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19598, i love the imagery in this
Posted by mindful, Sat Jun-21-08 10:24 PM
and this poem is one of your best worded in a long time...

definitely a visual delight.

another caught jealousy
but released the chains surrounding him
while pride trumped fear
and changed into courage
perfect images made no match
but merged slowly making love
till all that was left was laughter
echo's whispered
as the wind carried it 10 miles
only to return by treelimbs
swaying, grass bending while birds
simply sailed without flapping

good stuff *nods* Peace~

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