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2720, November Artist of the Month: Freestyle Board Collabo Posted by delrica, Sat Nov-01-03 04:40 AM
Last year around this time, The Anthology and Lunchboxxx, our then moderators, decided to extend the feature to the entire board and have collaboration pieces all month long!! Well, folks, we're doing it again!!!!
So here are the rules:
IMPORTANT: Do NOT post the authors in the title bar. We want folks to read the work and not pass over work just because they don't recognize the name. Save that for the end of the post.
{added November 03, 2003 -
Example: you write a piece with dustydiapers called "as the mitochondria evaporate". don't put "me and dustydiapers collabo" in the title bar...put the name of the piece. we want the focus to be on the writer's work...not who wrote it.}
1. Pick whoever you want to collaborate with and write a piece with them.
2. When finished, either poet will post the title of the piece in the subject bar, and submit the poem...well, you get the point.
3. If you are responding to someone's piece, place it under that piece's title.
4. Give love as well as waiting to receive it.
Congratulations, ya'll. You are all phenomenal. Now go collabo!!!
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2721, Too Long Away Posted by Decstar, Mon Nov-03-03 07:33 PM
I know you can't stay but more than my face falls at your leaving, it comes to this every evening, I listen to your love tight against my ear, I hear every word, no, I lick every crumb, you spill languages that sounds like understanding, no man connects the pieces and blesses me even though Im broken the way you do my distant, but truest inconsistency we have most in common is what we're missing, i fast to save my soul on fire but arm's length just doesn't do justice to us, you make me laugh in spite of myself, you don't blame me for my quiet (listening) or get sick of my street spells (daydreaming), spirit seeking Oshun whispers I comprehend so I keep her near forget belief, I will suspend faith to un-need you, will work for food but noone can expect, a spark ignited won't fight for air, oxygen energy expressing carbon infinitely, Im intensely waiting for you intimately, serum in motion encased in body magnificently, my enemies even know my weakness and burn the roads between us
Beauty has now become and always has been mirages, i hear tears rolling down your face, only to know the elongance behind them, i cant hear sin falling, too busy trying to hear your heart call my name, i want to swindle your pain, erase your fears, embrace your hurt, but trails between us has burned, deserted to where we cant see inbetween, but we can still feel, i melt the insecurites of your doubts to strengthen our trust, i wouldn't lie to wonder around because even though you're pictures away, you're the only one i want, the only soulmate my heart wants to dance with, the only one that looks wonderful in everything, peaceful around anything, it hurts to not play and identify the certain hidden parts of you, touch the warmth of your skin, the wetness within you, i can only settle for the intelligentence you have, which is where your true beauty lies that cant be measured, described or judged, i have to settle for how your dreams make me dream, what is it that you have that has me so endeared and i havent tasted you yet, only breath your breaths through telephone lines, teleporting sensation, when will our windows be close enough to touch one another
A AmberGirl and Decstar production. Am's first, me second. to our lovers who awaits our warmth as much as we await theirs. J, i love you.
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2722, that's what's up Posted by delrica, Tue Nov-04-03 04:53 AM
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2723, RE: Too Long Away Posted by robynwildchild, Tue Nov-04-03 07:25 AM
mr collabo is loading up tha ammo... and ya girl j is back.. !
definatly feel this...
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2724, A Sweet Treat -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Nov-04-03 07:02 PM
From both of you! -- *wink*
~Very Nice~
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2725, very nice! Posted by Natalie, Thu Nov-06-03 04:38 AM
that line "i want to swindle your pain" is thought provoking. i likes.
peace,
n.
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2726, this is perfect for a latenight board read. Posted by RatpackSlim, Mon Nov-10-03 12:25 AM
>you spill languages that sounds like understanding,
>forget belief, I will suspend faith to un-need you,
>too busy trying to hear your heart call my name, >i want to swindle your pain,
>it hurts to not play and identify the certain hidden parts >of you,
and the above lines are part of the reason why. awesome drop.
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2727, RE: Too Long Away Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Nov-12-03 08:26 PM
lovely piece from both of you, but amber, damn, u touched me with this one, i already knew dec was a mushy munchkin, lol, nice drop yall
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2728, this was great....... Posted by KnowOne, Thu Nov-13-03 08:23 AM
I really like the following lines:
>Im intensely waiting for you intimately, >serum in motion encased in body magnificently, >my enemies even know my weakness >and burn the roads between us
Good job you two.....Keep Flowin'.............
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2729, RE: Too Long Away Posted by amazin, Mon Nov-17-03 08:22 AM
classic collab between two ...good poets....
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2730, RE: November Artist of the Month: Freestyle Board Coll Posted by Thought Knoxx, Tue Nov-04-03 08:06 AM
Woah
I'm away for a month and could well of missed this if it weren't for good old british telecom for hooking me up with the broadband up here in scotland in the middle of knowhere.
Oh and del congrats on being a moderator baby
Peace
Annyone wanna collab? inbox me I aint gonna go askin peeps cos alot of the old faces aren't around, plus i got a problem with rejection 'sniff'
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2731, Beyond Words Posted by Decstar, Wed Nov-05-03 07:10 AM
there's no way ya'll take us alive, unless you pull tha trigger on yaself and die, warp speed ahead of you actors, i dont gotta spit, you rappers, i feel like a raptor, i'm still chewing shit you'll never capture, you faggots not on this level, super duper collaboration, including tha shovel, ya'll rather shoot at tha mouth, play games of cat and mouse til i burn every monitor in ya house, playa, we'll spit you out, grow a pussy and maybe i'll talk to you, of course i got tha tools on me but i dont need em, i'll let my presence talk to you, timb's stomp right thru u, and nah, fucker, you gotta understand that we are both AMAZIN, no need to pick us apart, we'll both leave you cajun, i'm really not heated from friction, or tongue twitchin, neither from your predictions, my pen'll fuck u up in between lines worse than karma sutra positions, you missing the point and it dont need a answer, come try to come at us, we'll diagnois you wit cancer, dont make us put ya style on a respirator, with the rest of you haters, to the n'sayers
this gang bang brought to you by … a strange team decstar and amazin cot damn it! … the game changed but what still remains is the king and forensic teams struggling to find a motive for the choke strangling a picture’s worth a million words so picture me hanging weak mc’s from trees with severed knees and the caption reads “you can’t walk the walk of the King …so you won’t be needing these..” I appease any tease …and spit it at any rate And fondle ya post unsuspectingly like date rape The air I breath between true mc’s is a gape Cause the closest you getting to this rhythm is the starting gate … Fast and furious …wit it when I spit it deals the fate …got you curious like Kenyans …in a race
you know what tha fuck it is. tha unlikely, unusual collab, Decstar and Amazin. ya'll better recognize. me first, Zin second verse. get ready to lay down, playas.
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2732, RE: Beyond Words Posted by freedomfighter, Wed Nov-05-03 08:30 AM
not bad
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2733, RE: Beyond Words Posted by Ambergirl, Thu Nov-06-03 05:06 AM
Dec and Amazin,
pen'll fuck u up in between lines worse than karma sutra positions,
…Fast and furious …wit it when I spit it deals the fate …got you curious like Kenyans …in a race
Yall messed me up with those lines for real. A strange team maybe, but killin it - Most Definitely.
