3221, RE:I need you to hear this now Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Oct-05-03 01:05 PM
I heard you LOUD & CLEAR! -- ;^) -- Your words have a thick density with intense imagery!
Especially loved these lines right here:
>viewing life through the eye of the hurricane-
>So lets stop hovering over the past.
>Every time my eyes close- >Burning in the sky of my mind- >You’ve ashed my rose- >With sweet -smiled, >Honey dipped flames-
>you think these mere words, >are just plain ink- >But these are my tools that are breaking >The chain link, >And giving me strength to swim >When Boundaries are reduced to rust.
Your whole thought process here was nice~ness, Slick -- But the above words caught my eyes and locked em'.
(((Oh great -- Now I'm crosse~eyed!))) -- *chuckles*
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