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19037, King of the Ring V (round 2)
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:11 PM
Alright Winners...welcome to the winners circle

Loser's...you have a 2nd chance to prove yourself...

The Winner's of the First Round are:

BlakBeard, Rajeniro757, Biohazard, Whateva(first round bye), empro(opponent no-show), muddywaters (late entry)

The matchups in the winner's circle are:

Blakbeard vs. muddywaters
Biohazard vs. empro
Rajeniro757 vs. Whateva

The loser's bracket:

Rules: Post a verse (no bar limit but no essays please), you can direct it at other contestants or just post a random verse. you will not be matched up against any particular person. Voters will vote for top 3 verses (loser's must vote for 3 other than themselves). Top 3 verses make it into the 3rd round for a possible 3rd round upset.

Loser Bracket Contestants:

willi_dudat
disorder_6
Ak_reborn
Blaksilence
PG
Razor Ramon
Bartek

Send verses to my inbox by Wednesday 8pm
19038, Winner's Circle
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:12 PM
Winning Matchups Here
19039, Blakbeard vs. muddywaters
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:13 PM
GO!
19040, Biohazard vs. empro
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:14 PM
No more loser's bracket so make it count
19041, RE: Biohazard vs. empro
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Sep-07-06 02:12 PM
Empro wins via no-show by bio
19042, Rajeniro757 vs Whateva
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:14 PM
Matchup looks good
19043, RE: Rajeniro757 vs Whateva
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Sep-07-06 02:14 PM
Rajeniro757

well whateva's clever
but clever's pussy you see
after battling me
he'll bleed a week
and sit when he pee
couldn't catch the flow
if he was a cup in the sea
half ass screen name
but all ass emcee
in philly with your philly
so don't call pass three
getting pass me? please
thats like Tyra Banks
breast feeding a billion chinese
or C. Ray Nagin saying
Katrina was a breeze
you know my steez
cut you off at the knees
make you an amputee
now stand up to these
you shook hands with the king
i'mma start collecting fees


Whateva


Look, he not defeating me, he's one GOD short of a miracle
I spit them OH-SIX, chrome whip, negro spirituals
Now Rajee finding out that I'm ridiculously lyrical
These emcees my wheaties, my corn flakes and CHEERIOS
vitamins and minerals, I'm POLISHED shorty
I'm higher than you can get wit a BRICK...and six forties
Shorty prostitutin rap, I took a few estimates
Raj spit more verses for JOHN's...than the new testament
I thought about Raj and his beef, he can't bury-it
he geekin, his FLOW weak...he on the last day of his PERI-OD
hear me? cut up the shoot up, "King of this", bravado
I got a flow they use up to synch up swiss MOVADOS
dude abusin them dues, I'm making them payments
He postin up that fisher-price, PUPPY CHOW cadence
Raj a little COY wit it, lead adjust the boy fitted
I get in it, hip-hop, whip cream and TOYS wit it
She promiscuous now, lettin CORNY niggas hit it
industry, the penthouse pimps, pushers in pin stripes
Whateva da pace setta, percussions and windpipes
cushy drums, enlightened discussions and insight
midnight, I be immersed in verses thats prophetic
let it burn into you rookies...like some THIRD EYE poetics
on the jets, them bammas use boxcutters on 9-eleven
all I need is a BAR to drop a SEVEN-FIVE-SEVEN....

next?
19044, Votes
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:15 PM
Vote Here for Winner's of the WInner's Circle
19045, RE: Votes
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Sep-07-06 02:26 PM
empro wins

whateva
muddywaters

disorder_6 moves on to the 3rd

empro and dis_order automatically face each other in the next round and the winner of these other 2 battles will face each other...sorry for the delay folks...i decided to give the noshows extra time especially since a lot of folks lost connections last week but moving on...we are one round away from the final twist in the tourney
19046, voted
Posted by muddywaters, Fri Sep-08-06 01:40 AM
whatever gets my vote



19047, Tuff One
Posted by empro, Fri Sep-08-06 03:59 PM
Both of you cats brought heattttt

Raj had me until I read the punch lines and the end from Whatev


I vote for whateva
19048, muddy, whateva, Man empro really want to see you battle
Posted by Rajeniro757, Fri Sep-08-06 07:31 PM
i'm going to see whateva later.
19049, NAHH man NAHHH.
Posted by empro, Sat Sep-09-06 12:05 AM
It's nothin like that fam. But overall I think he had the hottest punches thats all. Stay up playa


AND will my opponents write somethin? I'm kinda upset about these two DQ's


Holla
19050, RE: ak reborn vs muddywaters
Posted by The Lyric, Thu Sep-14-06 01:23 PM
I vote for muddywaters

