Hey all!
Well, it's that time of year again. The time when we show you all the works of the wonderful ladies of OKP and their poetry!
This year, not only are we writing poems but we have voted to write about CONTROVERSY! (our own views on: current events, religion, politics, etc. - as long as it's not offensive to a group or person)

SO PLEASE BE ADVISED that you may not agree or like what is said up in here this year!

Also, I wanted to take this time to remember the females of OKP that either have not posted in along time or who no longer post.
So, there will be a section at the bottom for your shot outs to those ladies.

Anyway, *WE HAVE CHANGED SOME RULES THIS YEAR.
THIS YEAR WE'RE HAVING EVERYONE MAKE THEIR OWN NAME/INTRO POST(instead of me doing it) (If you don't know what I mean you can find the previous collabs in the freestyle archives to see how we have done it before)
Confusing? Ok, let me break everything down:

1) To join this collaboration you have to be a female, but it doesn't matter how long you have been here or how many posts you have, etc. You are still very welcome!
2) You have to follow the topic that was chosen by votes. But it doesn't matter how long or short your post is, or how many times you post on that subject.
3) You should respond to other's posts. (Show some love & support for your fellow ladies!)oh and the GUYS TOO!
4) oh, and as I was saying above: BEFORE YOU POST YOUR POEM, create an intro about yourself with YOUR NAME AS THE SUBJECT TITLE. (This will be seperate from your poem post) You can say whatever you want people to know about you. If you can't think of what to say then just CUT/PASTE this into your introduction post:

Name:
Location:
Age:
Website/audios/pics:
Personal Info: (ethnicity, writing style, favorite things,Who or what inspired you to write, etc)

5) For your poem(s) you will respond UNDERNEATH YOUR INTRO POST that you have created; Because this makes it easier for people to view & find your work this way.

oh and lastly, this post will be archived so have fun! We want all of you to always remember this!

nuff said..

Good luck & happy posting ya'll!

-Stephani

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

Please put your introductions and poems under here.


- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

Hello agaion to all my friends i'm glad you came to play....

My name is marijane on the mic and by the pen but GOD told my parents to name me Banakayi (child of the world). i live life like I was created to with purpose and intent. I've been writing since i coud and i love to prove that femcees are often the most talented and the least recognized. I think that I am known as the OKP most unwilling to conform to any box. i have MANY cultural/racial blends, and no nationality because although I was born in Hayward California, I do not relate to American nationalism. I speak Fench fluently and conversatioal Spanish. i love Durette Tyler and am impressed constantly by my kindred Lauryn Hill. LOVE and like always Keep shining!

Now let's get writing...

funny my OKP ptofile says i love controversy but I cannot think of my first topic.

LOL no i'ma write though finally....


i put dots on top of eyes
and cross lines through baby tees
cause at least i'm deemed proper that way

I love the night lifetime
cause the day light's too bright
and at least i'm viewed acceptable in dark

i rocked manono's and Von dutch
when it was way out of touch
with the local populous
and plus

I eat peanut butter and apples
on such cold winter mornings
when nothing else matters
but you

and this is how i write with rhyme and reason but none at all.

http://www.myspace.com/marijaneraps

I respond to the way we correspond like corregated threads weaving and changing course. believing only those core values are those which surround both of us

I'm
weathering the storm whether or not you are home featherweight torment seems like a ton and one day i'll get it together enough to tellyou

THIS...

nice to meet you!
and please rip all these male emcees that claim to be ill up in hea! lol j/p



- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

homegirl are like Kindred Family souls or something. LOL but I came to write so I will Keep shininig!

Name: Stephanie Elizabeth Avis
Location: Massachusetts
Age: 25
Website/audios/pics: 4 pages dedicated to thoughts and poems: www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

Personal Info: (ethnicity, writing style, favorite things,Who or what inspired you to write, etc)

im italian, german, irish- a mutt
i love to write poems using alot of metaphors & vivid imagery, i love to battle-cuz it's fun!
My favorite things to do is make music, travel, and go to concerts/shows, spend time with my son Seneca (8-years-old)
and it will be raising my daughter (due January 5th 2006!)