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2734, Strange Indeed -- *chuckles* Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Nov-07-03 03:06 AM
>brought to you by … a strange team >decstar and amazin
But it works! -- *wink*
(((Good Job Both Of You)))
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2735, too many lines to quote Posted by delrica, Sat Nov-08-03 09:19 AM
that's what's up. keep it up
*walks away mutterin' "karma sutra positions" and shakin' head*
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2736, RE: too many lines to quote Posted by Decstar, Sun Nov-09-03 04:52 PM
LOL
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2737, bringin back the old dazed vibes Posted by RatpackSlim, Mon Nov-10-03 12:28 AM
when treach and freddie foxxx got down together...
solid.
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2738, RE: Beyond Words Posted by amazin, Mon Nov-17-03 08:30 AM
hot collab ...i don't know what brought this about but it was a banger
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2739, ahhh Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Sat Nov-29-03 07:53 PM
a good read...a good read...
you two work well together. perhaps youll post another collab piece, no? ah im just being selfish and making demands..dont mind me!
:) peace ladee
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2740, On Friendship Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Thu Nov-06-03 06:34 AM
Mob mentality Comrades' strength lies in numbers Friends are for the weak
Contradiction man comrades are strong friends combined to fight oppression
the true oppression is the lesson you need to feed, stressin the greed of deeds, blessin the seeds, i curse the whole tree, nursery of lemmings leap from the same cliff, my spine remains stiff, defy the lame whiff, or sniff- i'm sorry, STENCH of the in-crowd, my backbone won't allow my brow to dip in the direction of infection, purge the whole section, leaving one, for my survival, i don't need a so-called friend to put an end to all my rivals
Seeds smile at trees withers are nature's yawn proud predecessors are swallowed by innocence and cartwheels spin the horizons of my mind, a child evermore, in time to the seething acceptance I see and feel in sonic intervals, everything in it's proper place at any given moment, full of the trust that that comes when you know that music is your very best friend
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This has been, a G-Squared and Chaotic production. I wanted to try something different, and G was kind enough to lend his voice to the task. The order is simple. We went tit-fot-tat on two verses. It was meant to be a ying vs yang type of thing. I led off with the negative energy, while the positive vibes were all G.
Before anyone asks, no I don't feel this way about friendship... well... not completely. I just took my anti-social vibe and magnified it a bit.
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2741, Ahhhhh Yessss -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Nov-07-03 03:02 AM
I felt the ying & yang tug~of~war (back & forth) in the difference of opinions regarding FRIENDSHIP! -- *nice*
I'm sure you don't necessarily feel THAT negative about friendship *NOW* -- But I can see how your sentiments expressed in this flow could be true -- Resulting from being burned or backstabbed in the past, nahmean?
You two really gave interesting, opposing stances on the subject with clever~ness & finesse!
*Yes ~ Yes ~ Ya'll*
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2742, indeed Posted by delrica, Sat Nov-08-03 09:20 AM
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2743, RE: On Friendship Posted by Decstar, Sun Nov-09-03 04:58 PM
ahh, i'm feelin both sides of this joint. ya'll flipped it nice.
lol now brought up some good evil things about friendship. i'm feelin this piece. good to see ya G's
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2744, co-sign Posted by RatpackSlim, Mon Nov-10-03 12:15 AM
with all these folks...
nice way to flip both sides of the coin. and that's my favorite thing about collabos. the ability to do that.
good job, both of you!
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2745, RE: co-sign Posted by Ambergirl, Mon Nov-10-03 04:19 PM
Like a well-executed relay , the hand offs here were carried off lovely. The poem read more like two sides of the same person, someone fighting with their own conscience.
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2746, RE: On Friendship (not to be NEGATIVE) Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Nov-12-03 08:38 PM
but i liked the concept of this slightly more then i liked the piece as a whole
i felt like you could have done more with it, i love the idea
and Now, i love when people are able to identify and exaggerate cynicism about things, i think the first two smaller tit for tat sections was very effective at expressing the theme
really nice idea guys, peace
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2747, RE: On Friendship Posted by amazin, Mon Nov-17-03 08:33 AM
i kinda got lost in there ..... i would love to see the remix of this
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2748, Song of the Seraph Posted by 3rd i, Thu Nov-06-03 08:52 AM
Poet A I am dangerous wild Somehow I lost my ability to believe in myself And I don't want to be here any more. I'm lost. Don't let love go to waste. Emotion I just wanna take care of your wounds. To kiss the places where your scars have never fully healed Because I'm not fully healed. I know that my life is in your hands. Right now you need to understand that I am more than human But i am nothing with you
Poet B As I gaze into myself through the mirror of your eyes I see the despair that once was me fading sweetly from my purest places of black Yet inside I fear the closeness and intimacy we create I'm scared of the things you make me feel And though I think I fear losing you .....gaining you scares me almost as much Still it's not you that I fear but myself instead And what may come of love
Poet A we are the blues singer inspiration a haunting melody over the bayou stories told to scare children to sleep beneath the gray and imposing sky we seek to find shelter in others.. the unspoken truth binds us with whose iii do i see you. lingering in your shadows always waiting always longing always sighing restless you are a dream that fades with the dawning of the day. your name slides across my lips as my eyes open the unspoken truth binds us........
Poet B You try to untie my soul. But Add only another knot. Love is just a fable I know by heart A hunting tale that methodically follows me Yet refuses to acknowledge my presence as with arms outstretched to a dying sky I plead and yearn to be completed..... either and answer to unasked question, or just an end, end of pain existence, anything that will save me from these bleeding cuts that never heal....... wounds that run deeper than the soul itself fragments of meaning and shades of unforgiveness pain so unbearable it surpasses death How can a one-winged angel ever fly..... ...only by being joined by another.... beautiful you with damaged me such effort in holding the pieces together allseeing you with desperate me somehow becoming one in my mind
Poet A You see beneath my skin Licked the hallows of my wounds And cried your tears into my jagged crevices And what may come of love. always just out of reach And if you should fall asleep first know that I will Not be long behind. Come weep your tears in my lap Let your sobs rack your body Howl your pain to the heavens Weep my tears standing on the edge of madness and seeing you across the void standing on the same edge i know you i know the name of your soul i know that this is not the lifetime for us you are the heaven glorious in your brilliance i am the sea floating just beneath the surface so that it is your face i see as my reflection. the night is given to us...beloved of eurydice so howl your tears call out to the night sky cry out and i will answer
Poet B And though I occasionally fall from the sky your always there to catch me in hands soft with the velvet of unspoken devotion and cushion my crash with fingers that close around me, strong but oh-so-gentle like butterflies made of a child's innocent faith I will hold you there lips pressed to my scarred knuckles whispering strength in your tired ears as you breathing hope into my heart quenching my thirst with your depths and singing me to sleep on waves of quiet lullabies sung by this adoring soul And when I awake I will open my hands and lift you up to see the morning revel in our flight even as I lose you in the sun's molten glare.
Poet A=3rd i Poet B=Knowone
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2749, RE: Song of the Seraph Posted by Natalie, Thu Nov-06-03 10:07 AM
oh, wow... that was really peaceful... how imperfect love can be viewed when we don't see ourselves as worthy... but i suppose it's the giving that gets us to being worthy, and you two definitely let the personas here give love... just one thing, how come they never really share love except at a distance or come close except at the fall apart stage?
peace,
n.
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2750, RE: Song of the Seraph Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Nov-07-03 03:08 AM
(((Soft & Sweet)))
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2751, RE: Song of the Seraph Posted by Decstar, Sun Nov-09-03 05:04 PM
damn this hurt. this aint even right, yo. this was something else. ya'll displayed pain, sorrow and everything in this one. this broke me.
