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19564, June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by ThaAnthology, Mon Jun-02-08 08:09 AM
Congrats my homie! Let 'em loose!
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19565, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-02-08 08:28 AM
Thanks OKay family for the 15 minutes... this is a challenge to reach for another level so look forward to some wordsmythodology coming from the biochemicalendopominological regions of brainwaves balanced by honesty's gift truths purpose and humilities honor...the sinlge highest principle LOVE...
so here we go oops got to get back responsiblity calls feel you soon!!!
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19566, Congrats ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jun-02-08 01:31 PM
*Photo Puts On Reading Glasses*
Okay, I'm ready -- :P
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19567, CONGRATZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Posted by KnowOne, Mon Jun-02-08 02:12 PM
n/m
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19568, RE: Congrats Asiem... Posted by ak_reborn, Mon Jun-02-08 04:25 PM
Now light the boards up.
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19569, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Wed Jun-18-08 01:34 AM
Congrats asiem!
"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession." - Robert Frost
My crappy blog: http://www.livejournal.com/users/eyes_of_mine/
Blind Eye Turning: My book http://www.lulu.com/content/187759
My other crappy blog: http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/
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19570, Thank U So Much! Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jun-30-08 10:15 AM
For a "WONDERFUL" month of sharing and learning ...
It seems you ( ( ( S T R E T C H E D ) ) ) your potential to put feelings and thoughts into words -- and I'm just glad that your words will ~chill~ in the archives for further review ... as time goes by -- :9
It's been real .................... NICE!
*Much Love & Respect*
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19571, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by empro, Mon Jun-02-08 05:32 PM
Congrats family
Been doin ur thing for a long time
Glad to see you get your shine on!
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19572, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by ASIEM, Tue Jun-03-08 01:32 AM
I just got in from a venue in Bmore called "Verbatim Mondays" hosted by Rebecca Dupas. The feature was a brother by name Ainsley Burrows, other Poets included Sabrina, Native Son, Temple and Paul Mabon. I can only hope whatever streams through touches the place touched in me.
A bird sings outside my window it's past midnight it seems things have changed
I sat down to write and nothing jelled so tonight i found something from 2005 written in here so...
ASIEM Charter Member 1385 posts Jan-10-05, 01:23 AM (EST)
"a poet's love song"
raging warriors made mad love to the mic and penned a new beginning for hungry souls at venues last days near death defiant acts gave rise to celestial heights 'what the fuck are we fighten for anyway?' who wins the war for black souls layed to rest at the end of the night when all that was searched for was a nut? they came here to get an orgasm free of their own hands so they too can remain free from sin...
sistahs cry for men to rescue them from their own demise waiting in line for another brother to keep them safe from the pillows war story beautiful are the women that come to these places looking for a spoken word to express their anguish and maybe for a moment feel understood, just to walk alone basking in the arms of a poet's love song.
ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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19573, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by gsquared, Wed Jun-11-08 11:21 PM
Congrats, and...the embrace of poetry is a fine hug indeed...
"My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis
"the unexpected takes hold"--Robynwildchild
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19574, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by ASIEM, Tue Jun-03-08 10:31 PM
heavens gate rests at her feet she spoke to me from the cradle over 20 years ago now she speaks at 4 weeks so i pause contemplate times deliverance of this mans fate she spoke in ancient tongue reaching the heart i pause to reflect let the mind resurrect memories a family waits pushing past blunts remedy of still minds bending deciding criminal intent is enuff to get by so why not place a small wage and throw bricks at the penitentury others did and flow came they hustle a brothers story left at the alter with no confessions just myspace pages that speak clear stacks benjamins and weed till bud floats cross screens smell dat it says two brothers toast like rivalries one red the other blue images made them drop everything n smoke now one river devides them but blood flows babies cry a sisters prayer draws from on High a blanket to cover them never caught standing still this family keeps it movin a derelict raises the dead no miracle recorded unseen the hands on this wire a mother speaks, images shattered just for today...they live as ONe this family keeps it movin 3 down south incubatin by graces plea silence measures faiths challenge to remain free don't touch these 144,000 makes 9 perfect no soliloquy at dawn just Praises from a heart bowed knowing he is heard the universe delivers them one at a time she speaks to them from afar...so wait till the Son rises in the West this time the Earth cries out Lord how long will u not hear their voices? Look again this day the Son has risen...and it is in the West.
