2638, RE: Atlas Posted by the Light, Wed Dec-03-03 11:19 AM
My favourite lines: > >Triggers pull >the plug on nature's >plea for patience
I think this piece is excellent. I love the politics of the poem and how they are written to be incisive but not overbearing. Also, I like the short line format, which lends some urgency and gives a more direct feel.
peace, the Light
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