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Topic subjectBartek
Topic URLhttp://board.okayplayer.com/okp.php?az=show_topic&forum=20&topic_id=17899&mesg_id=17942
17942, Bartek
Posted by MiracleRic, Tue Dec-13-05 06:23 PM
mad creative, effective/descriptive writing

disconcerting and suspensful...ur voice was amazing, particularly in the beginning

Auriz...u didnt do a bad job by any means...but yours was less structured, less creative (although it was out there)...it didnt pull me into it

great job guys...Bartek