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19575, Alrighty Then ! Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Tue Jun-03-08 11:27 PM
>i pause to reflect >let the mind resurrect >memories a family waits >pushing past blunts remedy of still minds bending >deciding criminal intent is enuff >to get by so why not place a small wage >and throw bricks at the penitentury >others did and flow came they hustle >a brothers story left at the altar with no confessions >just myspace pages that speak clear stacks benjamins >and weed till bud floats cross screens smell dat it says >two brothers toast like rivalries one red the other blue >images made them drop everything n smoke
*Word*
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19576, Going Over Posted by ASIEM, Tue Jun-03-08 11:24 PM
One breath past midnight she snatched off the mask this body has held me long enough it's time to Go got rivers to cross Emanuel needs me on his battlefield a journey into forever the Call is given grant her passage if her children find Peace a remedy let her enter by the Gate called Beautiful siblings sisters will raise questions at dawn but soon they will see this was no noble quest but a a small wonder among them spoke quietly listen for the last voice can't be heard by mortal ears just as legion was made free they too will find truth, a friend
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19577, good pussy that will last forever just for me Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jun-04-08 12:52 AM
loving her came easy for me i have loved so many times before but this transcended you see she held both fanatsy n reality her pussy made me dream of nothing else than perfections gift in a crowded room i found us all alone for me to flirt with and play guess who/ yeh loving her came easy for me cause evrytime i looked at her i saw locks that flanked her reminding me of fire nothing less than pure paSSion while truly my reality she holds dearly...children i mean she loves them what else do i need ? time she declared you need time to really think about what you are saying to me man casue for real i don't feel you like that. i had to reflect i had to remember how many times i said i love you i wanna marry you? trapped behind a veil known only to those that practiced it ISLAM taught me my intentions should always be marraige and security unshackled passion kept me wanting and an addiction to feeling good always made me more important than anyone or anything else so... loving came easy alright just as long as it fit my script. this time she asked me do u want me man? then you gonna have to date me, cause all you want is right here right now all or nothin and i aint playin that game wit you again. oh hell no date, i replied, define that what does that mean? you can date me and another while i too can doo the same.? yes, she said, and sex what about the sex can we have sex as we please ? yes . then i can't do it. cause for real you a keeper. and then again i eat pussy to much i might as well suck every dick you flip if i agree to that. Damn, i had to walk away from my pussy, my good pussy my heavens gate where freedom found my two illusive worlds merged into one. i should feel empowered but for real all i feel is lost. so here i am waiting... there gotta be another chapter to this it just has to be. till then i aint making Taboo chases a secondary excuse. cause i wanna to be free from that viciousness. i want my pussy to love me like that momma and daddy kinda love the kind that lasted till both of their last breath stopped. yeh i want that good pussy that will last forever, just for me.
p.s. i forgot she said yeh you want my pussy but what about the rest of me? to which i replied you damn well when you bring the body the rest will follow. i wonder if all this could be said another way? cause raw make me wanna hollla... bitch don't u feel me?
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19578, RE: good pussy that will last forever just for me Posted by Natalie, Sat Jun-14-08 03:41 PM
Um, hm...Hi, Asiem.
For my first foray back in here...don't know why I'm responding to this post (the title! the title!), but it struck a personal chord for me. And, besides, it had me cracking up at the end :) Also made me say, another good muslim brother bites the lustful dust...oh well...insh'allah you did / will come through alright...
Congrats on being aotm, my brother...
N.
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19579, RE: good pussy that will last forever just for me Posted by ASIEM, Sat Jun-14-08 07:04 PM
ahem Natalie you disabled your profile so i take it you are undercover private or just don't want no drama hassle whatever... thanks for peepin in and replying odd enough it helps to hear from us in here as for the piece I try to write truyhfully and at the same time ignite thought glad it struck a personal cord would you like to elaborate? lookin for your work
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19580, RE: good pussy that will last forever just for me Posted by Jahlovall3305, Mon Jun-30-08 09:53 AM
Nicely said. I thought the same way when I give the pussy to Him, branded and all. Oh, well. By the way, CONGRADS!!!
