59 AM
even though you stole a few battles from me......I aint' mad.
LOL!
"I sing in strokes of indigo blues From fountain pens lit with a poetic fuse" ~ PhotoSynthesis
"I'm nothing like me....." - KnowOne
"Take me out ur Sigs!!!"-madwriter
"I sit on language and eat it raw and smell it's sweet aroma and I hear it in places that have sound but no words "-gsquared
"I have a shadow that needs your color. " - presyzion
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3326, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Oct-01-03 10:41 AM
Show us your "MIRACLES" Ric! -- *smiles*
I wanna see rainbows & thunder~bolts at the same time -- *wink*
I wanna see yo pen doin' a drive~by -- Shooting ink pellets at my eyeballs! -- *LoL*
Show us your "MIRACLES" -- *muah*
Oh -- And Congratulations boo -- You deserve the accolades, props, & kudos! -- (((Forreal Tho)))
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3327, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by Instant Axis, Wed Oct-01-03 10:42 AM
from a calm into a storm the kid was reborn and raged on, congrats champ, you deserve the reign, do ya thing young buck!!! peace.
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3328, Someday Smooth Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-01-03 04:24 PM
Someday smooth I’ll move out of my own way “Pardon me good sir, good day” “No, after you, but thanks anyway”
Someday smooth I’ll lose my sense of shame Find life’s reset button Redefine the game
Someday smooth, cheers from peers where everyone knows my name Feels a lot better then fame Strange and mellow but no fellow is ever the same
Someday smooth, speed bumps will never interrupt my cruise Spanish guitar riffs drift To face lift a gift above the Blues
Someday smooth, I’ll choose Olympic sports of peek-a-boos Hues of baby pinks, baby blues, Maybe still overfill my father’s shoes
Someday smooth my presence will exist in the present’s groove Find a niche for fish that swim in twos Pisces, triumph is a nice tease flirt with strife’s keys, The hot scott Joplin, Rap’s ragtime ya gots To start coppin The NEWs… Someday smooth…
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3329, RE: Someday Smooth Posted by BarTek, Wed Oct-01-03 06:57 PM
the quick tumble:
Pisces, triumph is a nice tease flirt with strife’s keys, The hot scott Joplin, Rap’s ragtime ya gots To start coppin The NEWs…
..yes...this is it....ric, versatile.
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3330, RE: Someday Smooth Posted by Natalie, Tue Oct-28-03 05:38 AM
Someday smooth, I’ll choose Olympic sports of peek-a-boos Hues of baby pinks, baby blues, Maybe still overfill my father’s shoes
i like those lines...
n.
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3331, RE: Someday Smooth Posted by journey88, Tue Oct-28-03 08:03 AM
Yes, I'd have to agree, it was a good line!
~This is my journey ~"Some people recognize the light but they can't handle the glare."-Common
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3332, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by blak_yukon, Thu Oct-02-03 01:46 AM
yessir...they did good getting you here
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3333, Sweet Jesus! Posted by robynwildchild, Thu Oct-02-03 08:20 AM
*rob pokes lik* ... hey you see that.. ya boy got props for the whole month... what you make of that!!
i'm jealous!! i'm jealous!! lol
congrats Ric.. you deserves it!!!
