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17873, King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by Prolif, Thu Dec-15-05 12:04 AM
Bio vs Prolif
verses submitted to KnowOne by Tuesday at 8pm
"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Thu Dec-15-05 12:16 AM
17875, c'mon sha...|
Posted by willi_dudat, Thu Dec-15-05 01:36 PM
you haven't resorted to name callin have you??? *tisk,tisk*
17876, WTF are you talking about|
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Thu Dec-15-05 01:59 PM
17877, RE: WTF are you talking about|
Posted by willi_dudat, Thu Dec-15-05 06:46 PM
if i misunderstood then my bad, duke... but name callin dont seem to be in ur character...
17878, First off, you don't know my character|
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Thu Dec-15-05 08:54 PM
Second, I was joking. If you don't understand the context, it's best not to comment. Most important though, if I'm not addressing you, mind your business. This isn't said with malice, but for future reference.
17879, ah-ha, okay, whats up? shut up! (c) trick daddy|
Posted by willi_dudat, Fri Dec-16-05 08:01 AM
>Second, I was joking. If you don't understand the context,
>it's best not to comment. Most important though, if I'm not
>addressing you, mind your business. This isn't said with
>malice, but for future reference.
man i know i'ont know "your character" thats why i said it dont "seem" like it--i e'en was like my bad and shit...what gives???damn a "for future reference", you cant convince me that was "friendly advice"...im done tawkin...
*cues ralph trensvant-sensitivity*
17880, Sensitive?! BWAH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA|
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Fri Dec-16-05 11:06 AM
YOU the one that came in here with that Mr. Rogers, "play nice" attitude. Actin like YOUR feelins was hurt by somethin that had NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU. Self righteous substitue teacher nigga. Talm bout you done talkin. You should have never STARTED talkin is the whole point. I'm sure there's a tree that needs to be hugged somewhere. Get on your job.
Posted by FrontLIne, Fri Dec-16-05 11:24 AM
17882, *cues whateva man--red and meth*|
Posted by willi_dudat, Fri Dec-16-05 12:04 PM
**hands sha popcorn and a tampon**
17883, RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by Biohazard, Tue Dec-20-05 08:21 PM
The verse is in.
17884, King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by KnowOne, Tue Dec-20-05 09:04 PM
Checkmate! I corner kings, leave Lif in a neck brace/
Quick to grab a lord and ram a sword through his chestplate/
A chess game, you're a queen but you're still powerless/
I spit, instill cowardice, see you wet ya flowered dress/
Bombard the castle, retarded assholes get murked tonight/
You're the first to die, the whole kingdom hear your mercy cries/
I fertilize your words, or just shit on your verse/
Show up at the funeral and spit on your hearse/
Closed casket, can't face the facts: your flow's tragic/
Lif claimin' he ill, Well I spit prophylactics/
Turn the throne to ashes, you get your crown taken/
I pound basements, rhymes rock the foundation/
Leave the ground shaken, everything you spit is a naturally disastrous/
Pitiless, beat the shit out you then shatter your glasses/
Biohazardous, spew mephitic infections/
Bring down kings, prepare for the insurrection/
Rhymes penetrate your vitals, leave you oozin' bile/
Ain't ironic that YOU'RE the one that's soundin' juvenile/
Bruise your style, this letter's addressed to Mrs. Lif/
I'mma write your fam and send 'em your head as a Christmas gift
....tha clocks up faggit, and u bet i flow last/
and if u above average than this must be the slow class/
came to lay ya down, i had to box again/
and u aint grabbing for tha crown, just for oxygen/
that boy Lif push lines out/
and i'ont battle 'gainst Nickolodean kids, yo i put'm in time out/
Mini Me's sent straight to confinement/
leave ya scripts bleeding red marks like ya graded assignments/
cuz Prolif, u not able to rhyme wit/
and dawg, I leave u coughing up, like i just gave u the Heimlich/
Lif defined stable, leave u victim of crime fables/
i'm trying to do rhyme labels, u studying time tables/
so get ya numbers caught up, cuz i think u otta order/
and u so sweet, that ya parents think they had a daughter/
but nuthin sweet here - eat ya vegetables yo/
this aint no ABC afterschool specialty show/
it's more than words and it's food for thought, tha boy serve/
eating this dude, but i can't full off of hor'doeuvres/
"Lif Tha Great" lil rookie, wit no blemish or smear/
u sealed ya fate lil Tookie, aint no clemency here/
u keep my name in ya mouf just to move ya verse B/
all them fags in San Fran must've moved to Berk-ley/
but Prolif said 'keep ya mouf covered like ya lips bled'/
"i brought u in this world, and i'll take u out" just like Cliff said!/
17885, Ahhhhhhhhhhhh ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha|
Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Tue Dec-20-05 09:32 PM
No words. ROFLOL
Posted by willi_dudat, Tue Dec-20-05 09:46 PM
17887, *stops laughing* Great job to both.|
Posted by Whateva, Tue Dec-20-05 10:21 PM
I'll keep this short.
Likes: solid verses.
Dislikes: Not as powerful as last week's and less direct punches.
Likes: Stinging punches.
Dislikes: The audio. Don't get me wrong. I think it's solid, and it works for this board, but I feel like you can deliver those punches with a little more power and clarity. Just my opinion.
I vote Prolific for King of the Ring.
17888, RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by the_best_part, Tue Dec-20-05 11:02 PM
17889, RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by sikstyle, Wed Dec-21-05 12:19 AM
prolif takes this, but Bio def showed that he earned his spot
17890, RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by FrontLIne, Wed Dec-21-05 09:31 AM
17891, This was a good finish|
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Dec-21-05 11:18 AM
Bio started nicely, ended nicely
but so did Lif...
i didnt peep the audio i never do until after i vote...
but from what i read lif had the slightest of edges
Posted by Destro Finesstro, Wed Dec-21-05 01:42 PM
It's hard to hear music through a metal dome. The metal distorts the soundwaves so it sounds like a bunch of gobble dee goop. But the gobble dee goop was on rhythm at least. Prolif takes it.
17893, o0h wow|
Posted by Zin, Wed Dec-21-05 02:48 PM
17894, RE: King O' Da Ring Tourney IV (Round 6 - Final)|
Posted by oakhill78, Wed Dec-21-05 04:34 PM
Lif got that one...
BUT you need to fire your producer if you're going to do audio posts...
***In Ashy Larry voice***
"That's the wackest beat I ever heard in LIFE SON!!"
17895, The wRap Up....|
Posted by Prolif, Thu Dec-22-05 01:01 PM
well...it don't look like nobody else voting....so if not, i guess this is done....
good job Bio, and the rest of the fam too
it's been a good run, but i'm done as far as spitting...i'll do the next tourney, but outside of that i'm gonna focus my energies on developing poetically and finishing my album
"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym
17896, RE: The wRap Up....|
Posted by Biohazard, Thu Dec-22-05 04:48 PM
17897, Congrats Lif|
Posted by Whateva, Thu Dec-22-05 05:29 PM
Posted by KnowOne, Thu Dec-22-05 10:47 PM