thats some straight cat n the hat shit...
get back on the level u were on before!
beat u at checkers? lol.. aight

throw your creativity in there! come on man!
all your aliterations (when u get your rhymes from a word) etc

nothing is worse than throwing random words in bars just so that shit would rhyme!
oh, and get off that ego shit! save it for the verse.. lol
pz
- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
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