>>>>I'm scared of the things you make me feel And though I think I fear losing you .....gaining you scares me almost as much Still it's not you that I fear but myself instead And what may come of love<<<
i couldnt read too much more from there. i'll get back to tha last two stanzas anotha day.
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2752, RE: Song of the Seraph Posted by RatpackSlim, Mon Nov-10-03 12:35 AM
this was beautiful, both of you. whew. i love COLLABS!
okay, i'm calming down. seriously, though, you both brought it hard.
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2753, RE: Song of the Seraph Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Nov-12-03 08:51 PM
WOW!
*sits still in amazement*
i am really feeling this you 2...this stirred some moods that havent been around in a minute...
the desperation expressed in this made me wanna go hide in some dark corner in the fetal position...
the tenderness and oh so co-dependance on each other was perfect, a lil overwhelming...
you two skillfully meshed into lovers in this one, i was kinda eerie for real...
Beautiful Drop, the part dec quoted and this part is what really standed out to me
"You try to untie my soul. But Add only another knot. Love is just a fable I know by heart A hunting tale that methodically follows me Yet refuses to acknowledge my presence"
thats amazing, *applauds*
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2754, RE: Song of the Seraph Posted by amazin, Mon Nov-17-03 08:36 AM
oH not to know this feeling .......if i didn't this would prolly seem so unclear to me me ...but oHHH i know this feeling oh so well...which made this sooo hot!
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2755, Breathe Posted by DPP2, Thu Nov-06-03 10:54 AM
voices in my headache split my dome with lightning bolt precision voices in my headspace echo like canyon songs that make you listen voices in my headcase make my crazy seem saner voices in my headcold make this sickness a no-brainer i can't shake 'em they just keep on stirring i can't erase 'em they just keep recurring i don't believe in beliefs anymore my thoughts have just moved into doubt and all i can do between my mind and my mouth is to give 'em free reign and let them out...
choices tempt my left brain to touch some other realm choices clutch my wept veins i cant see no other hell choices bully my thoughts into makin wrong decisions choices accompany movement i cant stand to see this vision theres no justice in a pool of many fishes theres no justice in the rain that caters ditches the animals are loose and ready to run wild but we all play it close under the micorscope of a birthed child single file, the design of the future sleepless nights wondering why life recruited ya
so vices in my grip keep me slow and steady virtues i let slip slide when they're good and goddamn ready i stumble through this trip i'm a blurry visionary i keep records that all skip and the little that i know varies i can see cloudy now the sun is gone i'm a solo creeping vine all the first kisses you planted on are fading seconds at a time so now i pray me down too deep i wish that i could save us these lifestyles of the unknown and cheap might make you rich and famous...
quite anxious language with a closed fist ignited fuel spokin dangerous chose this to be ya modern tool wrote these pages life was simple before time was cruel cant control the matrix so we hold faith eye level like an iron rule status becomes non existant in the fields of catogory hold still in persistance cant yield to words derogatory heads still but they listinin wake the fuck up for the lil children!!! make moves now before later caters ya death if i had one wish yall the entire earth gets my last breath
breathe.................
brought to you by 2 cats youve come to love and respect......Dunno!!!!.....Slimbandit!!!!
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2756, Ummmmm -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Nov-07-03 03:15 AM
RatpackSlim?
And who else?
Seriously, I dunno who this one was executed by.
Slimbandit? -- Whoze that?
Very nice in any case -- *shruggs* -- I likes -- ;^)
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2757, clarification Posted by RatpackSlim, Fri Nov-07-03 04:44 AM
that'd be me and instant axis aka frakage aka lefrak aka nick fury aka the guy who threw down with me on this one. we alternated verses.
glad to be dug,
slim
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2758, Domepome Poets back in effect!!! Posted by 3rd i, Fri Nov-07-03 03:27 AM
yeah now this reminds me of the Golden years gone by!!
love the flow. the writing stayed in the same vein so i couldn't tell who wrote what....yeah...it's like that for real!
MWAH
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2759, RE: Domepome Poets back in effect!!! Posted by Ambergirl, Fri Nov-07-03 04:48 AM
Your words were like beats drummin up my spirit. I liked the sounds when I read it aloud. Im high on this piece furreal.
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2760, RE: Breathe Posted by Natalie, Fri Nov-07-03 05:06 AM
i really don't know what "classic" or "golden" is on here, but i like this one! very different feel from everything else i've seen. just a q...why this style versus the across the page?
peace,
n.
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2761, natalie... Posted by RatpackSlim, Tue Nov-11-03 11:44 PM
um, i can only speak for me
but i don't consider myself an emcee per se (although my flow is very influenced by hip hop and emceeing), so when i started this, it just made sense to me to kick it that way visually
ax ran with it like the pro quarterback he is.
and there you have it. vh-1's behind the poetry.
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2762, RE: natalie... Posted by Natalie, Wed Nov-12-03 04:51 AM
yeah, ax inboxed to let me know...said he was going with your flow. i like it, though :)
n.
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2763, RE: Breathe Posted by amazin, Mon Nov-17-03 08:40 AM
DPP~~~in the place to be ...ha ha ...you got dunno and slim ...cot damn
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2764, clearly Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Sat Nov-29-03 07:56 PM
yall tryin to upstage the rest of us huh??! wanna take this outside? hmm?!! lets see if your fists fly as fast as those words, eh?!
ah im kidding. man...this one read so smoothly...excellent. just excellent. *applause* peace ladee
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2765, Time After Time Posted by KnowOne, Fri Nov-07-03 11:02 AM
Time After Time
Poet A:
There are times when my tears taste sweet and I can choke down my words about this miserable world
Times when munitions & earth’s collide to play that bitter sweet dirge Of history
Times when the earth stops spinning for a second, when every cloud has a shape, and I can outline it's silver lining with my fingertip. There are times when my heart beats faster and I can inhale the ocean's song. Those are the simplest of moments.
When the stars show signs of hope for tomorrow's yesterday and everything turns to your shade of white. Sometimes you can hear me crying.
It's always after the rain, they say, when the sun can shine it's brightest.
There are times when the air tastes sweeter, as I whisper secrets in its ear. Times when understanding is the last thing on your mind and all you want to do is forget. The horizon lasts all day while I can recall moments of pure perfection Times when stars that fall as soft kisses embrace the shadows and gamble the wind.
There are times when the moon doesn't set and the sun refuses to rise. Times when vowels mean more than words, when letters equal out to romances And sentences sustain sanity. Sometimes I believe in fairy tales, of happiness, love and peace. Greatness envelopes the mountains in ovals and you're left sleeping in the squares.
Then there are times when our eyes look brighter in the dark while sketching out the colors involved, all in black and white.
There are times when I can finally see forever.
