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Topic subject1st Round...10-9 godsweat
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19463, 1st Round...10-9 godsweat
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed May-21-08 04:26 PM
Reasoning

Flow: 3-1 godsweat ~~~ Ezz was all over the place and the visual format often ruined what little flow was there

Creativity: 2-1 Ezz ~~~ Honestly, there wasn't a ton of creativity from either but what Ezz lacked in format could only be interpreted as a bit more risky and creative because the creativeness of the punches of each were about even

Punchlines: 3-2 godsweat ~~~ neither was that strong here but the flow helped his land a bit more square and he a was a tad bit more humorous...not cracking up but I didn't even chuckle through ezz...the one line she praised I'd heard here on this board time and time again

Style: 2-2 ~~~ godsweat was a bit generic/bland whereas Ezz was just a bit too erratic to establish any type of vibe which should've been easier with the verse length but there did seem to be something you were onto but didnt quite grab

Ending: 2-1 Ezz ~~~ godsweat just plain old tanked the ending