Why?

ak_reborn
+ Really nice visual: "and hand stitch your face to the SOLE* of my kicks," Need some more lines like that
- A little too dark. Too Hanibal Lecter. I mean, having some hint of regular everyday shit here and there makes it easier for people to believe what you are selling; else it will seem more horror film, and hence a fantasy

muddywaters
- First 8 lines felt like a hiccup (though the "soft corn" line was nice)
+ The visuals flows easily from one line to another
+ More witty
     eg: "your ass couldn't get a W if you was wearin Wranglers" (made me laugh too hard)
     "AK's like a CD on tuesday, your ass is "OUT NOW!!"

Naturally, this is subjective...
19051, ak_reborn vs. muddywaters
Posted by The Lyric, Thu Sep-14-06 01:43 PM
I vote for muddywaters

Why?

ak_reborn
+ Really nice visual: "and hand stitch your face to the SOLE* of my kicks," Need some more lines like that
- A little too dark. Too Hannibal Lecter; even Hanibal Lecter had some humor. I mean, having some hint of regular everyday shit here and there makes it easier for people to believe what you are selling; else it will seem more horror film, and hence a fantasy

muddywaters
- First 8 lines felt like a hiccup (though the "soft corn" line was nice)
+ The visuals flows easily from one line to another
+ More witty
     eg: "your ass couldn't get a W if you was wearin Wranglers" (made me laugh too hard)
     "AK's like a CD on tuesday, your ass is "OUT NOW!!"

Naturally, this is subjective...
19052, ak reborn vs muddywaters
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Sep-07-06 02:11 PM
ak_reborn

Yo,Muddy water,dirty h20,watch me kill you slow,
crack your cabbage,im a savage,your a blood-bath sandwich,
and hand stitch your face to the soul of my kicks,
so your similar then me walkin on dirt and shit,
managed to hit back at pirate boys failed attack,
that he slid into loser circle for a chance to comeback,
you just poor,a bye to round two and you still sore?
i dance on your grave while chanting "muddy is my slave",
to this rhyme page,king of the ring tourney stage,
thats the outcome when you unleash this beast,
an ill mc that feasts on the deceased,
and the least,will be me slicing off his head,
use it as a pumpkin and shit down his neck,
dont fight this hype,you just aint the type,
pussyd out,no doubt,you aint prepared to fight,
shoot you in the knee cap,and you start boppin,
your own type of crip walk,i got you pop n lockin,
1 bullet to the heart,a sad vision on my part,
owell,ill send your mum flowers and your heart,
distort your face and keep it as memory,
of your sad defeat,ya wack lines are weak,
you couldnt scratch the surface if you had reached your peak,
im sleek,unique leave ya joints weak,
you just bones in your home waiting to be seen.



muddywaters

muddywaters...
the only time you not hearin "best" where my name resides
is when it's compared to "Dare Iz A Dareside"
who is AK Reborn!? self proclaimed heat spitter?
you softer than cream corn when i'm sittin on my shitter
we should've battled in the first, or i really should've voted
for blak's shit
"reborn" your shit in the losers bracket
but this murder right here, well it was premeditated
i gave you life in the first, so in the second i could take it
and i hope you're only doing this for your own enjoyment-
for funds? fill out these forms and apply for unemployment
cause you about to lose this job like a no handed strangler
your ass couldn't get a W if you was wearin Wranglers
you wanna reign but you tame in your cubicle
as usual, you's a lame bitch with cute cuticles
who's out passed her curfew, best to bring your bible
and get your moms to nurse you when i pumped the rifle
yeah you spit..up red shit on your white tee
you didn't quit..congrats AK! now you's a casuality
try to surpass muddywaters? shits not allowed
AK's like a CD on tuesday, your ass is "OUT NOW!!"

19053, Loser's Bracket
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:16 PM
Loser's Verses To my inbox then posted under here
19054, RE: Loser's Bracket
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Sep-07-06 02:17 PM
The only person moving on in the loser's bracket is disorder 6 because he was the only to inbox...