Times when things fall apart And on occasion, unexpectedly fall into place And I smile in my sleep Sometimes……
Poet B:
Those times -- When the air tastes like raw sugarcane I discern -- Tart juices of bittersweet pain Hiding teardrops -- As fear drops In camouflaged rain
The stain of sandalwood Creates aromas of change I smell it -- Burning like incense in the wind I tell it: -- "Be flexible when you bend" Spin -- Around adversity & obstacles built by men
For the forces of nature And God's blessings are in our favor Therefore -- I savor Lemon~flavored lessons of life Watching golden sunrises Cutting horizons with a silver knife
Convincing strife that I can handle it Candle it -- Under a flame of romance Cuz every now & then I desire to dance With destiny -- Melting heartbeats with poetic fires Simmering serenity over the rest of me
But it's best to be aware Of irregular weights in external balance Sometimes I tip scales to the left So ~centering~ can be a bit of a challenge But *KnowOne* knows the future And the past is far behind us We keep smiling thru wars & turmoil Praying for love to protect & remind us
(((That Time Heals All Wounds)))
Poet A: KnowOne Poet B: PhotoSynthesis
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2766, RE: Time After Time Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Nov-11-03 09:07 PM
It's *Classic* -- *smiles*
I *know* it's recycled -- But it's still CLASSIC! -- *Yeah*
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2767, Word Sis'.... Posted by KnowOne, Wed Nov-12-03 05:19 AM
Word.
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2768, shit ... it happens Posted by delrica, Fri Nov-07-03 11:09 AM
beautiful bird determined in its flight to crap onto my head
running for cover blindly turned corner i stepped in manure instead
hopping one footed attempting to clean my shoe I slip falling down
frustrated ego bruised but not broken i sigh rise up to move on
bystanders laughing I feel good inside having brightened their morning
walking off slowly rain begins pouring i watch as nature unfolds
oh wait that is just a lazy window washer pissing from above
cloaked in excriment washed in wasted energy i stand bewildered
while still above me the bird circles with bowels full debating my fate
defeated i wait the inevitable takes place shit..it happens
a knowone and delrica collabo! oh yeah...forgot to tell the backdrop. it was knowone's idea. we went verse for verse, he started...i ended. this was the most hilarious thing i've done. good times! we gots to do that again
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2769, whole new meaning to crappy Senryu's Posted by KnowOne, Fri Nov-07-03 11:16 AM
LOL! That was fun Sis'.
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2770, LMAO! Posted by Natalie, Fri Nov-07-03 11:23 AM
The first piece to put humour in a very ill day ;) yeah, you put some laughter in my afternoon. nice collab you two! you played off each other's lines nicely.
peace,
n.
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2771, Very Funny & Creative "Comedy Capers" -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-09-03 04:55 PM
*Smiles* -- *Chuckles* -- *Grins* -- *Snickers* -- Okay okay -- (((LAUGHING)))
This was really fun to read! -- *Thanks Y'all*
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2772, better to be Posted by RatpackSlim, Mon Nov-10-03 12:38 AM
pissed off than pissed on...
d'oh!
nice work...!
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2773, now that was great!!! Posted by 3rd i, Wed Nov-12-03 04:48 AM
KUDOS!!!!!!!
Q: what's the deal with puerto rican lovers?
A:well for starters they do salsa and merengue in your pussy. that helps. (c) Damali
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2774, hahaha!! Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Sat Nov-29-03 07:50 PM
too funny!! *holds tummy* oh...my stomach hurts from laughing! thanks!!
peace ladee
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2775, Feast de Musique Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Fri Nov-07-03 08:28 PM
"g"
an alchemist I distill my lifetimes into this moment and within it I trickle music up and down my chakras, and it spills into the breast of the universe where it sits full of nutrition until it's needed
"p"
heated as I dance in celebration tasting lactation from the breast of the u~ni~verse where the first shall be last and the last shall be first climbing karmas ladders to sweet musical feasts served on sterling silver platters by bipolar beasts but your nectar'd nutrition brought cerebrals to fruition hearing distilled alchemy had me tasting your ambition
"g"
But my substance echoes in arcs that grow wider too, over expanses of space a rendition of the tweaking of the pentultimate superstring that sets all of creation into perpetual motion, an ocean of soundscapes cresting and cascading, mingled with temporal language and the hint of mint, at once a statement, and a suggestion
"p"
aahhhh refreshing mint -- bent on chillin' to acquired tastes based on lethal language flow where Mic~ro~cosms & soundscapes grow I sho' nuff' know -- what I heard on "G's" e~((motion))~al, music renditions sent me his awesome CD under Birthday present conditions beats & lyrics stream hysterics on anotha level of deep thought if he hadn't given it 2 me as a gift, I mos' def' would've bought
"g" = gsquared "p" = PhotoSynthesis
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2776, RE: Feast de Musique Posted by Decstar, Sun Nov-09-03 05:11 PM
well, damn, can i get a copy too?
lol
this was nice. love how ya'll fed off each other. and i'm lovin how G's flipped that triangle stanza. damn, du, can u teach me that? (lik smiles)
lol nice one ya'll
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2777, RE: Feast de Musique Posted by 3rd i, Mon Nov-10-03 05:57 AM
LOVED IT!!! oh my god this was just a wonderful display. KUDOS to you both!
Q: what's the deal with puerto rican lovers?
A:well for starters they do salsa and merengue in your pussy. that helps. (c) Damali
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2778, RE: Feast de Musique Posted by Ambergirl, Mon Nov-10-03 04:27 PM
Why bother sleeping with this kind of art to take in and digest? This piece is alchemy at work. The result of that process is beauty such as this. Love the way you two played with sounds and built off each other for the glory of music.
You gets MUCH love.
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2779, requisite affection Posted by Decstar, Sun Nov-09-03 04:02 PM
for you i want to be like the illest poet ever that female mc who spits clever, writes whatever and never forgets to rhyme with lyrical thoughts always on my mind from sunset til sunrise, for you i want to write bold words that hold down and overcome the insanity, witting soundful words that are invisible to read and only to be heard when said by me, i want to be like a magical pencil with unbreakable lead that writes strong words to to be proofread, originality should not be corrected, this is off the subject but i want to be takin to an exotic place in my bed and make love until deep thoughts reach my head and then before its to late i will try to remember everything beautiful done and said, so then i can grab my pen and write and reminiss while you kissed my lips, these feelings are so intense, if described in one sentence, it would not make sense, it would make dollar bills, considering every thrill, everything you do to me is ill, like head to toe body chills, you make me feel fantastic so lets keep this on the real
yea, real lovely and deep and everything in between, i love it when you're all of that and more, so i can be the words for emotions, healings for the sores, the vibrates to your callings, the catches to your falling, my wifey (pen) bleeds my passion with infinite ink for you, as i have infinite heat for you, everlasting love, so conceptional, so exhilerating, you are truely sexy and beautiful, see, i want to be the name that keeps your flood gates broken, the eyes that stops your motions, the voice that sets fire to your insides, the touch that leaves you mesmerized, if food was for thought, i'm full off you everyday, you're the reason why sometimes i write winter for spring and christmases for May, why i fall back in realms of us and playback situations and ways to make you blush, rewind things i want to do and then do them to you, see, we're off subject again, but, what were your dreams like before i stepped in, tell me so i can write them down and throw them away, let me IN deep so you wont have to be ashamed, i can write stories of your motivation, then paint canvas of our once segregation, but just let me write you tales of "i love you"s with adjectives of troubles, verbs an nouns of beauty and adverbs of me, you can do the part of speech, but we can both do "you are so special to me" let's jus write and speak
THA LIONESS and DS givin ya'll a lil something on tha love tip. she first, me second. j, i love you
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2780, RE: requisite affection Posted by 3rd i, Mon Nov-10-03 05:58 AM
my favorite line: my wifey (pen) bleeds my passion with infinite ink for you, as i have infinite heat for you,
mos LOVELY *soul clap*
Q: what's the deal with puerto rican lovers?
