blaksilence, you're legitimate and actually your style fits more with what i'm into. it's fun and vivid

BUT...

daniemuse, you killed it. i didn't really understand what was going down until i got to:
>then it is time
to strain, to sift, to seperate<
at this point i smiled and had to immediately start over and fully grasp the genius.

if this was wutang, blaksilence, you'd be ODB, who i love
daniemuse, you'd be GZA, who's the sharpest and most respected

great offerings from both