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3334, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Oct-02-03 11:43 AM
Cavalier, I dabble with the gift of gab, ya hear? stab a deer, DOE! Go grab a beer, Duff, cut a hoof and huff, puff, into a new atmosphere, AOTM… or Atom? Got a patent on a flow ya cant fathom, the Phantom, minus billy zane, train, of thought, shit im on a mental plane, “where will he land next? Wearing purple spandex.” she had a man vexed, ya heard well, put a bird to the third rail, ya preferred Hell? Im satan’s absurd sales-man, I tell men “most ladies, prefer Hades…less vermin” I don’t give a rats hell, if Rush puts a perm in, and rocks pastels, with Chris Berman, and does the pee-wee herman, with a weak stomach, i keep hurlin, I topple things, when I dopplegang-bang the wall of Berlin, its the the Miracle Merlin, "if she only gave some brain," to the wizard, with a savage stance, the blizzard known as Avalanche, the piper pied sniper tried, to do a lavish dance, at the local Shell, I post to go postal, well, I make a getaway in a Volvo, with malvo on my tail, i escape fast, damn i hate math, word problems is what i solve yo
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3335, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by NewsiC_NoyC, Thu Oct-02-03 11:53 AM
Damn...I know I havent posted lately but Ive been visiting and reading here and thurr.......and congrats main......this was deserved...u got it...fire, poetry, stories, characters.......u goin crazy on us man....keep it illin'.........lol
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3336, too nice Posted by hunuh, Thu Oct-02-03 01:23 PM
>the piper pied sniper tried, >to do a lavish dance, >at the local Shell, >I post to go postal, well, >I make a getaway in a Volvo, >with malvo on my tail, >i escape fast, damn i hate math, >word problems is what i solve yo
damn.
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3337, Lima Beans and Kidney Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Oct-02-03 02:17 PM
Lima Beans or Kidney Paper or Plastic its drastic how fast it becomes evident there are too many options: destroy/create participate/ or...d...i..sipate/fade/rage/explode
I wanna live today... but i dont know the date to love or hate.!? that is the question? or the state-ment. the state of mind i find that penetrates the time is to be me today
but what about the crimes of those i admire what about letting my hardships and achievements define who i am whatever happened to saying no!!!...to... drugs/society/history/fear/beer/peers/tears/fame/shame/blame/false claims, to boxes instead of spheres...
earth/water/green/blue/awake/sleep should i be shallow or deep reality relies regularly on the relinquished, repossessed, raped raity known as land/earth
rebirth
too often swimming the depths of the sea/me may certainly create complications concerning how clumsily i clamber and climb out of the shallows
and gradually gain the gall to go against the grain of gravity and stand on solid ground I hope it doesnt rain for I might then drown
Keep my Balance as the tide rises, and enjoy the shallow,s embrace the deep, and never forget u dont have fins...ONLY FEET
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3338, yeahhhhh! Posted by Afrika, Thu Oct-02-03 03:35 PM
congratulations! you deserved this, you've always been a nice writer and its a pleasure being fam with you. i loved this piece baby. keep coming with what you do best. one love. Af.
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3339, too many quotables Posted by hunuh, Thu Oct-02-03 05:23 PM
very nice
i like the spoken word feel of this
definately not what i expected
sick ass piece man.
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3340, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by UntitledThought, Fri Oct-03-03 04:05 AM
congratulations!!
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3341, yo Ric Posted by Toothpick, Sat Oct-04-03 03:09 AM
you know I got mad respect for ya. You the marvel superhero in this shit.
peace, -Tp
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3342, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by Morehouse, Sat Oct-04-03 06:49 AM
congrats brother...keep holding it down...peace.
---poet---try---suggestive---lifebits
exist in limbo.
"The Black Artist's role in America is to aid in the destruction of America as he knows it. His role is to report and reflect so precisely the nature of the society, and of himself in that society, that other men will be moved by the exactness of his rendering and, if they are black men, grow strong through this moving, having seen their own strength, and weakness; and if they are white men, tremble, curse, and go mad, because they will be drenched with the filth of their evil."
-Amiri Baraka, from "State/meant" in the essay, "Home"
"My love is my soul's imagination. How do I love thee?...Imagine." -Saul Williams
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3343, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by MiracleRic, Sat Oct-04-03 02:37 PM
The Lone Ranger Masked With pains of the past A well known stranger, at last
Blindfolded mattadoring , Torro, Z (ZZZZZ) on my chest, Like Zorro, Chicks insist on snoring, Slept on, Cause ‘Ric is boring’ Love’s Teflon, To self I seem foreign
Dearly Deported, Peep the overseas Steez Please, let me join a circus of Parisian Thieves I’m leavin With a Latin Legion, Exit stage left even… Write til there’s no page left breathing
At times when I’m ranting… I leave the pen panting I Cardio-write Soon, ima keep my audios tight My gaudy flow’s like The one on Titanic Still finding time to rhyme On his-panic As the ship sinks My light bulb blinks
That flows very sloppy El Mariachi Lookin like a scary Raffi Mary Papi (poppins) I wont give a bird shit, Except hot droppings, Copy?