A:well for starters they do salsa and merengue in your pussy. that helps. (c) Damali
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2781, Sistaspeak Posted by Ambergirl, Mon Nov-10-03 03:45 PM
A: Made strong I've held up against the wind the back and forth shifted my perspective forced me to focus my direction tune into the eternal within exposing memory bares the broken lines jagged minds can make for an unfortunate climb no more knuckled hold on slipping shoulders I've settled into this craggy rest (release) with synthesizing sistas who spin like straw into gold word magicians sistas with baby bags in sling backs or tracks weaving down the back wrapped earths essential in cyphers and sho nuff mackstresses with little tact
we
mirrors for each on which to lean until we break the images that stand between self and the woman becoming
B: Whole with our enlightened being Got to repair them cracks Girl, you are my confidant and friend Not the scapegoat to invest my failings in No need to compete or roll our eyes Grab your seed and I’ll grab mine Set our perceived differences aside Teach the youth how to cross this line Into our future of Self love Sister love Human love It’s all divine Meditated on life and asked the creator above Help me understand and gain this thing called love He gave me hardships and mis steps Fire and brimstone imposed by others Battles with myself Friends, Parents, and lovers I aint saying I don’t love my brothers But I have to explain That I can divide my pain by Vibing with another lady On an emotional plane So I thank him for all women White, yellow, and black Ladies Come Close We gotta have each others backs
A: Standing on shoulders of ancestral mothers who knew struggle ingesting their pain like pills the end result the same, the will survives where the flesh cannot when he left you thought your heart would stop but its not hardly over lessons taught we stay at the board the more we learn the more we grow extending the energy that exists no boundary points just uplifted fists we pick our battles and yours are mine Im not referring to the schoolyard kind playtime's over we breakin molds crossing lines, leaving the baggage behind
We are made strong and holding on but breathing deep these days making sure we rest these days come on Sis, let's break some bread bless the temple, anoint the head keep the foods simple ital we shall press on become the future of our foremother selves
A: Ambergirl B: Imagination 7
*Raise fists for Girlpower*
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2782, *Raise fists for Girlpower* Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Nov-11-03 09:04 PM
I raise my fists with you! -- *smiles*
You two created a bond on this pCe that's tighter than a three stranded rope!
Tie a knot & hang on! -- *wink*
(((Love It)))
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2783, RE: Sistaspeak Posted by Decstar, Sun Nov-16-03 06:17 AM
umph, ok, hella hot right here. sista power indeed. get at em Am's
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2784, Like A Soothing Balm -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Nov-10-03 07:56 PM
This was lovely & healing! -- *smiles*
(((You're Still A Collabo Ho, Decstar))) -- *chuckles*
But I can't talk -- Cuz I am too! -- *wink*
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2785, Twilight Zone Posted by MiracleRic, Mon Nov-10-03 09:10 PM
"m"
Throw a molotov cocktail through ya atrium, the age we in, aint engaging him, instead left the fire changing him, to a rose, I suppose to take the burn off, plant it in a half-full Smirnoff, peep that it wasn’t half-empty? Simply a late-bloomer, recreate the mental state, with a wish to stay sooner, wait…I’m approachin the zone, that feels like home, where demons shake horns, with halos, there goes… the land where pimps get smacked by they ho’s, these times are awakenings to those that doze, its like a fresh change of clothes, I might, shine like twilight, My fight, is not the same as yours, But by night I overcame the shame that grows, untamed my name, and found a grain that flows, but to be the flame that glows, first i had to change my reign (rain) to snows…FROZE... now today has come for some, they see an eclipse and with these lips I replace the gun for them so with open arms we embrace the sun"
"p"
The sun quickly runs from the moon's eclipse It stumbles & trips over twilight The highlight of my night Slowly approaching the (((Zone))) But I don't wanna be alone So I pull out my bag of miracles Sphericals circle my dome I'm dizzy from spinning back to the beginning -- Of highs & lows -- The land where pimps get smacked by they ho’s Where Emperors strutt they butts with no clothes Invisible foes throw blows at those who close the doors to metaphors As rain heavily pours from deep mental shores Whirling round & splashing with lightning flashing Cashin' checks carelessly written with the tongue Mayday, Mayday -- The leak is sprung Electrocute the moon -- Freeze the sultry sun I embrace miracle's face -- We melt -- Becoming ONE With liquid hourglasses -- Watching minutes turn to hours The day quickly passes -- Mist turns to sandy showers Mentality changes with the passing of time Those who sleep thru the storms miss pyrotechnics prime
'm'
The eye of the storm, is much more sublime corona with lemon, tequlia with lime drunk off virgin sips, photo and ric tonight is mergin lips hold that...kodak...thought take a pic of a Persian Prince *wakes up* all alone in the twilight zone but notices his turban fits
;)
p = Photo m = MiracleRic
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2786, RE: Twilight Zone Posted by Decstar, Tue Nov-11-03 05:28 PM
wow, this was so crazy, yet so lovely, yet so strange, yet such a beauty or work. man, this is tha shit right here. this is tha best one by far. sorry ya'll, but this really made me do too many things in my head. and i'm suppose to be writin something. ya'll gonna make me flip it now. beautiful, mind teasin joint
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2787, RE: Twilight Zone Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-30-03 06:38 AM
I don't think I really checked out the finished product thoroughly -- *sheeesh* -- This was kinda nice, huh? -- *smiles*
Yup -- We done good -- ;^)
Nice workin' witcha Slick Ric! -- *wink*
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2788, Soul~Mate Serenade With A Dash Of Melancholy -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Nov-11-03 08:59 PM
"pl"
I spent an eternity thinking on a moment, When God truly has no opponents, When my soulmate and I are of one component, Yet the visage of dreams is the only place that has shown it. have i blown it? I question whether happiness is real, Or if happiness is just being okay with the cards life deals. maybe it's a shady clip or kind of glimpse concealed By the lies and hurts of others and the pain they wield. So I yield to a smile, just to shield the guile Brought about by past scars and all the wasted while File it under miscellaneous, but there's a pattern to the tile On life's bathroom floor, where I sit indian style: It goes love, hate, push, shove, great, Small, insignificant, on time and late, Give, take, stay bent to be straight Have a sit down with women I stood up on dates, They all say I guess we just couldn't relate, So for now I stay single on the search for a mate. Sometimes I sit at home, wonder and contemplate How foolish of me to think that I could debate With the laws of life: it's each man for himself, So sometimes, I gotta stash my heart on the shelf. And i'm sorry if i've turned some things off from you, But somethings deserve just a solo run through.
"p"
Deep thoughts cross my mind at diverse times Filling space like smoke curling in ringlets of reality Double~Laced with misted mushroom particles Blooming into pods of passion & pity Searching 4 something sweet Something so unique & pretty as third eye sight love & tenderness Violently thrown into the abyss of nothingness Floating thru the cosmos of osmosis Transmigrating from soul 2 soul Spinning dangerously out of control Shit gits old after awhile But still I *smile* like a goofy child ~Intoxicated~ by second~hand smoke residue Sticking to my heartbeats like super~glue Cuz after all these years I still can't help but feel deep love for you!
