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18942, i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Posted by 3rd i, Mon Jun-26-06 09:19 AM
i hear you knocking but you can't come in
it's time i said no
stood my ground like an old oak tree that will not be moved
nor swayed by the dripping of honey that come from your lips
oh...i hear you...but you can't come in
www.myspace.com/3rd_i
3rd i: so u gonna be my child's god parent
Dawgeatah: i already have 3
3rd i: yeah but do u have a black one..like pokemon gotta catch them all.
i am a self-mutilator
of the worst kind...
(c)MyLife
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18943, Kicks in the door / wavin the 4 4!!!
Posted by KnowOne, Tue Jun-27-06 01:06 PM
n/m
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18944, RE: Kicks in the door / wavin the 4 4!!!
Posted by ASIEM, Thu Jun-29-06 08:56 AM
for real knowone got my first response hell i'll just go thru that window you leave open
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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18945, RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Posted by newolf, Wed Jun-28-06 12:25 PM
man o man 3rd.
last night i had a dream that my ex showed up on my doorstep and made a scene...
then i read this. it's like an echo of my dream.
!
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18946, most important and poignant lines, i thought...
Posted by mindful, Thu Jun-29-06 06:25 PM
it's time i said no
stood my ground like an old oak tree that will not be moved
*nods* Peace~
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Pinwheels and Hula Hoops: my book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com
no shit in 06.
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18947, RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Posted by revalation, Fri Jul-07-06 09:49 PM
YES..the title builds the conviction....
:::and don't forget to lock up the windows too...:)
<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>
www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat
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18948, RE: yeah but u missed sumthin...
Posted by MUSE, Thu Jul-13-06 03:44 PM
notice i ain' knockin no mo?
"It's me, surprise!" - Young Joc
MUSE
LOL - u wuzn ready...
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18949, RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Posted by rubbersoulonice, Fri Jul-14-06 07:51 PM
I been on the other side of this one lately.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon
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18950, ^^^^^
Posted by ProLix, Fri Aug-25-06 02:57 PM
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I get no satisfaction from this at all.
http://www.myspace.com/tiye
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18951, yo fam u cant be doin that
Posted by Aeon, Fri Aug-25-06 03:01 PM
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18952, STOP!
Posted by KnowOne, Fri Aug-25-06 03:14 PM
You just made me cry yo. You cant me uppin her stuff rught now. My twisted mind clicked it all fast, hoping some how she was here posting, and this was all a mistake/joke.
Dag.....
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18953, I guess we are all desperately trying to hold onto her.
Posted by DawgEatah, Fri Aug-25-06 03:48 PM
None of us are ready to let go.
I know what you mean though.
R.I.P. 3rd i: Heaven has a new Poet Laureate.
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18954, true... my fault ProLix ....
Posted by KnowOne, Fri Aug-25-06 07:19 PM
didnt mean to lash out. Just the pain I guess. Sorry bout that.
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18955, i'll apologize before
Posted by robynwildchild, Wed Sep-06-06 11:39 PM
but this is the last post left on the current board to read of what is the remaining truth to her soul.
let it flow on.. and up on the boards with pride and affection.
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18956, RE: i'll apologize before
Posted by ms mimi diva, Thu Sep-07-06 02:51 AM
So hard to read this one now, but I'm hoping someone will put together anthology of her work.
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18957, RE: STOP!
Posted by Mahogany5952, Thu Sep-07-06 06:56 PM
Yeah. . .that caught me off guard, too. It was a lovely piece though. I wanted to hop thru the screen and slap whoever it is that typed they got no satisfaction from this. But I guess that closing part, that "I am a self-mutilator of the worst kind" became self-fulfilling prophecy.
See you on the other side 3rd i.
~Kyla
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18958, its my sig dumb ass
Posted by ProLix, Sat Sep-09-06 09:16 PM
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I get no satisfaction from this at all.
http://www.myspace.com/tiye
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18959, RIP 3rd_i
Posted by fashionistamt, Fri Aug-25-06 04:05 PM
www.myspace.com/mansat
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18960, her icon is so captivating
Posted by ASIEM, Thu Sep-07-06 10:53 PM
i find myself staring into her eye wandering wondering a dimension so vast i am still
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
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18961, left this for you in BRC
Posted by PG, Mon Sep-11-06 01:43 PM
~*~
Goddammit Nikki
You did everything you could
But still I miss you
~*~
Love Pappa
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18962, RE: i hear you knocking but u can't come in
Posted by delrica, Wed Sep-13-06 11:37 PM
If no one else minds, I'd like to archive this post.
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18963, i absolutely agree w/ u
Posted by rgv, Sat Sep-16-06 10:55 PM
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18964, Ieye(i)
Posted by Zin, Sat Sep-16-06 06:59 AM
......Man C you later
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