19598, i love the imagery in this Posted by mindful, Sat Jun-21-08 10:24 PM
and this poem is one of your best worded in a long time...
definitely a visual delight.
another caught jealousy but released the chains surrounding him while pride trumped fear and changed into courage perfect images made no match but merged slowly making love till all that was left was laughter echo's whispered as the wind carried it 10 miles only to return by treelimbs swaying, grass bending while birds simply sailed without flapping
good stuff *nods* Peace~
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