Always / All Ways
"pl" = PantheraLeo
"p" = PhotoSynthesis
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2789, RE: Soul~Mate Serenade With A Dash Of Melancholy Posted by Natalie, Wed Nov-12-03 04:49 AM
pl and p, see your inbox.
natalie
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2790, ::I n d e c i s i v e:: Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Wed Nov-12-03 02:21 PM
"k"
I’ll chew on the bullet if you can inspire me Enough to write a lifetime of passion and regret. I’d ravage your intention so good, You’ll be coming back for more; Like the junkie that you are. I’ll knock you up, and make you carry 9 months of a mistake That can’t be treated like one. That needs to be loved enough to later understand Its lifetime of passion and regret. These thoughts are laced with mania, Fixed on drugs, and stuck on whiskey dreams That you CAN'T make come true. I’m bent, hung over the couch, Debating if I should point the gun At eighteen years of apathy; Or you.
"p"
Go ahead -- Shoot me! Put me out of my misery Your apathy ain't got nutthin' on my ability To wrap my soul around your heart & squeeze Tease regrets with $10 dollar bets of: "He'll Never Do It" How many times have we done this before -- And how many times are we gon' go thru it? Back & forth with drugs & drink -- What~chu~think? Things are gonna be different this time? Tell you what! I'll get my Black Widow revolver -- You go git yo Nine We'll have a duel -- The first to hesitate is a fainthearted fool Poppin' holes in whiskey dreams -- Annihilating triple beams We'll drink from streams of lamentation -- Pass out from intoxication Sleep like the dead in each other's arms -- On a bed of nails under fate's moonlight charms
~Indecision is still a decision ~
"k" = KnowOne "p" = PhotoSynthesis
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2791, WOW!!!! Posted by Natalie, Wed Nov-12-03 03:01 PM
this was good! know, i think photo just showed your words up and flipped your taunt over the edge! good show you guys!
peace,
n.
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2792, RE: ::I n d e c i s i v e:: Posted by Invisible Vision, Wed Nov-12-03 07:32 PM
damn this was great......
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2793, RE: ::I n d e c i s i v e:: Posted by Ambergirl, Thu Nov-13-03 03:49 AM
OOOoooh. I was definitely riding the wave of emotions conjured up in that poem. Wow, yall. Outstanding, honest and tempting. Photo's a "Ride or Die Chick"!!!! :)
Peace
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2794, Optimas and 94' collab Posted by Optimas_intelligentrhymes, Fri Nov-14-03 10:59 AM
aight young dunn, what ya got a gun? ya comin back from under suns, bean baked by the drum, ya puffin son? maybe, cause ya mind is back on rewind, looking for time in hind, perspective, looking back, its placid, calm and wasted. okay, show me what will power, ya got, and shower, the devour of the heart, ya know, light the storm when ya come apart, i wanna see that arch, spittin fire, below the dark up to the march, of marches, in the parts, of parted seas, and mark these, words, we headed....switch'em automatic cleanin attics for old antics by silver bandits, hero sand pitch, to desert mix, wit water, ya got mud, now, ya dirty righ? been playin in the system tryin to figure out the blisters? okay. what ya got, i wanna see those fists kid.
I fight for hiphop cause its fallen off, knowledge lost, gotten soft in fact its cotton soft, plotting thoughts and mind patterns trying to find ways, to abolish the fake and swallow the hate, in 5 ways, or less I try to bring hiphop back to the way it was, favor me savor me hiphop makes the path safe for me, nowadays cats speaking blasphemy actually I spit it passionly, bring my battle tactics cats hating on my antics, cause Im spitting the exclusive new shit but keeping the old school in me, simply cats is acting shifty out to get me but none yall can rip me, my blood pumps excessive amounts of adrenaline, hiphop rushes through me, it consumes me and keeps my heart peddling, settling in my blood like medicine, spitting from my heart like if it pumps saliva, I conduct the fires that remain in my soul so when I release my rhymes, I heat your mind cause I spit with lots of soul, a hiphop prophet yo
me and bartek first verse is bartek's second is mine
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2795, HipHop Prophets -- Both Of Ya -- *wink* Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-30-03 06:46 AM
Better late than never, huh?
Sorry I hadn't peeped this B~4 -- But I'm glad I did before it got archived!
Nice flowstream guys! -- ;^)
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2796, Triumphant Ten (Full Version) Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Nov-19-03 09:15 AM
Prodigious Poet:
I bomb atomically, follow my philosophies, Obviously, Pro is on a poetic monopoly, Mocking me, I'll steal your virginity, its robbery, Free with the sodomy, possibly you're obsolete, Battle-scarred, KnowOne, moderating tremendous, Stupendous, archived every time my pen hits, I'm trying to triumph, praying to Judah's Lion, Iron bars, scared on my way to Zion, But she's past nine months... So the baby came crying, now I'm relying, Trying to stay kosher, but those were the one's who crucified Him... Poppa's Pen is potent, I'm hoping what I wrote, Opens doors so yall call soar, I'm trying to give them wisdom but everyone wants war... So I continue to come raw and rigorous, Don't fuck with the flow, It's Pro-fuckin-Digious
Laxidazical:
kill kill... stab stab... murdah murdah murdah.. pass me the piece/ dibble dabble, slapped with hairgrease/ little asshole, couldnt step, trapped in stairs, g/ and you know what scares me? how one kid bleeds so much/ double dutch, bubble busts- snap ya knee with a crutch/ so on and so such, ya just not plush enough/ cats take it to the nose like im spittin backy snuff/ back it up, the dramatic rap tactics symantics/ with the black matic strapped with silencers for my antics/ 30 miles to Tical and runnin/ wheels hummin, ya girls cummin/ im drunk, tryna strangle something/ pass me that gun and imma show ya what it means to be gangsta/ imma show ya why notebook thugs only bleed on paper..
One_Man_Amazin:
The great Gatsby, …I make it grim to them that try to flo in the foot steps of these Tims ‘Zin lets the lights dim on M&M’s sendin them … back to the lab re~pen them in repentance of the script …prehistoric au~Thor~Sourus …adding synonyms … for text~ure …I still bless like the pro~fess~or that I am … while sound alikes …pass the mic around …One _Man … “King ‘Zin!!” that I am … idle…aims at your brain blame …me for sniper shots in my inbox playing the name game …was that for me? … Even if I penned it …with you in mind if subliminally you find I dis you …the take it and run wit it do what you got to do … who? …who? … me
cattle pronging mc’s … branding O_M_A on their backs like greek lettered frats…even when the odds are stacked …I respond react …make ‘em retract …any statements made …about the king .
Blak Yukon:
know the team hold the cream scheme for those by any means young roll with older team overload f'sho the soldier mean syllable weaponry slice of audio futuristic yrs ago back for first time for those who missed it so yo at it again in all blak like annakin sky spittin' blak hispanic v.i.transmittin'the damn shit as if the life depended on it i put bars to it the unheard beat in ya skullcap headnod,those who walk by like whats that?
Toothpick:
Triumphant turns, it’s a new page an Asian sage, floats over heads, down in a daze On the world’s stage all players are pawns, across the checkered landscape, we move with brains bullets and brawn, so check the mic levels, turn the treble to tremors, we off the Richter, off ya sister, no incest sicker, Now how you figure inbred rhymes are art? You’ve been warned, we foreshadowed like The Ides of March Clear skies, eyes movin’ but they never depart, they like darts, Bullseye peep philosophy, navigate through the silence of a hollow tree OKP, yo the science comes naturally So what up? No courage to congratulate? Not fukkin with us, you conjugate the verb masturbate, so amass the hate, and all fake bourgeois notions the page features nine proletariat poses...