As soon as healing takes place, go out and heal somebody else. Maya Angelou No man is free until all men are free.
Jah*lov*all of YOU>>>>
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19581, i need to make some room Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jun-04-08 01:13 AM
i need to write till this oozez from brain stems till my finger get numb i need to drop these letters one at a time till sunrise cause i goota make some room for something to flow to me thru me i gotta make some room this message is comin i know it i feel it i gotta tap these keys till Sonstroke knocks me to my kneez and i bow humbly asking permisssion to speak i gotta makes some room cause them mutha fuckin voices had me trapped i couldn't get off the track i circled like people round the Kabba... going round and round i couldn't get off that track i couldn't stop like smokin crack i couldn't stop till all that was left was misery and pain laughin at me callin me names like ho skeezer baby breeder only to leave them back all because i couldn't get off that track./them voices held me back them voices kept me watchin lookin out like a scout searchin for animal tracks, i couldn't get off that track... Damn...........................trickin can steal all your dreams too.
case u don't know what trickin is it's lookin for sex and willin to pay for it and by the way if your man gotta get your hair done before you give him some you trickin too. even more simply it is when something of value is given before during or after sex. most people are really trickin even married couples, just look a little closer.
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19582, The Last Three ... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Jun-07-08 07:02 PM
"Going Over"
"Good Pussy"
&
"Makin' Room"
All seem to come from different parts of the brain -- and yet, they come from one & the same -- :9 -- (Kinda like the Trinity) -- three in ONE! -- *Different Perspectives Of Course*
But you've always had various prisms of perspection -- and it's been a pleasure watching you shine "over the years" thru all your poetic prisms.
*Shine On*
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19583, RE: The Last Three ... Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 01:39 AM
that said let's visit another "part of the brain" wait a minute how many parts of the brain are there? anyway the sentiment is the same Photo and for real i must formally thank you for being you and true to the craft as well to this forum. you have been very instumental in keeping here and continuing to write
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19584, ode to my pen Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 11:18 AM
we really departed sometime ago i realized today just how much i really miss you the way you recorded every thought for me, gliding seemlessly across pages i even called your fluid my blood today i might say my ink spillz only to be reminded it's the tap tap tap of a keyboard that i feel beneath the very fingers that used to hold you tight morning noon and night so i had to take time to pay homage to humble beginnings, lasting memories of how i got over so many times needing you to pull me thru to dry tears from my face to make me laugh when i look back in amazment wondering just who wrote that it was you most of the time that just seem to slide by yourself commanding me to hold on till you were through yeh i must say we were always there for each other you see you needed me and i needed you.... i celebrate the love of THE PEN
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19585, my own Pope spoke to me Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 12:25 PM
the grail has been found tongue meets the sun of son's light there she speaks Allah huAkbar reaches the churches reframe holy mass on Saturday when weeping at the wall finds peace what will become of it's followers? respect yes to religions gate but heaven waits no more the moment told has come why do u hold on to things long gone no favor is the flavor you spit last days ending they keep the masses looking past today searching for what the Son has Risen in the West the Pope said they "sell God for profit" \"plant a seed in my ministry so we can both grow" voice resignates "who u prayin to" Yah Jah Lah Vah created images speak from graves till the people fall to knees believing in fear all over again 50 spoke no change now 40 acres still aint no mule for the son's of slaves lost the cause while IZ ReEl keeps the grip on HOLY WOOD creaping images cross screens and pipe dreams sold thru the air cell bites the call drops just when the mind bends to recieve the Final Call LOST CALL is the message we get so now the Son has come and gone while an image engraven in his image is all thats left watch and prAY PEOPLE the assasins are robbing the cradles at fourth grade a sentence has already been passed to inhabit the cell prepared for he and she who simply failed a test...little children sent off to follow a script written from the tube you made in the space you dedicated to your space in time called my space in real time Ludicris Methods fall at the knees of Weezy beggin for a bitch to bail em out by takin all holes at the same time she screams "4 what?" a matrix ion flux in the butterfly effect times dimension in suspension call way back to the future up at dawn no rest at dusk everyday people trying to get by while the haves make plans to keep them wanting what they got a viscious world of make believe now reel sex has replaced real sex as desires no longer belong to the church but inhabited by porns best no natural affection, we can wait for the reun at midnight and get off together, never touching but still reach climactic endings there has to hope for the believers are still sending messages to forces seen and unseen the poor are no longer crying but numb by pain managment has peaked and found them mumified not knowing they r dieing from not knowing it hurts down deep... what is there to do but record this for the survivers to remember? there has to be something more.. check your heart is it still beating ? ask yourself for what am i waiting? why am i here anyway? what happens if i survive? questions awaken the mind to respond and act accordingly...
