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2638, RE: Atlas
Posted by the Light, Wed Dec-03-03 11:19 AM

My favourite lines:
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>Triggers pull
>the plug on nature's
>plea for patience

I think this piece is excellent. I love the politics of the poem and how they are written to be incisive but not overbearing. Also, I like the short line format, which lends some urgency and gives a more direct feel.

peace,
the Light

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