He was just more coherent and smoother not to mention this line:

"I’m sensibly/endlessly/ spittin fire tremendously//
Metaphysically/ rhythmically/ slay your Tennessee/ tendencies//"

Good job to both though.

Soulbrotha,I didn't understand this rhyme scheme at the end(mistake?):

"U-u-u Say whaa? / Damage I cause is enough to break jaws/
Forget an OKP/I unearth your teeth from the Roots/
And diss-Band your face from the front page just to erase flaws…"