beat was different, I mean that in a good way, felt it. lyrics were tight too, you had something to say, and you said it, I felt the last verse the most. good shit. for constructive crit, imo: I think more sharpness might work better in some parts, depending on what your talkin about. to me it just sounded like you kept the same tone for most of it. sucks about the DQ, but at least this was still entertaining, props homey