thank you J Pope of Bmore for loving spoken word and raising the dead from tombs....find her here http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=98968323
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19586, ablution Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 01:23 PM
water purifies as i am baptised emersed in seasons drift through another moments pleasure at the end where afflictions meet addictions the need for greed to change hopes true colors no more black or white just green make sense to those in charge of common folks dreams made at the desk of advertisers we must speak life born in the mind dead to spliffs puff chemically induced hallucinations these are the days for rivers to flow and lakes to rise bathe poeple in waters while they can be found the Sun is burning heatwaves coming in each season the evaporation of religion will leave them wanting something to believe in so real life is the plan artist write according to earths vibrations make ablution purify your minds eyes clean intentions begin all wash hands to elbows, mouth,nose face head to feet wash people and keep the faith conscious minds bow too looking past fallen soldiers no more we hold a moment to reflect deaths door has been opened wide as souls come through in numbers these days...tidal waves earth quakes sunami's, hurricanes,weather patterns changed by satelites sending high frequency noise pollution to other plantes connecting what the earth past present and future distruction they don't know where these experiments are going just keep dumping the nations treasure into another scientific blunder let us Pray quiet this moment.................... now simply give thanks for Believing pour the water all over your body and sing praises
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19587, a black man dreams Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 02:01 PM
babies scream born to mothers with fathers by side calling God's name seeking Pradise in proportion to balanceing his household budget there is no end to his means and resources so endless are his imaginings children raised in Love not held down by his wealth there are colors everywhere cosmic rays reach the once hardened hearts for the blind enemy to see him in new light a black man dreams for the world to see clearly a new day is here our time has come now let us make him in our best image
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19588, reality speaks Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 03:11 PM
tho i love my children i am not with them tho i send their mother due proportion of my own income it is not enough three baies know their father but distance keeps them apart from loves need to hold flesh i know i love my children and they too love me but my reality speaks i left them a dis ease erased purpose and found me desiring everything but them I left them and their brothers and sister long before i knew they were coming the truth speaks and i do not hide i would cry now but tears dry have fallen too long to claim emotions need for meaning\ i stand a man working his way back to heavens Grace a day at a time no one can say i really will live long enough to make this day paradise for them but still i try a letter sent from child support almost caught me ungrateful as i swaer before God I hurt deeply for this wreckage doesn't seem to leave me while these words may cross a divide as wide as the Mississippi] I can't cry a river forever so i rize at dawn to work for benefits that still are not enough as i still give in to distraction cause this enemy lives within me no woman by this side anylonger i have too many times found issues to many to reduce the pain so they too must go along with every true memory that Love did exist in moments my baby girl needs me so do tose boys but i am here digging a shallow grave so i may be found alive my parents loved till the last breath of his breath met hers on February 25th 2008 now Paradise opens again a granfather am i trying to hold true to the generation of believers that brought me through lonely years crack dreams never have i but the obsession to be needed finds me leaving all responsiblity just to feel real compulsion set free to deaden the heart to honesty's gift...freedom i digress in this moment waiting for God to make something from the depth of dark clouds over me a call from the heart asks simply will we ever be together before death knocks on the door again? she cry's i cannot hear those boy's eyes i do not see as they reach for the sky in body there are days when reality speaks and all i wish to do is hide but this day reality speaks so i share for strength to be found in Me my son's rays beam brightly as those born in the 80's become men hoping the streets don't hold them long before the Love their mother gave kicks in...see twice i have been given three
thank you rebecca dupas for your spoken word called "needy" you gave me the power to carry this out and i cried that river and was washed in the water found in knowing "reality speaks"
findher here http://www.myspace.com/rebeccadupas
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19589, Heartfelt Reality .... Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Jun-14-08 08:15 PM
And regardless of the circumstances ... I'm sure you're a "GOOD" Daddy!