Desperado Today aint promised tomorrow So take ya sweet sorrow… And stuff it up ya cooch yo, This hero, is after Mucho Dinero An artistic fiend Call me Pinero
With a twisted lean Soon to have track marks Where’s my heroine Black’s darts, Where to put the arrow in I feel like a pharaoh when I release inhibitions I speak Easy Rawlins Sprawlin prohibition With Al Capone’s Stallone stone slanger, SICK Home to The Lone Ranger RICK
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3344, congratulations ric Posted by brownsugs, Sat Oct-04-03 04:50 PM
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3345, Pussy-foot-loose Posted by MiracleRic, Sat Oct-04-03 07:50 PM
pussy-foot-loose, chickenhead, chickenhead, mama goose, bartender, send her, a shot of pimp juice, miracle the baptist, cap tips, crack fists, quack, DUCK low to LL...Ric's blessin it, blessin it, and blessin it well, undercover brother, lover of jezzebelle,not tonight, too much to lose, like time and sprite, we blend, blind lemon-limes, nah ho, save the convo for johnny bravo, no pretendin, back bendin, u aint shy, why not work the nozzle, peep the milk mustache, skin of silk class, fall for u?, ma, i'll pass, it wont happen, pimp-cape laced with satin, this game of twister will leave ya toes plaitin, ya chokin?, and i'll manuever the heimlach, tootsie pop challenge, only took me nine licks, i put the C double O in ya coogi, excuse me miss bougie, this floozy just stole my L, not my mojo, ah hell, hit her with the speak and spell in slow mo, so sick, cold shoulder, til her whole ho clique told her, "OHHH, RIC", school-time notes, i check the box marked 'NO TRICK', im 'edge of the bed champ', i got a clapper, so backshots keep flickin my lamp, Slick is a tramp, a heartless wippersnapper, heartbroken pimpslapper
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3346, Dancing Tears Posted by MiracleRic, Sat Oct-04-03 07:52 PM
Drip...Drop Drip...Drop Drip... the path of saline unresolved solution Drop... the trail of en-tangoed southern semi-scars drip...drop a beach of skin acknowldge dancers of the tide regret rides the wave sorrow sails along the surf pain pollutes the pier barricaded by the bridge of my nose a strange dance of condensation meets at archipelago chin dancing tears dissipate leavin me here to drip...drop where'd they go??? i take a stroll along the bored-walk with pocket full of dreams harvesting sand on cheeks its been weeks since i took a peek at the horizon cant swim with this crutch a heart injury, afraid to throw the cast-away Alone, I skinny dip Drip...Drop
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3347, RE: Dancing Tears Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Oct-05-03 03:45 PM
Awwwwwwww Miracle baybeee -- I felt the condensation of this flow drippin' off your wordplay -- And I loved the lil' alliteration sprinkled through~out!
*Kiss the Tears Away*
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3348, that was a great piece, nm Posted by Toothpick, Sun Oct-05-03 05:26 PM
-Tp
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3349, Genie of the Lava Lamp Posted by MiracleRic, Mon Oct-06-03 04:46 AM
Genie of the Lava Lamp
Granted gullible delicacies Sweet tooth soothsayer soothes Tongue in cheek tonsil teasing Tussling with tortured train of thoughts
Gilded genie wishes of solid gifts Lakes of liquid poured from lava lamps Latex barrier obstructs our oneness Lies never told lay trust with tangled lullabies
Massages with magma mocked by mute moments Secure sounds of subterranean scrubs Clavicle caress clearing cluttered cold chambers Cremated chances of Caribbean enchantment
Gallivanting along for Greek gem goddesses I wonder what plunder pirates redeem as booty I admire indiscretion’s gallantry Passionately I polish lava lamps for clarity’s treasure
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3350, congratulations Ric!!! Posted by Mystic_Elixir, Mon Oct-06-03 04:49 AM
I hope you enjoy your month, I look forward to reading your work. Much Love.