I started writing poems when i was in fourth grade-i used to watch anne of green gables and those corny shows but they inspired me to dream and like poems
I starting enceeing/battling when I was about 15- my girl flowed (she was older) and i used to sing hooks for her... she told me one day that i should write, so i did
- i smoked an "L" and wrote this song called "Divine Infinity" when I was real high to Wu Tang's "6th Chamber" beat off the GZA "liquid swords" lp---
I can still remember it =)

Anyway, THA RZA was my favorite emcee and he said this line "Fortified with the Essential vitamins and minerals, the sky is my blanket, stuffin clouds in to my pillow"- thus, birthed my emcee name "ESSENTIAL"
I spell it with two z's because i was on AOL at the time and created a username "essential" but i had to change it cuz someone was using it... so i used two z's and it stuck!
.... that was in 1998 daaaaaaamn.. when there was AOL 3.0!

thanks, and ill be back to write my peice!
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- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

Name: Danielle Scott
Age: 24
Location: Boston, MA

I grew up mostly in NJ, but came to Boston because of college. My majors were Music Production & Engineering and Music Synthesis. Yeah, I am a tech geek, but I was a poet first, then a musician. I wrote my first rhyme at age 15 and haven't stopped since... I do sing more than I rhyme, but I love the freedom of rhyming. Music (esp. Hip Hop and Soul) is my love and passion in life. Nothing makes me happier. Anyway, enough about me... on with the poetry.
This piece is untitled. It's about church controversy. It orignally started out as a rhyme, but then morphed into something else. Here it goes:

Perpetraters, truth haters, political debaters
Looking for the majority favor to keep you in 'gaters.
Compromising, lying, defying the laws of doctrine
droppin' the loot, blockin' the truth, rottin' the fruit
choppin' the root of God's vine
You're blind swine with no spine takin' and rapin' the heart and the mind
Enroaching upon God's time, incurring heavy heavenly fines,
commiting serious spiritual crimes
of idolatry, bribery and extortion to gain fortune
accused of truth distortion and also freedom's abortion
repeated offenses of false pretenses
set up the gucci and colored contact lenses
woe to those who believe in the front and rely on weak defenses
for they won't be able to stand when the TRUE spirit comes against it
reaping what you don't sow
preaching what you don't know
leeching off those who be seeking, beseeching the throne of God
feasting off the anointed, disappointed that yours is a fraud
just a a facade of idle titles and unused bibles
pimping your degree in psychology as biblical theology
for all the blood on your hands, there is no acceptable apology

masquarading, parading, staging the waving of "holy" hands
when you can't even stand in the face of the sun of man
you don't understand
yet content with the stench of the detriment when you falsely represent
pretending to be pure but empty when living waters are so plenty
satisfied to be disguised by lies we hide in shade
absorbing God's rays
not reflecting light, rejecting right, respecting the night neglecting the fight
unsuspecting of plight we have all lost sight
of future vision as we continue to make blind decisions
still in engaging in spiritual masterbation due to intimidation
of the Word's ejaculation
settling instead for artificial insemination
'cuz intercourse without protection gives birth to the resurrection
direction, correction, and perfection
yet we perpetrate in this crooked election of the corrupt
those who "only wash the outside of the cup"
but inside are full of filth
yet holding us with leashes of guilt
pimping their degrees in psychology as biblical theology
for all the blood on their hands there is no acceptable apology.

>still in engaging in spiritual masterbation due to
>intimidation


although there were several profound, quotable insights on the church that one stuck to me the most (whew)

so true, I feel the biggest hypocrisy occurs in the church itself- it's pretty scary really...
where and who can we fully trust?

i guess personal relationship with a higher power (GOD) is the most important...

anyway, nice to meet you and thanks for blessin-

=)

I'm glad you could join us! -- :)


(((En~LIGHT~ening Flow)))

Name: Ginger Riddock
Location: San Antonio, TX
Age: 30 -- (Just had a birthday on Oct. 21st)
Website/audios/pics: Audios -- (SEE BELOW) -- Pics -- (SEE ARCHIVES)
Personal Info: (ethnicity, writing style, favorite things,Who or what inspired you to write, etc)

African American Female -- Writing style/somewhat abstract -- (rhyming cadence thru~out) -- Favorite Things: Harmony -- Pistachio & Butter Pecan Ice Cream -- The smell of fresh pumped gas -- Fresh cut grass -- tar burning -- (yeah I'm weird, so what??!?!) -- :P -- Top Shelf Margaritas -- Harley Davidson Motorcycles & HD T~shirts & stuff -- Collecting: Angels, Elephants, Lions, frogs, teddy bears, etc.

Inspiration to write: LIFE

The controversy is: This ain't about RELIGION -- It's about ~Spirituality~ -- AND THERE "IS" A DIFFERENCE!


