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2753, RE: Song of the Seraph
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Nov-12-03 08:51 PM
WOW!

*sits still in amazement*

i am really feeling this you 2...this stirred some moods that havent been around in a minute...

the desperation expressed in this made me wanna go hide in some dark corner in the fetal position...

the tenderness and oh so co-dependance on each other was perfect, a lil overwhelming...

you two skillfully meshed into lovers in this one, i was kinda eerie for real...

Beautiful Drop, the part dec quoted and this part is what really standed out to me

"You try to untie my soul.
But Add only another knot.
Love is just a fable I know by heart
A hunting tale that methodically follows me
Yet refuses to acknowledge my presence"

thats amazing, *applauds*