By the way: HAPPY FATHER'S DAY boo! -- :P
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19590, well, i'll be damned... congratulations! nm Posted by mindful, Sun Jun-08-08 06:58 PM
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I am…water, mass, blood, melanin, bones. ©Solange Knowles
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19591, these phrases these praises Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-08-08 11:17 PM
with these phrases i pray i sing i give thanks i am arsalna standing sitting bowing raising falling prostrate i am he serving living breathing seeking knowing in reflection remembering pure intentions finding serene this place to be i am watching while head lowered gazing gently upon the face of beauty with these praises i ask what shall become of those whose voices we raise the soiled minds waking everyday to to find viscious cycles waiting to teach them low living from behind clouds of smoke the toke the srtoke the dope the seeds planted to still them before we can reaqch them we cryed last night now raise the sun and find them humbled by your light please we sing praises
warriors from the land of giants from meccas promise from babylons kings soldiers annointed by those raised in ranks we have found peace in serving again righteous teachers have been found among the beleivers again the land will be healed no stripes this time ayats have already been written recited where hearts were once darkened fire brands them with spokenword artist in each corner of the place where bodies lay resurrections gifts recieved people are listening the rocks have cryed out the land is healed cause we believe.....
thanks Native, 5th L found me listening to "Prayer of a Broken Vessel" and blessings came down you can find them here... http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=35275960
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19592, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by Pit Bull, Mon Jun-09-08 06:34 PM
Just wanted to drop by to say congrats; couldn't be someone what deserved it more.
The pieces you've put in here are ridiculous.. read through a few, but need to get back after a shower. I'll be back 'round fore the head of the month.
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19593, RE: June Artist of the Month: ASIEM! Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-09-08 09:26 PM
thank you !
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19594, a love come down again Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-09-08 09:58 PM
sometimes a love comes down bringing all love back around higher beings sending good vibrations seeing babies teasing momma's little lesson learned at midnight daddy's sleepin momma wake babies crying from heavens sake love come down in small glimpses bringing us closer thru our senses there aint no need to watch so close we been waitin along time lookin even in books this earth is singin again this land is healing a small boy in kansas is doin our bidding a voice been heard dem shoes is walkin this journey aint bought no little token a love come down to find who will trust in what they say they believe? so ask yourself this question Do You Believe in Love?
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19595, RE: a love come down again Posted by godsweat, Sun Jun-15-08 12:23 AM
congrats mein, these pieces exemplify your outrageous talent, baltimore stand up!!
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19596, RE: a love come down again Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-15-08 01:34 AM
thank you brother your words mean alot so keep droppin we watchin
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19597, echo's Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-16-08 08:56 PM
echoes found silence bounced of walls played a single note in the ear of nearby listeners one heart witnessed envy and forgave her another caught jealousy but released the chains surrounding him while pride trumped fear and changed into courage perfect images made no match but merged slowly making love till all that was left was laughter echo's whispered as the wind carried it 10 miles only to return by treelimbs swaying, grass bending while birds simply sailed without flapping what else could find peace send it away only to find it again over and over nothing but echo's
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19598, i love the imagery in this Posted by mindful, Sat Jun-21-08 10:24 PM
and this poem is one of your best worded in a long time...
definitely a visual delight.