~94~:
place it in the center, when come render, ender the pretenda agenda send a, bomb to the mendeh of arrange the, tek in a bar twixted by the far and wide, east or west, re-contemplate, reprogram, re focus on mind, triple re toasted, resurrected, facted, placid, always, deep inside a mantis, ripping like a throat itch, from the precision of the blade switch, on the get ready i got em fixed blixed suffixed and suffice to say, i reap and sway the movements of time in may, onwoard to parlay type may, fa rilla, the dilla billa grabba fillah of the filler, i take it back to artform in hands gripping, painted strokes of blood, it's written....when prophetic, poetic, triple breasted alliterated, words take forms i reveal the hated.
Nowachaoticthing;
It's the summit of the future kings execution song for those who say the wrong thing drama brings my karma's sting, my armor's bitch-proof scratchy voice of snitchy youths won't tell a stitch of truth mind your place or face the multiracial supermen no need for phonebooths respect the banner and begin again next movement like the roots battlecry Apache like we swarmin Custer's troops who can pry the latch-key like we're jackin all your loot you can try to snatch me if you think that you can catch me but like helen keller clad in pantyliners, you can't scratch me lay waste to your batalions from Chicago to Wenatchee
Decstar:
to tha hasty streets of kenly, it's tha young tidda, no one sicka, pun intenda, shoulder chippa, i'm tha zippa to tha style you wish you had strapped on, this is tha damaging clique you wish you was put on, triumph the tyranny, the attack of the OK killa P's, the voted infantry is deadly and furious, the dream team atrocious, something above ya being, ya cats aint seeing that after this, there will be no breathing, tha machanics so atheletic, we cant help it, so hardcore, it'll hit ya and make ya head split, call a medic, cuz we that damn ACCURET, we so in tha zone, we know ya'll wishing we stop, yea, tha flow real nice, but it wont be so hot in ya throatbox, trying to dethrone tha clones with rocks, i think not, we throwing boulders at you molested soldiers spiting harms and hymns, let's see ya throat connected to our timbs, victory is settled, no need for tha tiger li, done with tha lyrical shadowboxing, ya'll aint ready
Instant Axis:
secret service announcement......snipers on patrol, jelly roll ya ho, slideshow 9 man team comfortable lead, battin 8th in the joint dont under estimate the steez/im steve garvey on the grind, inline rhyme, last of the mohecian shrine......mountain climb/round ball design draft pick in the mix, torch flame hand held grabbin my dick when i spit/politik and flip out jerk chicken great britan accent im such a handsome gent, Ax Is sent over from the holster callem the hulkster, freeze frame in sex flexin for my poster/hand me a soda pop im thirsty, curse me, serve me, i give it to ya like james worthy,number thirty......plus twelve......thats 42 size shoe 9 and a half on the wallabee boot/they callin recruits, "we need back up!!!!", ayo, fill that crown in my cup slut.....pimp strut off three bucks like i dont give a fuck....next batter up.......
MiracleRic:
serve platters up, when we shatter nuts, maybe body bag lady luck, grab her butt, she wouldn’t let me hit the lottery, debauchery, had to split her broccoli, fortunate necrophilia, chez chez le RIC et la Familia, I’m the last emperor, roman candle, the golden handle, of this 9 edge sword, on it soars, a heron, lords of the boards, branded to the core, of a poor Baron, on the shore, the treasure chest rests, me amore, is pleasure best? or is my quest to endure the sweat & gore, I coulda swore in Swahili, REALLY??? Maybe yo, ask Cuba as Radio, play the Yoruba tuba, groove as Buddha as a baby tho, baby joe mighty young still rightly hung, here prince hakeem come, supreme drum, throwin axel foley in, holy when, napoleon complex, bomb threats on Vietnam jets, as The Divine Nine wets, we stomp the line for Father Time’s steps
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2797, Hey Ric... Posted by Toothpick, Wed Nov-19-03 09:25 AM
inbox.
peace, 2th.
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2798, RE: Triumphant Ten (Full Version) Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-30-03 06:52 AM
I already responded to this flow on the board -- But I'll also tell you HERE --
THIS WAS OVERWHELMING~LY NICE -- (((TRIUMPHANT STEEZE))) -- FROM TOP TO BOTTOM! -- ;^)
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2799, kisses and kitties Posted by RatpackSlim, Thu Nov-20-03 09:32 AM
R: i'm tryin' to be a badass and yr giving me kisses and kitties. how am i supposed to stay stone when you melt me to hot chocolate city? this isn't fun. this isn't fair. my image is crumbling like crackers. i try to puff out my chest and you change my rancor to laughter. and please stop with the smiles your affection isn't impressive. well, okay. the hell it ain't and lord in heaven help this.
L: if it werent for your words i wouldnt dream no serenity in the sunrise pushing stars off the skyline
painting promises of tomorrow constructing images from juvenile building blocks what you lack in honesty you make up with combustible energy
resistance a tidal wave with a splinter of an oar paddling uselessly, swirling around nature's drain mercy! im dancing with deceit
a date with an illusion front and back and from side to side sliding around inside a slippery mind feeling like im on fast forward, but hoping for a rewind...
R: this rocking the boat comes fully equipped with rubber ducks and sinking ships but i'm holding on the real for dear life afternoons are dog day, tender is the night
and i rhyme too much. and this is no joke. the radio tells me "grasp and reach for a leg of hope"
pull the other one, i say this is just a conversation starter i may be your sacrificial lamb but i won't be your martyr
ain't nothin' up my sleeve you get what you see and we're all a little worse for wear wherever that happens to be...
L: the time is now to uproot these tall tales necessities of the past have now become intimate in the present turning your back, walking out the door wont make the inevitable disappear demons await those who feed off codependencies i say this not to scare or frighten i say this not to forgive but i say this to help me forget the wrongs ive committed if it is you i must choose i want all of you not just the intoxicated fantasies youve created or the slurred visions and daydreams i deserve your real self i deserve to know if its wrong for me to want you one more time if its wrong for me to desire your thoughts to need. to be so addicted to your presence then it was wrong from the start to watch you drive away to hide beneath my covers to think of the somedays... caught between the sweet and the sour the salty and the bitter... tasting a vision of tomorrow but held back by the realities of the present our time may end in an instant but im holding on to every second R = ratpack slim L = ladeedef
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2800, that guy... Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Mon Nov-24-03 12:05 PM
yea im "that guy" by responding to my own poem.
excellent job, Slim. it was great working with you. now if you can only stop being from los angeles and claim your true milwaukee farm hand roots we'll all be happy. mmkay?
love sooz
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2801, *Hmmmmmm* Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-30-03 07:20 AM
This pCe kinda took me onna roller coaster ride -- With some ^UPS^ & downs along the way!
It started off so sweet & cute with a lil' tug~a~war -- Back & Forth -- Kinda relationship steelo -- But then it got more serious -- Like the relationship had developed into summmthin' MORE -- And then it questionably turned bitter~sweet with the reality of life & love!
Sounded like the true trials & tribulations of love & relation~SHIPS that float over turbulent waters and then settle upon waves of wishes for calm waters to keep the journey going in the right direction!