Baptized in the Holy Flow
With Wisdom Only Angels Know
Writing Fast But Thinking Slow
I Aim to Grow
***Spiritually***
Mentally My Mind Is Strong
I Know The Dif ‘Tween Right & Wrong
Exercise My Body & Treat It Right
Get At Least 8 Hours Of Sleep At Night
But Lacking Is *Spirituality*
As Humans We Consist Of Three
***Entities***
Mental, Physical, & Spiritual
So Why Do We Neglect The Last?
Is It Cuz We Move Too Fast??
Ain’t Got Time To Pray Or Meditate
Hearts Filled With Passion
Or Too Much Hate
Going No-Where Fast
And Can’t Be Late!
Logical Answers -- Not Always The Lord's Way
Bad Things Happen To Good People
Why???? We Say!
Answers Are Written In The "Book Of Life"
Its A Puzzle To Read ~ And Can Cause Mental Strife
But Seek Not Religion, For Religion Sake
Seek A Relationship
Dip In The Lake
Of Knowledge
Remove The Blindfolds Of Deception
Lament/Repent For Your Rejection
In Creating Your Own Reality
You’ve Excluded “HIM” In Totality
Acknowledging Only When In “Deep Shit”
And The More U Dig, The Deeper It Gits
‘THEN’ -- When U Can’t Handle Shit ~ U Look 4 Hope
Hanging On The End Of Yo Rope
Scope The Reality Your Actions Sends
What The Hell Happened To All Your Friends??
You’re Never Knowing What Each Day Will Bring
But It's Part Of “The BIG Man’s” Plan To Release A Ring
Of Knowledge Around This Insane World
Gathering His Children
To Watch Truths Unfurl
Remove The Blindfolds Of Deception
Repent For Your Rejection
Since U Never Wanted To See The Truth
U Created Your Own Reality
And Excluded “HIM” In Totality
But The Man Upstairs Still Cares
And “He’ll Alwayz Be There
So Just Remember that! -- :)

>Going No-Where Fast
>And Can’t Be Late!

That line is SWEET. I'm definitely "pickin' up whatcha puttin' down."

daniemuse
Danielle Scott

That Invisible joint you rocked in rehearsal with us last week had some of the most dexterous wordplay I have heard in a minute. Back to the old school fa'real! Care to share a sneak peek on here?? :)

That Invisible joint you rocked in rehearsal with us last week had some of the most dexterous wordplay I have heard in a minute. Back to the old school fa'real! Care to share a sneak peek on here?? :)

this peice was truly genuine and sent a great message
it truly hit me and pinpointed EXACTLY how i feel or have felt!
specially these parts:

>Logical Answers -- Not Always The Lord's Way
>Bad Things Happen To Good People
>Why???? We Say!
>Answers Are Written In The "Book Of Life"
>Its A Puzzle To Read ~ And Can Cause Mental Strife
>But Seek Not Religion, For Religion Sake
>Seek A Relationship


>Remove The Blindfolds Of Deception
>Lament/Repent For Your Rejection
>In Creating Your Own Reality
>You’ve Excluded “HIM” In Totality
>Acknowledging Only When In “Deep Shit”
>And The More U Dig, The Deeper It Gits
>‘THEN’ -- When U Can’t Handle Shit ~ U Look 4 Hope
>Hanging On The End Of Yo Rope
>Scope The Reality Your Actions Sends
>What The Hell Happened To All Your Friends??

>Since U Never Wanted To See The Truth
>U Created Your Own Reality
>And Excluded “HIM” In Totality
>But The Man Upstairs Still Cares
>And “He’ll Alwayz Be There
>So Just Remember that! -- :)
>

aww thats so true! ima write a peice about somethibg that i experienced about that, thanks!




- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

You & I -- http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=130822

happy belated birthday photo!
god bless your smells that's awesome!
and where do u get pistachio and butter icecream? i've never had it.

i always eat this kind made by DOVE called: "vanilla with a chocolate soul" its vanilla with a chocolate ganche layer of dove on the top and dove chocolate peices inside! AMAZING!

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

When I come down to Austin in April, you should come through for a night of margaritas mammi!

Or wait til August when I'm in Austin for a week. Then it's on and over because I'll be drinking daily! I mean I'll be watching kick ass slam poetry daily (yeah that's it...).

*sheepish grin*

I "need" to get your digits and other info, for the next time you hit Texas -- *No Doubt*

Austin ain't but an hour and some change away from me -- So I'll be lookin' 4~ward to your visit -- *Yuuuup*


*Wastin' Away In Margarita~Ville* -- (((I'm Ready))) -- :P

For the ladies we'd like to remember.


- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

n/m

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

I miss her! -- :(

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

and every other woman..

whose work i appreciate

.


p.s.

if i did this wrong
pardon me
because i'm rushkin..

yea rushkin.

<smile>

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

looking forward to this

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/lifthalegend_music.htm

"u wanna play ball or u wanna fight?" -- ray brown in the gym

Profile
Name: Robyn

Location: south philadelphia
Age: 28
Website/audios/pics: www.myspace.com/robynwildchild
Body: 5 7, 150 blonde
Personal Info: White girl. free flow writing, rambling, daily thought documentary. many on board have told me that i capture feelings.

i'm a cancer. i was inspired to write out of depression as a child, later developed into poetry (due to depression agian) via my first love. i've learned through my writings here that poetry doesn't have to be soul crushing but sometimes the best pieces of poetry that i've written are. i love my friends, bar hopping, boys. i'm in search of experiencing life in its myriad directions. and i'm constantly crushing my way through life. i learn hard play hard work hard and sometimes i often feel hard. if life wasn't so busy and full of shit, i'd fall in love on a daily basis. but alas, no time for that.

to all that have come to read me, i thank you. your comments and praise have helped me.

i just
want to know
the finest sense of security
you with me
walking briskly
to get in my car

i go to sleep with him in my dreams
and wake
to find reality sewing its seams
to life
pinocchio doesn't lie to me at night
when he falls
asleep on my sheets
i get the sense
of how nice it is
to be
with him
the way the invisible forces mix we blend
and
i just want to know
i'm dying to know
if what i feel is real enough to show
without
feeling broken

i can't stop thinking
i don't know how i'm functioning
my mind
wants to open his door
and crawl inside
i can't stop feeling this way

i like him
that's why
emotional controversy paves the way
protesting
and pumping around like pigs on parade
future terms radiate delay
a happy smile
seconds a patient way
mental inmates behind cell walls wait
i want positive moments concise do make

i want a future
i see it
walk towards it
and imagine
it walking my way

nice peice guurrll.. glad to see u up on this...

props on your original approach =)

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

>i want a future
>i see it
>walk towards it
>and imagine
>it walking my way


Yeahhhhhh! -- I C U -- ;)

That's some truth for ya.
All I can say is:
beautiful.


Danielle

Name: Kaira B.
Location: Born in Baton Rouge, raised in Baltimore, MD, resides in Orlando (for just one more week)MOVING BACK TO LOUISIANA!!! I MISSED YA'!!!!
Age: 27
Website/audios/pics: uhhh, nope!! I like an air of mystery!!!! AHAHHA
Personal Info: I am a petite, black woman with a short haircut reminiscent of Halle Berry and Toni Braxton rolled up into one!! My writing style is interesting...basically it's based upon my mood. My sign is a Cancer/Leo. So I ebb and flow with the tide, chile'!! Never know what I'm about to say until I say it. I discovered poetry when I was 12-years-old. I would write cutesy things, flowers, clouds and love. Everything rhymed, then one day I just stopped all of that and my "style" if you will emerged. My mom and brother, inspired me to write. But the stronges influence was my 7th or 8th grade teacher Mr. May. We had a writing assignment and I wrote an explanatory poem of you will of my Wedding Fantasy Barbie Doll!! LOL He loved it but I was embarrassed to read it in front of the class. Underneath my BIG MOUTH, I'm really shy!! And I have a love for all things, both great and small. I love to look up at the sky and wonder what's God doing. I ponder the significance of trees and I marvel at the wind. Yes, I'm weird. AHAHAHA!

~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken."

I love to look up at the sky and wonder what's God doing. I ponder the significance of trees and I marvel at the wind

that was so dope & beautiful... and really made my aggrevated day peaceful to read. Welcome back guuurrrrllll!!!!!!!! thanx for comin =P


- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

thanks boo!! love to come here and sit a spell.
~~~~~~~~
When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken."

<--hostage situation--

Name: mylife aka angel

Location: los angeles

Age: 28

Website/audios/pics: www.myspace.com/okpmylife

Personal Info: (ethnicity, writing style, favorite things,Who or what inspired you to write, etc - white, emotional release poetry and people watching inspired short stories. i love documentaries, great books (and even not so great books sometimes, my iPod (music), and knowing that my life is getting better every day. My english teacher in high school inspired me to cultivate my writing. It is my catharthis, and so I'm happy that she did!

some days,
i can't breathe
with the weight

of the courage
of my convictions

the courage
to be human
to say the hard
things at what is
never going to be
the right time

to slowly wrap
my mind around
the fact that
my beliefs are
controversial

that what is called
inappropriate is only
my truth

the courage to embrace
contrast while others
question it

the courage to break
the surface of
the ocean that
is my pain

with every moment
that passes when
the most important
piece of me
is disjointed

the courage to
question criticism
and still accept
it's validity

the courage to
stand up for those
too broken to do it
for themselves

even when i
am one of those

i keep moving,
learning, struggling,
breathing through the ache

the controversy
that has been
my landscape
is my Sudan

and with courage,
i am still seeking
my nourishment
while my heart
longs for home

Name: Janelle Alise Freeman
Aka: Gemini Moon
Hometown: Allentown, PA

Hello all! Lovely to be with you today, tonight, and always! I've been comming to the boards for sometime now. I started writing when I was about, um maybe 9 or 10. I had lots to write about. Lots of angst, darkness, crazy stuff going on in my home. all kinds of goodies. I've been exploring my poetry and writing over the past few years, expirimenting with different styles and flow patterns. I love poetry about love, or lack there of. I think my poetry is best described as shakesphere -meets hiphop -meets ecentric urban- meets earthy goddess gypsy. :) Lets, see. I guess you could call me a bohemian, I have a ridiculous view of love and life in general. I work with children on the daily, so I have a tendency to speak very softly...tendency to mother a lot....tend to also want every one to "play nice." :)...Very traditional, old school kind of lady now that I think about it...Lets get to the writing!

Your smile is always hiding
from me
always nervous to shine bright
it sadeness me
to watch
as you frown
only to
to stop your lips from curling upward
while i am watching you
out of the corner of my eye

this will never do
I love to laugh and smile!

when i see you next I will smile
a big
silly
grin for you
maybe grab your ears
kiss you on the nose
and blow smoke out your eyes

Then,
you will not be able to give me
the sudo cold shoulder
you pretend to give

we can shadow each others' smiles
count each others teeth
and compare notes...
all while people stare
and watch
the
beutiful sad
yin
and the happy pretty
yang
swirling round
and
round
in happiness

Since I'm typically a *smiley* person -- I can appreciate this flow -- :)

I'm glad you're a part of our collabo this year -- Your presence is appreciated more than you know! -- ;)

aka: Nora E. Wolf
age: 20
background: i've been around on and off since 1999 when I was 14, orginally as the artist known as wolfie. my writing has been influenced by my upbringing and my education at boarding school and now at college.
i'm a history major and an art history minor, i've begun to dabble in french and i work as an interning curator. right now i'm working with 19th century silhouettes and mourning paintings. i love soul music and hip-hop, photography, history, art, europe, literature, freshman orientation, the honor code, and, of course, poetry.
i've been influenced heavily over the years by the wonderful artists on this board. i've been a bit of a ghost lately, but i love this collab so i've returned!
glad to see everything is alive and kicking.

We are all of out misdecisions and misjudgements:
Jumble and junk discarded and used
Down for the count and abused.
Indecised into adulthood
Forced in like my birthright
To give life.

To take life.

We are one in the same,
They shout,
destined to hell for our mistakes,

We are misjudgements.

We are unfit to live,
Says the young boy, scared in the shadow of his father,
A baby holding pictures of babies that never breathed.

We are hit by pickets,
damned before our life began.

We denied the right to life before We ever gave
before conception ever occurred in our wombs
for the wrongs never commited

We are all the same.

We are defined as faceless babies cast aside.


there is a story behind this piece. a few weeks ago, myself and most of the greek women on my campus were acousted outside our homes by pro-life protestors. we were being accused and abused for an act that the majority of us never committed.
i was also told that i was going to go to hell for getting an education, that was fun.

i loved this

the birthright part really got me