another caught jealousy but released the chains surrounding him while pride trumped fear and changed into courage perfect images made no match but merged slowly making love till all that was left was laughter echo's whispered as the wind carried it 10 miles only to return by treelimbs swaying, grass bending while birds simply sailed without flapping
good stuff *nods* Peace~
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19599, RE: i love the imagery in this Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-22-08 12:48 AM
thanks mindful "in a long time" best worded ok i'ma get past the blow to my ego and feel what you sayin like the continuity but in a long time :-)
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19600, sing praises on high from down low Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-22-08 11:54 AM
I sing praise on high from down low remmebering still faces creeping crawling making cases lustfilled images escape mind just to reach hearts sillouette third eye no see what this life has been for me cause i found places on high to hide fallen soldiers ride angels come at dawn seeking heads bowed we know a call before sunrise waits for no one but we still sleep spoken word keeps raising the bar hip hop art traces time little known voices whisper ears pause listening these are true believers tawkin death to life cause now we sing praises on high from down low keep me wake some pray my life 's at stake momma's cry for daddy's sake children at play no more blind they speak death to life from cradles to grave visions no compromise words been heard now entertain thoughts long enough to get at me from an mc's mic to spinners scratchin tryin to wake the lost soul of another brother wit a gatt tryin to get in no bodies in chalk lines tonight sing praises on high from down low keep this flow speak life in stages from crack fiend dreams of never seeing smoke rise in pipes again to abused women no more fear of men walking by sing praises still waters rise deeper and deeper this is where it begins another whisper in ear do you hear spoken word come to life come to life come to life now sing praises on high from down low
thanks "shyster" another of Philly's finest spoken word artist
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19601, fallen art Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-22-08 12:23 PM
a gift given over night they wake making wrong from right stolen legacy taught yesterday lost today seeking buyers to cop another piece from peace recieved by inspiration fuck dat i gotta eat
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19602, affirmations Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-23-08 10:02 PM
I am Love's opportunity to express itself gratitudes chance to belong I am peace longing to be found compassions plaything I am purpose without form honesty's home I am the beginning of every moment and the last place to find it I AM AS I EM
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19603, right here right now Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-23-08 10:14 PM
the truth is I have never been here before it appears the same as another time but in this very moment i realise nothing is the same right here right now is as it is and never will be again this i know in thought word and deed but still somehow it illudes me as does I have the abillity to change...everything my eyes see my heart believes yet my mind so often no ease right here right now i write these words to capture the moment when i understood nothing will ever be the same when i read this tomorrow i will have already changed today today i walked away from self indulgence yesterday i decided to love me nurture me to understand me right here right now i left the past to live and not die it really aint even that deep it just makes sense no matter what I Am sent me to listen and walk accordingly so...
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19604, words at play Posted by ASIEM, Tue Jun-24-08 03:21 AM
the heart of art is always churning making sweet buther grapes get smashed making her whine
someone said the sun is shining so i moved clouds from my eyes to see
the mind at rest finds work easy
all i will ever know i already have tho in reflection i often forget
last night i had the perfect dream when i awakened i only remembered the nightmare
gifts are given that we find them hidden to treasure
life never with measure of how long or short how much or less Life is...
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19605, eccentric (short story intro) Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jun-25-08 04:54 AM
There she is a forty eight year old black woman, standing over 6' 2" wearing a blonde wig, shoplifting. Although I've known her for years she continues to amaze me, and most people she meets. A psychology student studying for her doctorate degree whom meanwhile sells bootleg cd's and dvd's and swears she is not ghetto. This woman has the nerve to believe in her own definitions of integrity also wants to be the treasurer of our community center. The idea itself is insane yet there is something so believable about her that she gets voted in and out of key positions in every venue she is involved in. Nevertheless, here am I watching her from my cash register again, wondering if I should inform her that she is under surveillance and has been identified by store security. This woman actually has a knack for capturing attention and somehow making everything she does seem practical and just good common sense. Including, getting food stamps, grants for gas and electric and several other related service usually used for the poor. All of this yet maintaining a very upper middle class lifestyle, she drives a Mercedes (an older model) owns her home at least 4 bedrooms, is known to have stocks yet she steals constanly. She often rents to borders, loves Starbucks; having each mug Starbucks ever produced and placed on the market. Eccentric? Yes in every aspect of the word. But how do I tell her she is about to be arrested?