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"Rituals are important. Nowadays it's hip not to be married. I'm not interested in being hip" ---John Lennon, in 1980
"There is nothing nobler or more admirable than when two people who see eye to eye keep house as husband and wife, confounding their enemies and delighting their friends" ---Homer, The Odyssey
"No on can make you feel inferior without your consent"--- E. Roosevelt
"If it is the dirty element that gives pleasure to the act of lust, then the dirtier it is, the more pleasurable it is bound to be." --Marquis De Sade
"It has, moreover, been proven that horror, nastiness, and the frightful are what give pleasure when one fornicates. Beauty is a simple thing; ugliness is the exceptional thing. And firey imaginations, no doubt, always prefer the extraordinary thing to the simple thing." --Marquis De Sade
"Show me an artist who is not insane, and I will show you a fraud"---Me
"Love is anterior to life posterior to death Initial of creation, and the exponent of breath"--Emily Dickenson
"And ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation"--Kahlil Gibran
"I am ashamed to call this love human and afraid of God to call it divine"--Rumi (real name Jalal ad-Din Mohammed Balkhi)
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3351, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by journey88, Mon Oct-06-03 09:23 AM
Dani Journey
Hoody hoo nephew, you know who this is! I had no idea how much people sweat you on this site! I swear I'm going to email you back my favorite poem, 'Lucipher is a Mindset' for your display as the Artist of the Month! Really you are one of my favorite writers, just so happens I know you, very well!
Mad love!
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3352, HAHA Posted by MiracleRic, Mon Oct-06-03 09:33 AM
u crazy girl, hoody hoo to u toooooooo!!!!
VIBRATE
lol, and send me my damn piece
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3353, shining light on... Posted by clarion, Mon Oct-06-03 01:31 PM
MiracleRic...congrats
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3354, RE: October Artist Of The Month - MiracleRic Posted by presyzion, Tue Oct-07-03 02:06 AM
congrats, man. you are a versatile writer.
keep at it.
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3355, COLISEUM Conclusion Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-08-03 09:07 AM
Conclude to the Coliseum, this is my colossal theorem, to a brolic serum, Reflex, Heart, Gut check, whats next, the Desire, Valor, king ring of the tiger, violent Gallantry, Silently, I accept death, as a family reunion, stop bafoonin, get ya shit straight, swing a sword, lead a hoard, of soldiers, mists of life, poltergeists in dust, shadows in wraiths, triumph in battles we face, trace the lace of the insecure, embroidery, sure to be, evil when left unchecked, galactic gladiator, stab a hater, secure ya soul, or else stretch ya hole, don’t avoid that void, the spirits’ lyric(al) steroid, fear it, ya tight-ass get a hemorrhoid, high-strung, my tongue, overjoyed, among the comfort of wheat grasps, I repeat to the meek, let ya speech last, and remember even weak grass, contains a blade, retrograde, petrol aids, in fueling the fire that is MAN, gasoline dreams, sober presents, stoic gifts, this poet’s kiss lifts a Ceasar to see, to lead is to replace greed with ideals, and for these you bleed, ya feel?
