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Topic subjectRE:I need you to hear this now
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3221, RE:I need you to hear this now
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Oct-05-03 01:05 PM
I heard you LOUD & CLEAR! -- ;^) -- Your words have a thick density with intense imagery!


Especially loved these lines right here:

>viewing life through the eye of the hurricane-

>So lets stop hovering over the past.

>Every time my eyes close-
>Burning in the sky of my mind-
>You’ve ashed my rose-
>With sweet -smiled,
>Honey dipped flames-

>you think these mere words,
>are just plain ink-
>But these are my tools that are breaking
>The chain link,
>And giving me strength to swim
>When Boundaries are reduced to rust.

Your whole thought process here was nice~ness, Slick -- But the above words caught my eyes and locked em'.

(((Oh great -- Now I'm crosse~eyed!))) -- *chuckles*