Nice job you two! -- *wink*
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2802, Fairy Tales WorldWide -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Nov-25-03 07:51 PM
*S*
I live in a dream world of atm machines that dance around me, and bring me things... ..we walk down a road of chocolate covered roses where credit cards follow our travels whereever we go... making purchases look like magic turning mud into yellow brick roads... telemarketers fly over my head like fairies sprinkling sweet jargon on my mash potatoes that melts in my mouth like butter.. and sticks to my stomach like cement preventing my vomit YES IM LIVING IN OZ SOMEHOW but somebody changed the script.. ..now instead of pixie dust I see angels getting blitzed off their own supply.. ...using torn pages from the bible as rolling papers... ...and stuffing it with crumbled herbs that smell more like shreaded cash when you chief... ...and last night cinderella had to choose between suicide & bankruptcy... ...cause the queen of England still has her magic mirror... ..and aint no free lunch in america... ..just free-loaders that swing in your hair like ruppunzel... ..using your skull as just another rung in that corporate ladder... watching snow white get boiled alive in the witches kitchen.. really just my next door neighboor trying to survive... coming short like the seven dwarfs trying to save the ghetto from itself... a sleeping beauty with the reflection of an ugly duckling getting fucked by the boy who cried wolf ...over and over again... ..while we just slipped further and further in debt... ..with the chains no longer around our necks.. but around our wallets....
*P*
Wallets filled with a plethora of plastic -- Spastic -- Watchin' Alice In Wonderland's plans fall apart -- Like drastic -- Poppin' Collars -- Stretchin' dollars wide & long -- Elastic -- Jack & Jill went up the hill -- Told him she'd blow him for a $50 dollar bill Tumblin' down -- Hell Bound -- Fell in shark filled waters an damn near drowned Phones ring as sirens sing -- "My Country Tis' of Thee -- Sweet Land Of Liberty" While "The Three Pigs" dig for that pot of gold It's been bought & sold for a soul & a prayer In reality tho, ain't nothing really there Just a mirage disappearing under a lodge of wooden soldiers Generals & Defense heads -- Walking deads -- Gettin' older not bolder Marching to the beat of the same old drummer -- (((BUMMER))) -- Nothing new -- Dumb & Dumber -- Like Little Boy Blue And the Boy Who Cried Wolf til' his ass got inna stew Who can we turn to -- When real life is like a fairy tale Color drains from complexions as the future looks pale The ozone layer's twisted -- Earth is misted with tall kegs of ale Piss flies in the face of destiny -- But to the rich it's just a tinkle Maybe we should all get drunk & "sleep" away this lifetime Like Sleeping Beauty & Rip Van Winkle
Wake Up! -- And Smell The Plastic Roses -- *smirk*
*S* = Sober *P* = PhotoSynthesis
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2803, *applause* Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Sat Nov-29-03 07:48 PM
FABULOUS!!! JUST FABULOUS!!!
YES!! YES!!
now im happy :)
peace ladee
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2804, Eternally Speaking Posted by Decstar, Thu Nov-27-03 04:05 AM
infinite words infinite possibilities neverending thoughts and a pencil that wont stop ina mind of trying to make it to the top and rise words non stop hot soul speaking my mind and spittin flames burnin their fake game and the lame ways the lioness iam not able to be tamed see we are all different but yet we are all the same through lyrical skills for words are like nature half reveal and half conceal the soul within.........
and the heart that makes it, pen strives and never fakes it, slaying truth with knowledge, wisdom with faith, continue to elevate and express myself exclusively, inducively brutally demonstrating my qualities with quanities of words preserved to pinch nerves, tha star i am sparkles lights better than any constellations known, mind pacing and racing time to be equal once again with everyone, infinite challenges, infinite strength
anotha THALIONESS and Decstar production. L'ness first, me second. lil something short and sweet. dont underestimate us. (lik winks)
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2805, Short & Sweet -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-30-03 07:27 AM
But laced with a lil' depth & perception in da mixxx! -- ;^)
U Go, THALIONESS -- Nice to see you blending with the eternally blendable Decstar! -- *wink*
(((Good Job)))
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2806, best wit the best Posted by InstantArchive, Sat Nov-29-03 07:57 AM
Ayo … picture him with one post so one thru seven missing it’s daily dose he’s leaving the boards comatose vegetables.. eating thru tubes praying in ya church vestibules the best I’ve bruised … I’m to the rack with the inside moves and bangs the boards like headboards when I tame the broads fame at large … I put it on the net so they can…. study abroad this is the band wagon …get on board the dynamic duo … flo .. you get this every blue moon cause the best with the best makes a mess and if they haven’t told you yet you guess it … like MJ ring 3 ..wit Mike from ring 6 see the same shit … but the flow’s a lil different … so let me unleash the beast get ‘em falcon scaplin shit stained high alps and snow ballin figures droppin statistics in blizzards we reign man like kemp in his prime prophet designs makes for a profit in minds clock switch them lines counter position the stitchin i split seams duke but it seems you aint listinin pot to piss in another cock prick chicken stop ya bitchin, prime time deon and 94 webber michigan ya missin intense credentials hand held award essential untensils for dentals....shut ya trap with lead pencils i write masterpieces and free abstract art type of cat to reach in ya chest and pull out ya beating heart check my cletes cause they mark i leave tread on ya frame cali slang and we bang rockin chucks aint no thang
Aim is relentless... fencing lyrics ... cause everything spitt’en ... is hot ... globe trot ... fates ... lost like Michigan state .. cause I put the Magic ... back in the game Ervin to Worthy ... L.A. Express ... full court press ... fuck 86 ..it’s Loe & Axis ... Neo and Morphious ... in this dot Matrix .. ya’ll been ach’in ... to savoir ... the flavor ... of his alliteration ... and my lewd behavior ... tell a neighbor that ... the best of the best ... addressed ..what’s missing ... and the tagteamin ...left nukka in stitches ... with the quickness ... the style switches ... like tree limbs ... when we beat ya ass wit it ... extension … cord whippings ... with all intentions of marking ya ass so you never forget it .. and if... by chance you think you grown enuff ... then put up or shut up... the mic cuff ... aloneis enuff to call ya bluff ... and the breath control ...will make ya hand fold...
ice cold knockout jenkins never thankin put ya gloves on cause now the beasts awakened check mated rook maneuver ya ruger left ya chamber empty with no lead that could suit ya embroidered patch from scratch far fetched from tacklin Frak Maze intact, got cats puzzled from the iso format in score collapse coverage we tiger clubbin raps hacksaw jim duggin ima slap a cats hat off who think they truckin ya fuckin nerds word verse in a hearse my gift to the curse pre packaged center first stop the jet lag and dig in ya purse loose change broads cant handle the gods pocket rhymin politikin the forman and get grilled by the balls we carry magnum wrappers big dick talkin pricks aka the safe crackers.....ya basitds!!!!!
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2807, thats whats up!! Posted by LaDeeDeF_99, Sat Nov-29-03 07:58 PM
YEA!!!
now im all pumped...um not in that way...
ahh!!
:)
yall got some ENERGY, foreals!
peace ladee
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2808, RE: best wit the best Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sun Nov-30-03 07:43 AM
I'm not sure WHO this collabo is s'posed to be from -- Since there was no indication at the bottom -- But it looks like MAYBE Amazin was one of the lyricists and I guess InstantArchive was the other! -- *shrugggs* -- (I could be wrong tho)
But never~the~less -- The flowstream was definitely filled with tightness!
WORD ^UP^
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2809, RE: best wit the best Posted by amazin, Sun Nov-30-03 08:01 AM
c'mon that's instant axis ..and amazin you can't tell ...you got to reread it babie
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