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19606, 16 years from now a letter to me Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jun-25-08 04:26 PM
It's been sixteen years since I wrote this letter. It's June 2008 the Presidential election year that promises to change the face and direction of not only America but the world. Did Barak Obama win? Did he win a second term? What's it like now that the world has seen the fourth term of the new North American government? As for me has the change been as drastic? Let's see I can only imagine; by God's grace Alliyah, is 16, Tatyannah 17, and Jalil 17 all grand's do I have any more ? All my children are grown Michaela 39, Rashiid 37, Omar 35, Ismaeel 25, Khaliif 22, and except Xanthis she aint quite grown at 19 but i bet she is smart and a looker. And where are Rhoda and Tanekia at 41 and 45? Technological advances has kept me in great health since the North American Treaty actually made it a Republic or Union hmm? By now the hater's as we called it might say the world is socialist but it is perhaps better off as for everyday people. Long old wars of religion have just about ended forever racism sexism and hunger should have been eradicated since media exchanges have allowed people to just about live together without leaving their homes. Twelve Step programs have reached far into what was once dictatorships and changed the minds of how people coexist. Remember that perfect dream I had well it was just the other night but remember how everything for me changed from that dream? I saw the world from a whole different place when I woke up, that's why I am writing this letter cause in that moment I believed and everything changed. There are reality shows just about to kick off asking people to invent things to be creative to come up with the newest world, changing item. Imagine that one mind that can see past the troubles of our time. We survived and now because of one thought, one idea, one single purpose we, none of us, are controlled by the fears that at one time had a grip on our minds and in just 16 years are now travelers of the Universe...Devine.
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19607, oops i misspelled my baby girls name... Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jun-25-08 06:15 PM
it 's Xanthia not Xanthis
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19608, too old Posted by ASIEM, Wed Jun-25-08 06:28 PM
It must be that i'm old can't syncopate a rhythm that catches a young reply old timers gets views but only from love gone by's never thought i'd say it but i might too old don't scratch the surface feelin a little lost well hell at least it feels good at night when i realise how much i love to write now that's the way it seems when a player like me is waitin for a reader like well i won't say a name just to drop by and say...
no dis to those that drop a line or two but right now i would ike to hear from you
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19609, Sometimes I Cry Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-29-08 04:56 AM
Times when I may be... self -centered I cry Times when I may be lonely I cry Times when I am angry depressed self obsessed I cry There are times when movies like Sex and The City or As Good As It Get's yeh make me cry I may even wipe the tears from my eyes asking why am I crying I cry cause I am human I feel I think I believe I cry when my children I miss and their mothers I some how dis missed the water that flows sometimes I know can cleanse even my soul or wipe away the build up on my heart like mold I cry and I am a man A father a son a brother a friend a lost lover I cry cause if i let these ducts dry I know I will die Sometimes my poems scratch the surface often too these poems are well defined but nothing can replace what is behind each letter of every word simply those moments in time when yes I cry
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19610, RE: Sometimes I Cry Posted by ak_reborn, Sun Jun-29-08 05:53 PM
Man i loved this, not only the topic but the way you dropped it, like crying, short lines like tear drops, and long lines like a long cry, couldnt really put it in words, but most will understand what i mean.
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19611, RE: Sometimes I Cry Posted by Jahlovall3305, Mon Jun-30-08 09:28 AM
>the water that flows sometimes I know >can cleanse even my soul >or wipe away the build up >on my heart like mold >> ****Nice***
As soon as healing takes place, go out and heal somebody else. Maya Angelou No man is free until all men are free.
Jah*lov*all of YOU>>>>
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19612, for thirty pieces.... Posted by ASIEM, Sun Jun-29-08 05:09 AM
For thirty pieces of Gold a man lost his soul For thirty pieces of poetry another traded his life untold For less than a miserable price a lie is made just for someone to hold what will i do ? for thirty pieces thirty pieces for thirty pieces thirty pieces for thirty pieces what will I do for thirty pieces? believing like they my thirty pieces will make me whole...
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19613, Thank U So Much! Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jun-30-08 10:17 AM
(This is a repeat / cuz it got lost ^UP^ top there) -- x(
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Thanx for a "WONDERFUL" month of sharing and learning ...
It seems you ( ( ( S T R E T C H E D ) ) ) your potential to put feelings and thoughts into words -- and I'm just glad that your words will ~chill~ in the archives for further review ... as time goes by --
It's been real .................... NICE!
*Much Love & Respect*
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19614, this get's archived ? Big ups Anthology u make things happen Posted by ASIEM, Mon Jun-30-08 04:43 PM
Thank you and every player on these boards that darses place pen to pad spill ink and speak...
so i make room for fluid letters to flow into wordsssssss making worlds merge in this cyber space............
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