disorder 6

cant get my name outta my rhyme
like yall cant get it out ya minds
out of ya minds if ya dont sign the cosign
i pen crack lines so fine, push em $39.95,
metaphor? right... next im sniffin the mic
look right, cause you hit on ya left
ya blind side, and ya might slide away
if your luck turns out right
if not hey at least I aint wet'cha
but I will pull out beatings
reminicent of chancletas
6 set a sucka with sick style
try the shoes on grow a sick smile
walkin for 6 miles
back to a swift pile
of dead in a Nile of vile spit bile
they in a better place,
I change face with no trace displacing
language outside of race
at a pace so out of place
it belongs out in outter space...
19055, Comments
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Aug-24-06 11:17 PM
Shit-Talk has been lackluster as of yet...come on folks
19056, RE: Comments
Posted by ak_reborn, Fri Aug-25-06 05:35 AM
Miracle,yo,you can say im complaining or what,but votes say i won first round,what up with that dawg??
19057, RE: Comments
Posted by Biohazard, Fri Aug-25-06 07:22 PM
He's right. As of Wednesday he it was 5-4 in ak's favor. he got votes from muddywaters, zin, raj, willi, and myself. Blakbeard got votes from empro, knowone, ric, and disorder6.
19058, RE: Comments
Posted by ak_reborn, Fri Aug-25-06 07:49 PM
thanks,for the proof bio.
19059, my fault
Posted by MiracleRic, Fri Aug-25-06 11:34 PM
i tallied the votes wrong

ak u right

i'll get a mod to fix that for me...thanx...my badu each got 4 straight votes so i'll make sure it gets fixed...
19060, RE: Aight
Posted by ak_reborn, Sat Aug-26-06 05:10 AM
Thanks man
19061, so it's
Posted by muddywaters, Sat Aug-26-06 07:08 AM
me and AK?
19062, yes
Posted by MiracleRic, Sat Aug-26-06 12:26 PM
19063, i'll talk...uh this shit is hella lame thus far
Posted by Binlahab, Tue Aug-29-06 03:46 AM
wheres the beef?


im just a notch in your bedpost but youre just a line in a post.
19064, RE:Yo what wednesday is it?
Posted by ak_reborn, Fri Sep-01-06 11:08 AM
coz i got thingz cummin up.
19065, hey kid..
Posted by muddywaters, Fri Sep-01-06 02:52 PM
don't be so eager to see your demise
19066, lol
Posted by empro, Fri Sep-01-06 03:04 PM
19067, RE: lol
Posted by ak_reborn, Fri Sep-01-06 05:38 PM
you on some assisin shit,i sent my verse last friday or summin like dat,

Yo E dont display them hi-tops,u gettin me hyped,
got a pair of hi-top air force 1,hi-top dunks,hi-top avirex's.
19068, yeah...
Posted by muddywaters, Sat Sep-02-06 04:52 AM
i swung my swords already and i too, am ready to see my victory
19069, yeah...
Posted by muddywaters, Sat Sep-02-06 04:52 AM
i swung my swords already and i too, am ready to see my victory
19070, RE: yeah...
Posted by ak_reborn, Sat Sep-02-06 08:19 AM

Its juz cos skool iz in like 4 dayz,cant realy b bovered to go,but u know,deres reasons why i do.
19071, workin on some other, other shit...
Posted by willi_dudat, Sun Sep-10-06 03:36 PM
would a got a verse in but i been distracted... this is goin pretty well... kudos to ric and all the guys gettin it on (no homo... r ppl still sayin that??? LOL)... im likin it...

over and out
du
19072, RE: King of the Ring V (round 2)
Posted by InFluenCe, Sat Sep-02-06 03:41 PM
damn, i havent been here in a year and this king o the ring shit is still going on... thats dope, keep it up ric
19073, my fault
Posted by MiracleRic, Sun Sep-03-06 05:56 PM
we had storms in my area that knocked out my internet connection for a few days, i'll be sure to post all verses i recieved today, sorry folks
19074, sorry, I gotta drop...
Posted by disorder 6, Tue Sep-12-06 09:43 PM
...some illness on this bitch emp-ho so hard. ayo MiracleRichard my verse is in. if you have a concsience at all you will tell this dude to throw the damn towel in right now before he embarasses himself
19075, Wow....
Posted by empro, Wed Sep-13-06 06:51 PM
You serious?
19076, Question: Any chance I can enter at this point?
Posted by The Lyric, Thu Sep-14-06 08:41 AM
Men, why did I skip okayplayer for 3 months?

Just to miss the start of a tourney I have been dying to participate.

Okay, for whatever it's worth, gotta ask MiracleRic...Any chance I can enter at this point? I am hungry, I can take up the place of any MC that dropped out.

Lemme know...
19077, apparently, overlooked
Posted by muddywaters, Thu Sep-14-06 09:50 AM
if yall cats look at reply 25, there's another battle for you critique and vote on between me and ak reborn.
19078, this joint is movin tooooo slow
Posted by empro, Thu Sep-21-06 04:16 PM