17854, *stunned look*|
Posted by Whateva, Fri Dec-09-05 06:22 PM
Great job from both...
I try not to play favorites rhyme for rhyme.....and it's no different here. Here's my contraversial critique:
Sha, I feel like you delivered more direct punches and better imagery, in short, battle shit. I notice that I got tired of the set ups for the punches on this one.
Bio you didn't go after Sha directly as much and focused on wordplay and flow more. It was raw, but that's not how you win a battle. Trust me, I know. Still, you delivered the more powerful lines. Memorable shit.
I want to say tie. I really want to, but fuck it: