jon's was definitely ill i liked the style, how u used words and rhythm. and whateva's was long, which would usually be bad considerin my 3rd-grade attention-span. but it was written well, had wordplay, and was funny. good job to both
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on the mic I'm Murs, Peter Parker, not a thespian/
these other rappers on the same shit, its all pedestrian/
-knowledge