glad you decided to re-grace us with your presence

and please stick around this time

Glad you're kickin' it with us, Ms. Wolfie -- :9 -- *Nice Flow*

Name: January Martinez
Location:Hawaii...way out in the middle of the Pacific
Age:27

Personal Info: super mixed breed ..claiming humanity. Mother of an 8 yr old son who carry's the light so strong that his teachers are not sure what to do with him. This was my experience growing up in the public school system. We both share the type of creative fire that makes us want to be heard...want to express our concepts of truth...want to be funny and enjoy life...Being pressed to be quiet made the fire grow hotter and the juice of creativity boiled over into poetry. I began writing when I was 12 religously...though I do have great memories of being 6 and writing letters to my mom when I was angry with her Funny, I also remember spelling my stepdads name with a lower case B for Bill because I thought that starting out a name with a lower case letter was one of the biggest offences any one could give. REVOLUTION! Ahh..Through my journey I have revelations of beautiful and saddening things. Revelations of deep, powerful and Godlike things. My friends thought it funny that I would often start out sentences with "Hey guys, I had a revelation last night" So Bam! on stage I go by Mc Revelation....I write poetry when I am super charged by some great experience. Screenwriting has become another wonderful form of creativity that I am having the joy of learning..Coming to this board has been all about timing. Okay Player called me out one night at 3am when a poem jumped into a dream I was having. I've checked out the boards before...Big supporter of the artists...SHout out to the Lovely Jean Grae!!!...and the Fab DJ Bazarro!!!.......So here I am ....love the upliftment I see going on with the Okay Family.. Hey Stars, thanks for having me here. Bless!!

************************************************

My subject on
Controversy is: How "THEY" affect our societies through our youth.......



11 Years Old
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I've been here before
Lost in a maze of too many thoughts
Bound in a cage of unfeeling
Too much feeling
Ripping
Breaking
Hurting
Caring

I've been here before
11 years old
A Young
Sad
Angry
Little
Girl
Figuring it all out

World pains
Hunger pains
Anger pains
Jealousy about nothing real
For real

Books of Laughter
and confusion
I am seeking
Jah kingdom
Wading through the B.S. of Babylon
Trying to Trap my mind
with fancy cars
Expensive caviar
Cigars
and booze
Sexy women
in high healed boots

My mind's been tainted
I am fainted
on the smell
of your sweat
The brow you worked your bet

Slavery
Corporate take overs
Monopoly Makers
Tricking children
with your fake layovers
of niceness
Can you brighten this world
or will you continue
to rape the could
that would
If you gave Love a chance
Life is for Freedom's dance

But you're trying to hold me back
Trying to make me fat
and greedy
I am the needy
Needful of things
that set the youth free
We're tired of nonsense
We're tired of making you sense
how we are feeling
You will know us NOW
No more hiding

I AM AN ANGRY LITTLE GIRL
Eleven years old
You've raped me
and held me captive
of your Bad Brave
new world
I've curled up under
your foolish disguise
Now Babylon
YOU I despise
I will take your riches
and spoil your gold
Restore the Kingdoms
of old
and speak for us
until the story has been told
and told
and never forgotten.



Traaa Laa Laa...

Rev



umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

January.. were u born in January? If so, what day?
cuz im reppin the AQUARIUS! (Jan 31st)


and you got an 8 year old son thats ill cuz i do too! =)

anyway, your poem was real good. Had alot of brainstorming and views in there, appreciate your contribution and welcome to okp.. =)

much love...I'm a Cappy and Sade and I share the 16th as our bdays....Traaa Laa Laa wish I could sing like her since I am hooked on the mic like she is.

Isn't it wonderful raising a son?....My son is a hunk of a child (he fits in my tennis shoes!) and is bound to be a great man...I love the youth!!

...Being an outlet for this type of poetry is challenging and I appreciate the kindness and uplifting welcome.

I"m becoming a Okay Addict out in the middle of the pacific looking to reach out to other creative people. This is a great thing!

Bless!




umm.....umm...tasty beauty.....plump with life...thick with breath...soft caress....in you wisdom I delight....

January Martinez -- Love your name! -- *smiles*


Oh! -- And your flow was LOVE~LY too! -- :)

Thanks for the welcome. I am happy to be here with ya'll...thanks for sharing everytime...I'm lovin your ability to express through the word...Lookin forward to progressing with the Okay Family

Bless!!

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i'm not gon keep on mistreating me
i have decided to love myself.
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i shaved my head so u could
see how i feel ©3rd i

but i'm here.

good work ezz..

as usual.

it's a beautiful thing.

write about the topic! CONTROVERSY!


- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html
This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net

No males allowed!!!

It's Okay LADIES collabo! :P

(sigh) so why not?

gotta respect it nice going ladies

Ladies, thank you so much for this collabo!!

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