Hand's down I have to give Sha points for lyrics and concept. It still sounds like you're like 95% comfortable with your flow. It wasn't exactly off cadence though. The track had a solemn tone to it and I felt that. I thought Nile's lyrics were pretty good. I didn't really see too much in the way of concept. The thing that did for me was the beat selection and flow. Technically I think it's probably the best I've heard on here in that regard. I think it's a tie, but since the emphasis on audios I'm going to give the new guy the nod this time. Good job to both.