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3356, Earth-Toned Beret (one of my favs) Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-08-03 06:14 PM
Earth-Toned Beret A filet of a man I stand tall Eiffel Tower of Pisa
An artist’s pose Stabilizing my surroundings Strumming cafés I pay my way
Caressing coffee grinds Among cool-hued confidants, Indigo informants I Hula dance with the sun
Crawl along the horizon As a sunset stripteases Pen requesting a lapdance
Serpent Shadows belly-dance with Spinning Silhouettes, Adobe princesses, Persian Acrobats, I receive robes of Canvas
It rains acid kaleidoscope paint Masterpiece imprisons Convicts of Beauty
Fugitives of Faith Thieves of Theology Vandals of Love I trace the Sistine Chapel
Reverse the trail of a Moroccan Hun From his Fumanchu to fetal fights Snowy peaks greet warm wanderers
Carnal Carnival cruises French Fire-Breathers Maui Mimes Mimic Me I break the imagined box
I don Lucipher’s mustache Adjust my Earth-Toned Beret…and… Enjoy My Station as Fantasy’s Vagabond
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3357, RE: Earth-Toned Beret (one of my favs) Posted by KnowOne, Fri Oct-10-03 03:28 AM
Like the closing lines:
>I don Lucipher’s mustache >Adjust my Earth-Toned Beret…and… >Enjoy My Station as Fantasy’s Vagabond
Keep Flowin'.......
"I sing in strokes of indigo blues From fountain pens lit with a poetic fuse" ~ PhotoSynthesis
"I'm nothing like me....." - KnowOne
"Take me out ur Sigs!!!"-madwriter
"my writing style can best be described as suicide letters written with crayons..." - paperdollpoet
"I have a shadow that needs your color. " - presyzion
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3358, RIC! Posted by Toothpick, Sun Oct-12-03 05:40 AM
you bastard, I been reading this thread too much, and now I'm jokcin yr style without even noticing! Read my new post. I just realized my flow sounds more like *you* than it does like *me*.
Argh. Haha. Take it as a compliment!
peace Ric, -Tp
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3359, peace and props to you. Posted by STIMULI, Tue Oct-14-03 09:47 AM
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ "everytime you allow yourself to get away with something wrong, everytime you do that, you're changing your character." Afeni Shakur on personal courage, XXL October 2003. *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
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3360, No Writing (RETIREMENT PIECE) Posted by MiracleRic, Tue Oct-14-03 04:54 PM
No writing…
Suppress the will to Breathe Withhold for the sake of Living My chronicles are better served If only I can find some other Love,
Passion Mona Lisa Scent Image Addiction Company
You never judge I do it for you…
No figures…
Suppression Memorization Knowledge
Just expression A definition previously untaught None sought The science of identity
You have been my heroine Sold to me To make me a hero That blessed needle Leaving marks upon my hollow canvas Truth’s insertion
So I roam as Romeo Juliet’s family jewels are my tragedy
No writing…
For it is the submission to reality And the denial of my afterlife
What design made me choose Life above Air
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3361, RE: No Writing (RETIREMENT PIECE) Posted by Otto, Wed Oct-15-03 11:09 AM
What design made me choose Life above Air ~~~~~~~~
hmmm...this is so final and sad man....dag....
-Otto
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3362, LUCIPHER Is A Mindset Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-15-03 05:13 PM
~my best friend sent this to me and told me to repost it, thanx dani ;)~
LUCIPHER Is A Mindset
The devil is no shade of skin, the devil exists and resides in, the minds of men, LUCIPHER is a mindset, a gang mentality, many demons claim a crime set satan boasts immortality, please dont call the disenfranchised racist, to be a bigot, u must contain power, wonder why we sour, our power exists through our trigger...digit, I dont know the answer, i wont even pretend to know the problem im a nigga, a jigaboo tap dancer, and i know this, the word isnt very nice but for cash, i'd ask someone white to promote this, for he stands between me and paradise, i say things for a purpose, im amused by the world, along with those that believe they fully understand it, im hardly the person to reprimand it, i commend all attempts but im a dreamer, u hear my simple thoughts of girls from ipanema, to call me ignorant on a different view, bOOOO, im not religious, im spiritual, lucky to be alive, a Miracle, so instead i turn the other ass cheek, so, u dont like being called a devil, im sorry, i hated the irish blood in my vein, too many raped grandmothers, cherokee, black, irish, my skin the same as OSIRIS, curly hair, envied by my brethren, i dont condemn them, i understand, my compassion has no end, i know how to embrace the devil within.
