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| Topic subject | night guest |
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18724, night guest
Posted by Giovanni, Sat Nov-12-05 11:50 AM
for AA
the night i felt my way through
your darkened apartment,
stumbled over coffee table
and throw pillows
i followed our voice to where
you waited to be held and nuzzled
before we were overwhelmed
with dreams
before we woke up
stirring in whatever sunlight
filtered through your blinds
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18725, piensero stupendo
Posted by minikiss, Sat Nov-12-05 12:47 PM
"stirring in whatever sunlight
filtered through your blinds"
piensero stupendo
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18726, RE: night guest
Posted by newolf, Sat Nov-12-05 03:08 PM
this was so perfect and visually stimulating.
awesome drop
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18727, RE: night guest
Posted by revalation, Sat Nov-12-05 08:57 PM
beyond sexual...love knowing there are others out there that live in passion...
Rev
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18728, it works so well
Posted by rgv, Sun Nov-13-05 06:39 PM
id keep my hands off of it
awhile if i were u
i know ur rewrite hand itches,
but let this one live
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18729, RE: night guest
Posted by HueyNewton, Sun Nov-13-05 07:15 PM
ahhhhh, a night guest . .
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18730, RE: night guest
Posted by delrica, Mon Nov-14-05 08:15 AM
dammit man!
why ya gotta be so good???
but in all honesty, you're still one of my favorite writers (even if i don't get to hear you as mch as i used to).
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18731, RE: night guest
Posted by invisible ink, Mon Nov-14-05 11:19 AM
aaahh..it's so good to feel your vibe on a Monday morning gio...nice flow...real nice flow...kimabe
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18732, RE: night guest
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Mon Jan-16-06 07:06 PM
The "raw" beauty of this pCe is breath~taking -- *sigh* -- And the fact that you left it alone -- (No Revisions) -- Keeps that "RAW" beauty intact! -- :)
Everything doesn't NEED to be polished in order to be perfect -- :P
*Word*
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