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3363, RE: LUCIPHER Is A Mindset Posted by journey88, Thu Oct-16-03 08:36 AM
*snaps,snaps,snaps,snaps,snaps* You know this is my favorite piece of yours, I loved it, angry yet sincere. ~This is my Journey
~"Some niggas recognize the light but they can't handle the glare." - Common
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3364, classic battle verse Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Oct-16-03 08:41 AM
My first verse was cursed unstructured but still left u hearsed and flustered, game of clue im eatin lunch with a side of Colonel Mustard, the killer used hot shit straight from the commode, it was 3 against 1 so I lightened the load, shook spread’s jet cola, gave it to lunch, and watched it explode, ur punchlines were wack, I slayed u in 30 seconds flat, so quit all the chit chat, when im dissing u, I leave the board like Tamia, officially missing u, my dicks the reason ur wife hesitates in kissing u, ur eric benet gay, fuckin poultry mutts, ask wifey why my bumper say “adultery ‘sucks’”, u way too busy peepin my pic prick, when u look like dude from tales from the crypt wit tits,ur bitch’s thick but she forgot her lipstick, u rep the DISTRICT??!!! Oh no!!! i’ll have to remove ur whole cliques clit, u nit-wit, my liquid, removes ur sideburns, when will u guys learn, my tide turns, the dapper whipper-snapper, groupie ass-clapper, leaves vets wet with tears, its still been less then a year, and already I done jump-started two vets careers, Lunch, the gay ghost “BOOOOOO” came in spooked, u keep missin…u aimless fruits, ya a bunch mangos, with me as ur main goals, come at different angles, spittin obtuse juice, I unloose a spruce boost, bruising ur caboose deuce, til it looks like bruce bruce… ITS OVER
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3365, SHIT SUIT Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Oct-16-03 08:05 PM
I was given a suit to safely maneuver Thru this strange land of manure They labeled my gift ‘pure’ and made sure It properly repelled “now chart these wastelands, son” “u may have to travel them again” but I didn’t remember so I ignored it all until…
My sense of smell betrayed me
I could practically smell all the shit I was missing
Someone get me out of this suit!!!!!!!
None answered, so I searched for signs…
U must be this tall- - - - Not for a ride of simple amusement, Just to see past the high heap of bullshit That awaits to soil bare foot fools, Wandering tarot card village idiots With small baggage strung on a simple stick They seem to think its fertilizer….
and in turn grow
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3366, RE: SHIT SUIT Posted by Toothpick, Sat Oct-18-03 01:38 PM
oooh, yea. I'm feelin this one.
peace, -Tp
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3367, what in the..? Posted by Iridescence, Fri Oct-17-03 06:07 PM
damn my man is nice as hell. known it for a while but this man is straight killing it in the spotlight...i havnt even read 'em all yet, just appreciating what ive already read. feeling it for real.
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3368, Yo Ric..... Posted by KnowOne, Thu Oct-30-03 08:34 AM
just wanted to let you know that I got (and have had) a ton of stuff going on so I have not really been able to peep most of ya stuff this month. But what I have read has been madd tight. And I will mos def finish checking it all once its in the archive. But just wanted to give ya your well deserved props!
Keep Flowin'.......
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3369, You've Made Me So Proud This Month -- *Big Ass Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Oct-31-03 07:17 AM
Although I haven't responded to EACH & EVERY one of your showcased pieces -- I've peeped over most of them -- And I notice that they all have that *miracle* signature quality (((Shine))) that I've come to know & love!
May your "way with words" extend beyond the INTERNET -- May they assist you in life as you politik & network thru everyday conversations -- May they elevate your status in the workplace -- (Or where~ever need be) -- and grant you favor with Executive Decision Makers thru~out your lifetime!
In other words -- Let your words sprout wings and carry you WHEREVER you desire to go! -- *smiles*
Great Job Boo! -- *wink*
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